Stranded

[Knight of Arsford]

Your description is lacking information, and although this was intended to be a Terrain/Template map, it doesn't hurt to add more background into what the map is about, and not just one sentence. Tell us in what kinda maps do you envision this terrain used.

Terrain-wise, this looks like something that any decent mapper can do in less than 15 mins. or so, and there's really nothing unique in it that other mappers can't do. I can see it be used in a cinematic or a tiny survival map, but even then, why should they have to download this template when they can make their own island easily?

It can be useful, maybe by a few, but I'll leave judgment to the mods.

 

[AGKRegal102]

Your description is lacking information, and although this was intended to be a Terrain/Template map, it doesn't hurt to add more background into what the map is about, and not just one sentence. Tell us in what kinda maps do you envision this terrain used.

Terrain-wise, this looks like something that any decent mapper can do in less than 15 mins. or so, and there's really nothing unique in it that other mappers can't do. I can see it be used in a cinematic or a tiny survival map, but even then, why should they have to download this template when they can make their own island easily?

It can be useful, maybe by a few, but I'll leave judgment to the mods.

Yes, you're right, and what do you want to improve?

EDIT: After the ship was sink by a big waves or tsunami, the bandits arrives the nearby island.

If you want to rescue? The Goblin Zeppelin searches for the survival island to rescue the bandits.

 

[kadakash1]

I don't get what is the point of this map.
It's too simple even for a template, and even for something so simple it has no effort put to it.

 

[deepstrasz]

Awaiting Update based on @Knight of Arsford's review.

 

[kadakash1]

It's still a tiny island with very ""minimalistic"" detalis lol. Not even worth uploading tbh.

 

[deepstrasz]

Way too simple.
Substandard.

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