HVSA Origins

[Avatars Lord]

1. Ghouls don't move they just spawn around the Archimonde.
2. Rather than using Life Regeneration Aura for your supports use Unholy Aura with no movement speed so it can be visible.
3. The terrain is lacking severely. Check the tutorials to make a better terrain.
4. All the heroes are melee? That's odd.
5. You should make a list in the quest for the sound commands.


There is so much improvement you must make before this map can be a good one.

Your description must be in English and you should make a credit list.
Check these links:
Map Submission Rules
Advanced Terraining Tutorial
The Ultimate Beginners Terraining Tutorial

 

[HarryStigma]

Thanks for the suggestions, I already made some changes of what you mentioned.

 

[deepstrasz]

A credits list in the map description is mandatory. You can make use of this: Resources in Use by HVSA Origins | HIVE

Awaiting Update.

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R U L E S

Site Rules
Map Submission Rules


U P L O A D I N G - A - M A P

Video

M A P - D E S C R I P T I O N

Details

BB CODES
BB Codes | HIVE

MELEE MAPS
Description Guide - Melee Maps
Describing Your Melee Map
Melee Map Description Generator v1.3

MAPS IN GENERAL
The importance of a Description
Description Guide - Maps
Map Thread Guide
Map Description Making: Good & Bad
Map Description - Templates
Map Description Generator [1.2]

How to Add a Screenshot to your Map Description

ADDITIONAL NECESSARY INFORMATION

• A credits list in the map thread description is required where the names of the resource (models, skins, icons, spells, sound etc.) authors are mentioned along with the specific resource. It would be a luxury to have links leading to the used resources. Credits in the Quest Log would be appreciated too.
  
• A detailed changelog in the first post would be helpful to reviewers and notify fans about the newest implementations to your map.
  
• Map thread tags are important. Please use those that fit and not more or none.

M A P - C R E A T I O N - G U I D E S

Details

GENERAL MAPPING
A Beginner's Guide to Map Making
The Ultimate Beginners Terrain Tutorial
Advanced Terraining Tutorial
A Guideline to Terraining and the Hive's Terraining Section
Various Terraining Tips!
Basic Mapping Video Tutorial
WE Map Editor for Newbies!
The Path Of Proper Map Making - What to do and what should be avoided

MELEE MAPPING
How to create Melee Maps
General - Melee Maps like the Professionals
Competitive Melee Map
Melee mapping - The reasons behind common aspects of competitive 1v1 maps

PATHING
Pathing - Everything about it
[Terraining] Alternative Pathing Technique

LEAKS
Triggers - Memory Leaks and Custom Scripts

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[HarryStigma]

I work on it, but it will take time. Obviously I did not know the rules but I have all the disposition to make a good map.