[Campaign] Rise of The Scarlet Crusade

[Daffa]

^make sense, maybe you rushed it huy.

 

[MasterTrainer]

Maybe you should try to take things a little slow, or maybe form a team- never mind.

 

[Binsu]

Now it really makes sense and huy, please dont rush this for the sake of us testing it but for the sake of your map's quality. SO as we said, the improvements needed based on us, testing on the game:

• Grammars. There are many mispelled words and also some tenses were used incorrectly
• Terrain. There is still some points where the terrain is not that appealing. Likely it is due to the bad mixing of tiles or empty atmosphere
• Cinematic. This comes with the poor grammar (no offense) and also to add, some of the camera movements in cinematics are quite choppy and also the timing in some of your cinematic is quite bad.

And of course we will help you on this one!

 

[MasterTrainer]

I hope the second testing will be better than this one!

 

[Daffa]

I hope so as well

 

[MasterTrainer]

^ Agree. =D

@hy60vn promise us the next test would be better.

 

[huy60vn]

Check Log tab:
- 10/6: Release Alpha Version for all.

 

[MasterTrainer]

Wow... only a few weeks away =D

 

[Daffa]

Nice, hope this can be better

 

[MasterTrainer]

^ Me too =D

 

[huy60vn]

- Congratulations that Rise of the Scarlet Crusade had 3000 views!
- Upload to Map Section: July 31st 2013

- I'm sorry about tester Footman16. His computer is error when he opened my campaign. I'll give him other versions.
- I don't get EliTe's reviews yet. Try to fast, if you can.
- Congratulations for your good job: Hell_Master, MasterTrainer, Forsaken and Daffa the Mage, you gave me your reviews after testers' day.
- New screenshots:

In Choose Campaign

In game

In game

In game

In those screenshots, there must be some mistakes grammars. You could help me fix them. More screenshots will upload soon.
- My project is 90% done. Thanks for your views. After two days, I've seen the views, every time it's increases.
- If you like my skins I've made, check "Skins by huy60vn" tab. New skins will upload on June 1st 2013.
- Don't forget to check "Log" tab and "Map Progress" tab. I usually change them if I've done them all.
- Anyways, thanks to all people in credits.

Small messages

+ Small messages to mods, admins:
- If you don't like this project, you can close this thread.
- If I've done something bad (spam, or swear,...), negative rep all, and show your comments.
- Sorry about late reply, and not... good time, but may you can accept this.

~huy60vn~

 

[Binsu]

@huy60vn

Nice minimap image and also the cinematic screenshots but you have some wrong grammars again. And I cant even understand, how you narrate what they said.

You could telle me what each transmissions means and maybe I'll try to help you with it. =)

Again, nice job! +4 REP!

 

[MasterTrainer]

@huy60vn Okay you're definitely improving.

But some transmissions need a little improving regarding verb tenses. I.e. the third picture, he should say 'have a counter attack' not had, because you used 'are', 'are in danger'. Also on that last sentence, it should be: '...don't have a chance to stand against them'

Also on that last picture, try to darken the tone and color of the fog, because I think Sylvannas is in a bad mood. <- this is under the assumption that the current ambiance of the story is revolving around Sylvannas and the other udnead, such as dreadlords.

 

[Footman16]

Here are a few grammar fixes for you huy:

First screenshot: "Haha, Althein this will be your last breath"

Second: "Sylvanas counter attacked our forces and now we are in great danger. She plans to attacks us from two roads and we can't possibly stand against her."

Third: "This is not over Varimathras... You may have crushed me, but this war is not finished. I will return for you, Demon! The Forsaken belong to their Queen."

 

[Binsu]

Maybe suggesting too is not that bad:

First Game Screenie:

"Take your last breath, Althein!"

Second Game Screenie:

"Sylvanas is counter attacking us and we are in grave danger! She also plans to attack from the two roads. We dont stand a change against them!

Third Game Screenie:

"This is not over yet, Varimathras! You may have defeated me but that is not the time for you to celebrate your victory! I will come back for you... I will come back to kill you. The Forsaken will be always be by my control!

 

[MasterTrainer]

^ @Second Game Screenie: should be "Sylvannas is countering our attack / counter attacking us..." because you are using 'are' and not 'were'. If you used 'were' then you can use counter attacked, not counteredattacked.

 

[Binsu]

^ @Second Game Screenie: should be "Sylvannas is countering our attack / counter attacking us..." because you are using 'are' and not 'were'. If you used 'were' then you can use counter attacked, not counteredattacked.

Understood, changed!

 

[Daffa]

My turn

First Game Screenshot :

"[Whisper]take your last breath Althein"

You can remove the whisper part

I'll post the rest later.

 

[Footman16]

He can use counter attacked as long as he adds a now between the are and in.

Edit: wow three posts at the same time lol.

@Hell master: it is still wrong it should be "Sylvanas is counter attacking us...

 

[MasterTrainer]

That's what I thought too, but he didn't so, eh.

I've never seen consecutive posts with a 1 minute interval before. Lol indeed.

 

[Footman16]

I am really surprised Huy added me in the credits list because I didn't think I'd helped him that much compared to others.

So, I have decided to try and help him more with grammar and stuff like that in my spare time.

 

[MasterTrainer]

Good for you =D

 

[huy60vn]

Oh no, sorry! I'm late. My computer had a problem with interent. Let's countine our plan now...
Thanks to all grammars. I'm interested. Sorry, Footman16, I'm not really decide about your computer. Nope, next version will give to you if you can.
The screenshots are came from chapter two. Tomorrow I'll upload about chapter six, part one, two and three.
Also I have a plan to all of people: Do you want to become it into yours?Do you want to lead an army created by yourself? Or do you want play it as a RPG game?

 

[MasterTrainer]

It would be cool if we can create our own army, and not the default army you created. It gives us more challenge for our imagination.

 

[Footman16]

I think it should stick to the RTS standard warcraft 3 Blizzard gameplay. Surely this far into the completion of the campaign you should've decided by now? I'm just curious because I think if you have done most of the campaign RPG then you should stick to RPG but if you've done the campaign so far in RTS then you should stick to RTS.

 

[huy60vn]

Thanks for your comments. Because my project is nearly done. Hope I finished all.
Footman16, you're a good reviewer, I + 2 rep to you, and good luck on your project.

 

[Footman16]

Thanks a lot the first campaign in the series "Conquest Of An Island" is almost finished and the next campaign includes the Scarlet Crusade. They don't play a massive role in it but they do have a few chapters where they appear.

Maybe after playing your campaign I could base some of the events in mine on the exploits of yours. For example if in yours the Scarlet Crusade take over Southshore then in my campaign that could appear. Of course I would ask your permission first.

Thanks for the rep and I've been meaning to give you some for the skins and something else which I forget but I need to "spread some rep" before I can so sorry about that. If you need any help with grammar, spelling or language just ask me and I will help as much as I can.

 

[Forsaken]

Terrain

Well, the terrain is so better then i have see time ago... but still need so many work.

Gameplay

The gameplay is really nice quests, but the difficult of the campaign in so hard.

Icons,Itens and Spells

The icons is nice, but have some units that have diffent icon for the model, the itens i don't have see.
and spell i don't have see any custom only re-edited Blizzard spell
perhaps some custom spell is really nice for the gameplay

Heros and Storyline

The heros,is nice, but u must give more characteristics for them
The stotyline sounds good, but you should express yourself better.

Bugs

I have find litte bugs, like in the cinematcs, the some units don't face themself.
and have a Interlude that never finish ...

Overall
is a really nice campaign, just need work in some others things,like the units and buildings

 

[MasterTrainer]

^ Not only that; when the hero transcends to a new chapter his stats are reset

 

[huy60vn]

Perhaps, a little late, but okay, I get and will fix them all.

 

[MasterTrainer]

@huy60vn, I think you should handle the game chaches first... or if you have already, thanks!

 

[huy60vn]

Thank you. I rememberred that each campaign needed game cache.
More comments? Reviewers? and People in Credits?

Off-topic

I'm boring ~_~, it's a long time I don't see EliTe's review, what happened to him?

 

[MasterTrainer]

Don't worry about EliTe. Maybe he's just busy doing something else. Not every once can stay active in a thread.

Oh and the reviewers will come in time, and will so the comments.

Also, you forgot to close your

Hidden

tag.

 

[Daffa]

Off-Topic

He's dead [Elite, if you see this, this is a joke]

On-Topic :
I
Think
Everything
Is
Good

 

[MasterTrainer]

Everything is going smoothly.

 

[Daffa]

Yep, just need to wait a bit more for the next parts

 

[MasterTrainer]

That reminds me: what is to be expected in the next test?

I have a feeling this has been mentioned, but I just can't remember when or how.

 

[Daffa]

You should thank me for reminding you

Okay, back to topic, what are we going to get in our next test?

 

[MasterTrainer]

I thought I already did.

I forgot to add this to my previous post: "@huy60vn"

 

[Daffa]

XD

That's fine, modify it then

 

[Binsu]

As what MT said, game cache is needed. You wouldnt want to see your hard works go to waste in each chapter :b

 

[MasterTrainer]

Yeah lol. I remember when I used God Mode on chapter 1 I reached like level 10 (oh btw hy60vn you should increase the level cap) but then after chapter 1 I became level 1 again lol.

Truly lol.

 

[Daffa]

^both of them are correct, think if you work from level 1 to level 100 and then reverted back to level 1, u will go mad right?

 

[MasterTrainer]

Mad? Heck I'll exit the game.

 

[Daffa]

If I were you, I will destroy my PC xD

Here we go.... Off Topic Time!!

 

[MasterTrainer]

Back on topic, huy60vn, any thoughts here?

I just don't want to go off topic again.

 

[Daffa]

@MT
Okay then

@Huy
Any Big Updates, also, when the next test commences?

 

[huy60vn]

Check Log tab: after 27/5, I'll have updates second time.
The level from current to level 1, that's not have game cache.
Maxmium level is 18, but Morgan is level 15.

 

[MasterTrainer]

I don't think you can put level camps on specific units, unless you did it by triggers.

Also, you need to have a game cache bro.

 

[Daffa]

I think he meant Althein level max = 18, meanwhile Morgan's Max is 15.

Also, game Cache, good thing I don't notice I will lost my stats when I playing this, else I will end up breaking my computer into piece of garbages