[Campaign] Rise of The Scarlet Crusade

[Binsu]

Hey, there played the map and I must say it is qute hard. There is really in need to use God Mode due to it being veru hard. By the way, here is my review:

[+] Good Points:
-Really good terrain but I think your terrain has problem sometimes looks perfect and sometimes normal. At some point, you lack proper detailing and at other point, terrain looks fine.
-I like the custom skins you used for the Hero and the units but please do avoid using hero models on units. A hero models are models that has glows.

[-] Bad Points:
-The campaign is too hard. Many events in the game, you will have to avoid because of running through enemies.
-Your way of telling stories is quite confusing. Well, the first reason I guess is the poor grammar... No offense!
-I do not like to say this but you should really improve your grammar, of course we will help you. And not only in grammar but you have many mispelled words.
-The game is confusing. Why are we enemies with Scaret Onslaught by the way? Or is it really mean like that?

[] Suggestions:
-Dont use hero models to unit models. Looks bad if you ask me.
-The campaign is too hard and I still have to cheat just to win through Chapters.
-The story is quite confusing well, it is due to the poor grammar but dont worry we will help you!
-Not only in grammar that you have problem but you used some words incorrectly and also you mispelled some words.

 

[huy60vn]

Hard game! *_* Ok ok, I'll reduce it later.
About using units by heroes model, I'm working on it.
Grammars are having a lot of trouble... To reduce this, I must start again.
@MasterTrainer:
WHAT? Unprotected? But... I can't.... The thieves may steal it!

 

[Binsu]

Hard game! *_* Ok ok, I'll reduce it later.
About using units by heroes model, I'm working on it.
Grammars are having a lot of trouble... To reduce this, I must start again.
@MasterTrainer:
WHAT? Unprotected? But... I can't.... The thieves may steal it!

Yes, you will have to go through Chapters again and fix the mispelled words and incorrect used words. But as we said, we will help you!

 

[MasterTrainer]

Hard game! *_* Ok ok, I'll reduce it later.
About using units by heroes model, I'm working on it.
Grammars are having a lot of trouble... To reduce this, I must start again.
@MasterTrainer:
WHAT? Unprotected? But... I can't.... The thieves may steal it!

I can't help you as much if you don't send me the terrain. I can only be as half as helpful. At this rate I can only fix the grammar effectively, because there are a hell lot of things to fix with your terrain (<- may be exaggerated)

 

[huy60vn]

I'm sorry, but I can't send unprotected version to you.
I checked all of your comments, both Hell_Master. Trying to fix.

 

[MasterTrainer]

Well, understandable. After you fix what you can, post some screenshots.

 

[huy60vn]

Maybe, both other chapters is working in progress.
Also, over 300 posts. What should I do? Do I need to clean this thread?

 

[Binsu]

Maybe, both other chapters is working in progress.
Also, over 300 posts. What should I do? Do I need to clean this thread?

Lol, why are you so afraid of your project having +300 posts, mine has 476 and still nothing is happening.

 

[huy60vn]

Er,... We are spamming too much. :|

 

[MasterTrainer]

It's not spamming if everything is posted on topic and in order.

A spam would contain these:
dfsgsfgsfd
hello!!!!?EFGE
gadskjfldsf
bUMP
Bump

...and many more

 

[huy60vn]

Hmm... What about EliTe and Daffa the Mage, and the others?

 

[MasterTrainer]

What do you mean? Do you men their review? If that;s what you meant maybe they're still testing, or haven't tested it yet.

 

[huy60vn]

You are right.
In the time for waiting for EliTe and Daffa the Mage, we'll start on working again.
Also does Scarlet Crusade have flying units, if so, what's its name?

 

[MasterTrainer]

I don' know; the Scarlet Flight, the Scarlet Wing, the Scarlet Air Force?

 

[Daffa]

My Review - Chapter One - Alpha State

well, I'm going to give a short review, since I'm going to play with my lil bro, also, I'm not done yet.

Loading Screen

is the pitch black intended?

also typos here :

Screenshot

builded is wrong, the correct one is built

Screenshot

Glneas is wrong, it's Gilneas
it's prepare, not pepare [I think it's pepper xD]
it's lead the not leader to

Screenshot

seems somebody accidentally typo the go and to word making it gp and tp xD

Honestly, I want to become a Grammar Nazi now xD

 

[neo_sluf]

Ok it is a Dragonhawk Rider cause

A Scarlet Crusade is an alliance of High Elves and Humans.. High Elves are in magic while Humans are in weapons..

Just look at the model it has a human armor and a magical attack..

 

[huy60vn]

First Picture: Will find anothers.
Second Picture: What? I don't make like this. My computer doesn't appear this one.
Third Picture: Will fix soon.
Fourth Picture: Fix soon, both wrong tips "By MasterTrainer, Hell_Master and Daffa the Mage".
Okay, everybody can tell to me.

@neo_sluf: Okay, okay, don't talk again... I knew that.

 

[MasterTrainer]

@Daffa Nice! You actually turned Hell_Master's and my general observations into somethnig more visual =D

 

[Daffa]

First Picture: Will find anothers.
Second Picture: What? I don't make like this. My computer doesn't appear this one.
Third Picture: Will fix soon.
Fourth Picture: Fix soon, both wrong tips "By MasterTrainer, Hell_Master and Daffa the Mage".
Okay, everybody can tell to me.

first picture : I presume there was an image there?
the second picture is the text that appear when you approeach the cathedral [I forgot the spelling].

@MasterTrainer

I love reviewing with proofs,simple but effective, that way the author can see the mistake themselves

 

[MasterTrainer]

I would've put up some pictures also, but when laziness strikes you become too lazy to fight it.

Anyways despite all the bugs we've found (I don't know if they were bugs, but for now, let's take it under the assumption that the errors are bugs) you still make a great campaign, huy60vn! I love the storyline btw, brings out the scarlet in the campaign.

 

[huy60vn]

@Daffa the Mage:
I've got all your comments.
@MasterTrainer:
Eh... Thanks yours answering... I'm still not making a great campaign, but people always told that it's good.

 

[MasterTrainer]

Obviously it won't be great, not until you finish it.

So, when will you release the next screenshots?

 

[huy60vn]

on 25/5. :0 3 days left.
I've learned how to create a skin now . I was so happy, I can create new skins by myself.

 

[MasterTrainer]

You should be proud. I would be too if I ever knew how.

 

[Daffa]

That was fast D:
Where did you learn?

 

[huy60vn]

I've learned when I knew how to use Adobe Photoshop - A special tool can make anything, change color, and other stuffs. Then I found a BLP Laboratory by Shadow Daemon in Tools Section, which can convert images into BLP.
That is all. I don't know how many people know AdobePhotoshop, it was so helpful in pictures and skins.
EDIT: Mods can't approved my skins, but It will helpful in other maps.

 

[Daffa]

Thanks

Back to topic :

@Huy
Keep the project up mate, will wait for the update
Also, why you're worried?
@MT
Make sense...

 

[MasterTrainer]

I never knew all that I needed was BLP laboratory; I had the Photoshop, who knew I was 50% on mastering skinning.

@Daffa
Okay.

 

[huy60vn]

I'm worried about our thread. We are waiting for EliTe, the testers, too.
Why doesn't he be back? Over 9.00 p.m, but not any answers.
I must get all testers' comments, to make campaign be better, and more skins will approved.

 

[Daffa]

Elite maybe busy [and me almost going to sleep by now], but I'm sure he's back quickly, that's how reviewers work, from fast to slow ones.

I just hope he bring better review

 

[MasterTrainer]

I experienced this with EliTe too. He said, and I quote, "I have a life too, and I;m busy sometimes."

 

[huy60vn]

Okay, thanks to all helpers. Helpful with EliTe, I decided to him, he is a good man.
ADDED:
Credits: More Skins and Model Creator (just forgot them)
Trying to fix:
- Campaign Previews
- Floating Building in Chapter 1.
- Wrong Grammars in all chapters.
- Reduce Diffculty (All people confused by this problem @_@, both me, can't victory)
- Remember in chapter 1 and chapter 3 have a secret. Find them and you will won without using God Modes
- More descriptions about enemies with Scarlet Onslaught (Let's explain now, Althein's forces knew in history, that over years ago, A dreadlord, Mal'Ganis, defeated by Arthas. Nobody know that Mal'Ganis still approved. Althein was worried about back to Northrend is in trapped. In Mal'Ganis invisble from, he possesses Barean Westwind - Scarlet Onslaught Commander... No one knew that problem, after Althein disappeared...
More storys will come... (In real life, we call that "wrong mutual misunderstanding")

 

[Daffa]

Actually I think in chapter one we can exploit Althein's Mirror image [just hard micro]

 

[MasterTrainer]

Oh right you should make the intro cinematic in chapter 1 a little longer, and maybe add more details there.

 

[huy60vn]

@Daffa:
Okay, I'll tell you:
- Chapter 1: Try to use Althein's Mirror Images near trees. There is a machine like catapult. Use them to destroy the trees near Forsaken's main base.
- Chapter 3: Try to kill Shade of Crusades in first location. The trees will disappeared. Also use a small unit to over mountains.
In the end, find the truth key in the middle of that land.
- Chapter 4: Cut down trees. Lots of funny with them .
- Chapter 5: Attack with Morgan, don't attack by yourself, you can be kill anytime.
- Chapter 8: Don't be confused in the darkness. Try to move near torch, or lanterns, and find hidden forests.
- Chapter 9: Find a new gold mine as fast as you can, because if you stand too long, you will be die.
@MasterTrainer
I can't make more cinematics in chapter 1, but I can create more secrets and items.

 

[Daffa]

^lol, you spoil the secrets to all readers and viewers xD

 

[MasterTrainer]

Oh I also forgot in Chapter 3 after I destroyed a Black Citadel, a Moon Key was dropped. After I picked it up it disappeared from my inventory. Why is that?

Also that would be a good idea to add more secrets and items.

 

[huy60vn]

Game is too hard, I have no choice than reveal the secrets and tips.
Chapter 3: That problem? Is the gate opening?

 

[Daffa]

Make sense, maybe add more, just give them one and hide the rest

 

[MasterTrainer]

Okay never mind what I said. When I got stuck at Chapter 3, it was near the bottom of the map, in an undead base, near some trees. I tried to go above that place but only the spear throwers and the footmen can advance, Althein was left behind the trees.

 

[huy60vn]

@Daffa the Mage:
Hehe, fine

Hidden

@MasterTrainer:
That map is errored. I need to create pathing blockers upon them.
Also does the gate open?

 

[MasterTrainer]

No.. well I'm not sure. I can't open it by attacking.

 

[huy60vn]

Okay. I'll fix it.

 

[MasterTrainer]

I do love this phase of a project; learning from your mistakes. That's what makes a project successful =D

 

[huy60vn]

My mistakes? Do you mean... grammars?

 

[MasterTrainer]

My mistakes? Do you mean... grammars?

Well, yes, but you also messed up some of your terrain as what we mentioned before, and there were still some bugs in the game, hence, mistakes.

 

[huy60vn]

The first project with simple wrong :3
Look like we are learning English again, same as in school. :B

 

[Daffa]

Good Going, this thread has about 3 pages/day xD

 

[MasterTrainer]

I just thought about this now: don't you think hy60vn, that you might have created many errors because you have rushed t?

 

[huy60vn]

Yes, maybe. But that's not all.
And, when this project is completed, that so hard to say :3