A Sylvanas Apprendice

[Againstallodds]

I am in the early stages mid game of the map.
First impressions, starting with the opening dialogue, it feels plain and unengaging.
Not being able to micro skeletons is a disadvantage to say at least. Its certainly not fun
and in one or two cases i got blocked and almost died because of it (spider nest and bridge).
Map design is decent.
I see that its your first map so its understantable.
I dont think i ll finish this. I find myself disinterested in the game having played this for 45 min.
Having said that, rating it, i would consider my grade to be between 2-3/5 but since i am not commited
till the end of the game, i think i should not rate it.

 

[Herod]

Ty for your comment.. I think the gameplay is around 30min-40min... No one will aprove this map?????

 

[deepstrasz]

Apparently there's an uncredited resource.
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Also put in anything not made by you like custom music, sounds etc.

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[deepstrasz]

Set to Lacking for no crediting over more than a year.