Renegade

[trebla ratilla]

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-lack of description just add information, screenshot,changelog = to know if there's some changers in your map, credits = if you use custom models
-add several screenshot
-why the units already in the game? you should train them and you must construct building aside from that there's no gold mine. i think this is not an altered melee
-the numbers of each player is not equal, some players have less units and some of them so much units
-the terrain is good but you need to improve it a little bit

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[Paillan]

Please don't use imgur for your images. The hive has an image database for a reason, we can't be sure your images will stay there.

 

[trebla ratilla]

Please don't use imgur for your images. The hive has an image database for a reason, we can't be sure your images will stay there.

some reason of this they really confuse about the screenshot tutorial. i think hope someone will make another tutorial about screenshot

 

[Vesperius]

Please don't use imgur for your images. The hive has an image database for a reason, we can't be sure your images will stay there.

yeah sorry i will try to use hive system, its my first time using hive and i find it really confusing

Spoiler: Notes

-lack of description just add information, screenshot,changelog = to know if there's some changers in your map, credits = if you use custom models
-add several screenshot
-why the units already in the game? you should train them and you must construct building aside from that there's no gold mine. i think this is not an altered melee
-the numbers of each player is not equal, some players have less units and some of them so much units
-the terrain is good but you need to improve it a little bit

==============================================================

If you want a better description this will help you:

Map description threads

Description Guide - Melee Maps
Description Guide - Maps
Map Description - Templates
Melee Map Description Generator v1.3
Map Description Generator [1.2]
BB Codes | HIVE

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Thank you for the guides, as for the gold,no gold issue. the map is based on maps like medieval zombie invasion and its designed so the undead are a lot more powerful than humans. essentially its micro vs macro and humans have to work together to survive. For that reason i created faction events to make up for differences in number.

 

[trebla ratilla]

Thank you for the guides, as for the gold,no gold issue. the map is based on maps like medieval zombie invasion and its designed so the undead are a lot more powerful than humans. essentially its micro vs macro and humans have to work together to survive. For that reason i created faction events to make up for differences in number.

your welcome mate! your map is amazing all you need to do is to develop it further

 

[deepstrasz]

Map file name is vers23.
The author is set to unknown.

1. No loading screen description.
2. Eric Lionheart's spells have missing tooltips.
3. Footmen don't have Defend researched. The Steam Tank doesn't have Barrage researched if even meant to be used.
4. Can Magic Sentry be researched?
5. The map is partially visible from the start (fog of war).

Man I don't know, seems pretty simple and chaotic.
What is the role of the factions? The undead seem to only constantly summon one type of unit. The red human group has the most units from the start.

Awaiting Update.

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Screenshots could attract more players to download your work. Make the best of them.

A credits list is required where the names of the resource (models, skins, icons, spells, sound etc.) authors are mentioned along with the specific resource. It would be a luxury to have links leading to the used resources. Credits in the Quest Log would be appreciated.

A detailed changelog in the first post would be helpful to reviewers and notify fans about the newest implementations to your map.

To make your work run smoother, fix the so called leaks: Triggers - Memory Leaks and Custom Scripts

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[Vesperius]

Map file name is vers23.
The author is set to unknown.

1. No loading screen description.
2. Eric Lionheart's spells have missing tooltips.
3. Footmen don't have Defend researched. The Steam Tank doesn't have Barrage researched if even meant to be used.
4. Can Magic Sentry be researched?
5. The map is partially visible from the start (fog of war).

Man I don't know, seems pretty simple and chaotic.
What is the role of the factions? The undead seem to only constantly summon one type of unit. The red human group has the most units from the start.

Awaiting Update.

===================================

Always check/recheck the Map Submission Rules! (Map Submission Rules)

These will help make a better description:

Map description threads

Description Guide - Melee Maps
Description Guide - Maps
Map Description - Templates
Melee Map Description Generator v1.3
Map Description Generator [1.2]
BB Codes | HIVE

Screenshots could attract more players to download your work. Make the best of them.

A credits list is required where the names of the resource (models, skins, icons, spells, sound etc.) authors are mentioned along with the specific resource. It would be a luxury to have links leading to the used resources. Credits in the Quest Log would be appreciated.

A detailed changelog in the first post would be helpful to reviewers and notify fans about the newest implementations to your map.

To make your work run smoother, fix the so called leaks: Triggers - Memory Leaks and Custom Scripts

If you want more reviews, come here:
The Grand Review Exchange!

Thanks for fedback, mostly map is still not completely finished so there are a few things that may stand out. Such as eric not having tooltips (which would be completely useless anyway a heal is a heal) Im thinking of writing a propper description to set a propper backstory. there are a few leftover researches such as magic sentry which will be removed and map is visible for a reason to make navigation easier. If you ever played map like LTA or MZI you would see why. Reds role is to fight back against undead as he is the strongest human faction and has to hold on long enoigh till other factions get themselves together which is why he has many units. Plus every other faction has unique traits. Blue gets most gold and purple is safest. Undeads role is to simply destroy humans and they spawn only 1 type of units cuz they are overhelming already. And every human faction has several events which can turn the game into their favor and obtain a new plot of land. footmen not getting shields is a bug though

 

[deepstrasz]

The game has to have explicit rules, preferably in the Quest Log. Gameplay diversity is also something needed to spice up everything, hence only one type of undead is boring compared to what the human factions have.