Cave Exploring - The statues

[deepstrasz]

1. Some of the text appears too fast before able to read the previous.
2. The jewel didn't disappear from the inventory so the Empress or her maidens didn't take it?
3. There's no premise or background on where you are, why, who are you and the like. I mean there seems to be in the quest log but a nice introductory cinematic scene would have been way more immersive.

All in all, quite lacking. Nothing's really happening. I thought there was some nice riddled trick but it's pretty obvious who the truth bearer is and you only need to write the name to win. First I thought you'd have to do quests for each statues to get more hints and stuff but no, not really.
Also, there's no exploration whatsoever, it's just a room, a big one if you will.

Simple.

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[Babarella]

1. Some of the text appears too fast before able to read the previous.
2. The jewel didn't disappear from the inventory so the Empress or her maidens didn't take it?
3. There's no premise or background on where you are, why, who are you and the like. I mean there seems to be in the quest log but a nice introductory cinematic scene would have been way more immersive.

All in all, quite lacking. Nothing's really happening. I thought there was some nice riddled trick but it's pretty obvious who the truth bearer is and you only need to write the name to win. First I thought you'd have to do quests for each statues to get more hints and stuff but no, not really.
Also, there's no exploration whatsoever, it's just a room, a big one if you will.

Simple.

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Map Description Making: Good & Bad
Map Description - Templates
Map Description Generator [1.2]

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Hey, thanks for the feedback.

1. Yeah, that´s a problem. I usually let the text fly over too fast. I´ll make it a bit slower.
2. I didn`t really think about that, but it makes sense to me, thanks.
3. A cinematic... I thought about that, but I stuck to the quest log... because I was a bit lazy x)

Of course it`s simple and probably quite easy, but I just made it for fun and then decided to upload it. I never wanted to go for anything grand. Just a simple and quick map. Maybe I´ll make it a bit more complicated in future, but for now, it`s everything I expected it to be.
- Babsi