Valeshire

[Zucth]

Sadly it's not a red map... No cake for me this time then.
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1. trees / doodads gap are noticeable here again. There is a bit too much going on around Lab.
2. not a reasonable position for critter I guess? Also feel like you randomly place them no symmetrical involve. (Most of the time critter were place around for Undead skelly item)
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Notice note: Some might say you should be able to build or put a tree near the tavern for quick brought back. This logic is a must for Mercenary camp & Lab at some point.

 

[deepstrasz]

It's nice but the flatness is real and tad square.
Play more with terrain height, cliffs and doodad ornamentation. Looks more like a Warcraft II map for now.
Also, proper melee naming (file and thread title) would be nice: (2)Valeshire.

Simple.

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[Panda]

Give some love to the terrain! Thats the best part