Winter Isle

[deepstrasz]

Wood is kind of scarce in main bases and there are some holes in these woods.
Mines for expansions are too near each other. Three in a line on each side. Maybe have those two pairs which are closest, have red camps or place stronger creeps like magic immune golems or fliers like dragons.
Rush isn't quite fast and expanding with Militia at the closest mine could be problematic with the guardians being magic immune and casting slow and stunning.

Awaiting Update.

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[Wardota2 Gamer]

Wood is kind of scarce in main bases and there are some holes in these woods.
Mines for expansions are too near each other. Three in a line on each side. Maybe have those two pairs which are closest, have red camps or place stronger creeps like magic immune golems or fliers like dragons.
Rush isn't quite fast and expanding with Militia at the closest mine could be problematic with the guardians being magic immune and casting slow and stunning.

Awaiting Update.

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Description Guide - Maps
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Map Description - Templates
Map Description Generator [1.2]

How to Add a Screenshot to your Map Description

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• A credits list in the map thread description is required where the names of the resource (models, skins, icons, spells, sound etc.) authors are mentioned along with the specific resource. It would be a luxury to have links leading to the used resources. Credits in the Quest Log would be appreciated too.
  
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Thank you so much for the review deepstrasz finally. Will fix it soon!

 

[Wardota2 Gamer]

Wood is kind of scarce in main bases and there are some holes in these woods.
Mines for expansions are too near each other. Three in a line on each side. Maybe have those two pairs which are closest, have red camps or place stronger creeps like magic immune golems or fliers like dragons.
Rush isn't quite fast and expanding with Militia at the closest mine could be problematic with the guardians being magic immune and casting slow and stunning.

Awaiting Update.

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MELEE MAPS
Description Guide - Melee Maps
Describing Your Melee Map
Melee Map Description Generator v1.3

MAPS IN GENERAL
The importance of a Description
Description Guide - Maps
Map Thread Guide
Map Description Making: Good & Bad
Map Description - Templates
Map Description Generator [1.2]

How to Add a Screenshot to your Map Description

ADDITIONAL NECESSARY INFORMATION

• A credits list in the map thread description is required where the names of the resource (models, skins, icons, spells, sound etc.) authors are mentioned along with the specific resource. It would be a luxury to have links leading to the used resources. Credits in the Quest Log would be appreciated too.
  
• A detailed changelog in the first post would be helpful to reviewers and notify fans about the newest implementations to your map.
  
• Map thread tags are important. Please use those that fit and not more or none.

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MELEE MAPPING
How to create Melee Maps
General - Melee Maps like the Professionals
Competitive Melee Map
Melee mapping - The reasons behind common aspects of competitive 1v1 maps

PATHING
Pathing - Everything about it
[Terraining] Alternative Pathing Technique

LEAKS
Triggers - Memory Leaks and Custom Scripts

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Done Done and Done! @deepstrasz

If it still needs improvement just tell and I will update it as soon as I get the review

Here's the Update:

Main Changes
-Fixed the trees spacing
-There are now 6 Green Creep Camps instead of 8
-There are now 14 Orange Creep Camps instead of 10
-There are now 8 Red Camps Inlcuding the Goldmines in your base camp if not filled by player instead of 4
-Terrain has been reworked
-Changed the Red Creep Camp's creep in a Granite Golem with two Rock Golem's in all of the Red Camp's
-Changed the Creep Camp in the Goblin Merchant to an Orange Creep Camp instead of Green

Some Changes
-the cliff heights has been fixed (in all main bases)

 

[deepstrasz]

Changes made,

Approved.

Be sure to save the map on default melee patch (and check if all Tavern heroes appear in the game; if not leave it on latest melee patch) because now it looks as if the map is not melee. Did you change any object data, doodads etc.?

(previous comments: Winter Isle)

 

[Wardota2 Gamer]

Changes made,

Approved.

Be sure to save the map on default melee patch (and check if all Tavern heroes appear in the game; if not leave it on latest melee patch) because now it looks as if the map is not melee. Did you change any object data, doodads etc.?

(previous comments: Winter Isle)

hmmm let me check on that.....

Thank you so much for the approval deepstrasz!!