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Terraining Contest #13 - Fictional World Wonder

Discussion in 'Contest Archive' started by fladdermasken, Jul 19, 2011.

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  1. Jazztastic

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    Speeeeaking of English, I don't want to be a dick or anything, but you need to put a space after a comma, otherwise, it makes it hard to read

    @Risk.frishers, I like the sun and the sky effects. It does look kindof small though, and not a lot of variation. Also, the hill containing a giant ass tree spam needs to go. I'd suggest more of a desert-y feel (seeing as the blocks are from Sandbox in halo 3 :ogre_datass:). But those are justs my suggestions.
     
  2. fladdermasken

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    Ditch the hill (make room for some background and detail), get some work done on the tiles, add some enviroment and in general shape it up :p
    - The lighting is too well done to go with such a crappy scenery.
     
  3. KayS

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    I'm an artist, not an english philologist...
     
  4. Risk.frishers

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    I see, well, it's suppose to be like a Aztec temple, thx very much for the suggestions, I was really anxious about the ligthning tbh...
     
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    Put it on a hill or create something which a depth in the background that gives it an epic feeling?
     
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    Personal taste,it's fine for me
     
  7. Bugz

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    Umm... No?
    It's a grammatical mistake.
     
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    How about staying ON-TOPIC? >_>
    Risk, that looks too simple.
    Work on it more! Add more stuff to it!
    Make the environment more pretty.
     
  10. Risk.frishers

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    I've changed the whole concept of my wonder, and i think this wonder will stun all of you! Hopefully...
     
  11. Bugz

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    Uhm.. no :3, unless you saved on another file earlier?
     
  12. fladdermasken

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    Patiently awaiting more entries. Having a blast doing it.
     
  13. Risk.frishers

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    Oh forgot to ask, is it possible to remove my first entry ? I didn't like it, I've changed my whole idea basicly.
     
  14. Bugz

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    Update it.
     
  15. fladdermasken

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    You may edit your entry however and whenever you see fit: as long as you have posted a final submission before the deadline everything is peaches.
     
  16. Risk.frishers

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    Well, here it is, I think this one was a even bigger fail, but since it's 1 day left till I move to Hong Kong I'll take a small break and play HoN. I'll probably start terraining again whilst in Hong Kong.

    Observate that this is a WiP.
     

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    Interesting .. :()
     
  18. KayS

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    Mmm... U.F.O?
     
  19. Bugz

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    then it should be in the air right?
     
  20. Risk.frishers

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    It is in the air and itlooks like a U.F.O but I call it a fictional wonder.
     
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