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[Avatars Lord]

1. The terrain is lacking severely.
2. Arena could use some different height sizes so people could use it to their advantage.
3. It is not English and I assume the units had their original tooltip, therefore, I did not have any information about the units. You could write the stats (Attack Damage/Type/Speed, Armor, Health, Abilities and such)
4. Like the 3. one said: your map must be English.
5. Maybe a timer which shows the time before tourney because I did not have any clue what would happen and I waited for something to happen.

I liked the idea but your map needs a huge improvement to be enjoyable.

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[Deleted member 247165]

Arthas + some YU-GI-OH related picture. What's the reason behind this if you didn't use some things from that anime? Also, description is lacking.

 

[Avatars Lord]

You have updated the map twice but because of not having a change log I can't see all the changes you've made. Create a changelog.
Map Description
1. Terrain changes have not been made at all.
2. Still not in English.

 

[Deleted member 247165]

thats not an arthas/lichking picture on the right what ever it actually is

In the gameplay screenshots I meant. Look closer please.

 

[Itztalmatan]

Jajaja... im not an fond of anime, i never watch more that 10 episodes of yu gi oh; so i actually didnt get ideas from the anime but the card and the ps game. If you had tried the map could know what Arthas is doing there, its on a minigame!
About the terrain, i wanted to implemet some like the field modifier cards on the original game, but wasnt able to create a lake or some like so i relinquished on that idea, if you could redirect me to such a thread i would do it in the following weeks.
As soon as i get the game (warcraft 3) on english ill translate it, i simply copied and pasted, with some modifications, the units description into the items one. But you know what? if there is a way to make it a billingual map please redirect me to a post which explains how and ill do it.

 

[Deleted member 247165]

Jajaja... im not an fond of anime, i never watch more that 10 episodes of yu gi oh; so i actually didnt get ideas from the anime but the card and the ps game. If you had tried the map could know what Arthas is doing there, its on a minigame!
About the terrain, i wanted to implemet some like the field modifier cards on the original game, but wasnt able to create a lake or some like so i relinquished on that idea, if you could redirect me to such a thread i would do it in the following weeks.
As soon as i get the game (warcraft 3) on english ill translate it, i simply copied and pasted, with some modifications, the units description into the items one. But you know what? if there is a way to make it a billingual map please redirect me to a post which explains how and ill do it.

So you are not the original author?

 

[Avatars Lord]

So you are not the original author?

By copying I think he meant he copied the original units and did not edit it.

The triggers that change the terrain can cause desync so you should avoid that. I gave you some links on my first post, look at them.

 

[Deleted member 247165]

Can't now. Going to sleep. Tomorrow

 

[Itztalmatan]

Can't know. Going to sleep. Tomorrow

Too much anima could make you kind of halfwit, how you dare to claim it?

 

[Deleted member 247165]

Too much anima could make you kind of halfwit, how you dare to claim it?

???????

 

[ShadowMidas]

that is not yugioh map. the names are still default from WC3. the terrain seems to okay.

I will give 3/5.

 

[Deleted member 247165]

Description is still lacking. Might wanna do something about that

 

[Paillan]

While the description begins quite good, when it comes to how to play it just falls completely. The explanation on what has to be done is actually quite confusing.
I think you should also improve by adding some color and fond variety.
On and yeah, change minimap icon please.

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[Itztalmatan]

The map has changed a lot since the time those screenshots were taked, but the ones in there were whom helped me testing the map, the only credits i would give hence are to them...

 

[Paillan]

The map has changed a lot since the time those screenshots were taked, but the ones in there were whom helped me testing the map, the only credits i would give hence are to them...

Yet another person deceived by my review template. The part under the ============ line is a pasted part included in ALL my reviews with some handy links and basic tips.
I am starting to consider actually changing it.

 

[Itztalmatan]

Yet another person deceived by my review template. The part under the ============ line is a pasted part included in ALL my reviews with some handy links and basic tips.
I am starting to consider actually changing it.

Ok ill change the minimap icon.

 

[Paillan]

Map still posessed tons of spanish on it. It must be fully translated before it can even be considered for aproval.
This isn't really a card game map, it's "get summon items while running around". The essence of card games is turns, which to not exist in this map at all.

Until mayor changed are made

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[Paillan]

What is the difference between both maps besides a few kbs?

 

[deepstrasz]

Sorry @Paillan we shouldn't let maps in Pending for months.

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1. Fuerza should be Force.
2. Terrain looks bear even from the minimap.
3. Exclusively, Warcraft III material has been used but not really in a creative way. Buildings filled with the game's units.
4. Things look disorganized. You start seeing a bunch of buildings and know not what to do. A nearby patron is required but there's none.
5. Player 2 gets disconnected.

Overall, very unpolished. Please use Map Development until this becomes an actual beta.
It's functionality at this point is absent.

Substandard.

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