Illidan Or Arthas V1.3

[gendac]

the hell is this

 

[Daffa]

Daffa the Mage Review on Illidan Or Arthas by @Wc3Bestfanalsosc2 Gameplay Okay, why with the resources speed? Peon with like 1M damage can hit buildings of enemy forces? [-3] Endurance Aura boost speed like 100x than normal, with a low price [-3] I find Sylvanas and Varimathras helping Illidan quite... amusing, and the opening dialogue The gameplay is quite boring, and units aren't useful, at least by a big margin, better not have the ability to train at all and just use hero all the way [-5] 89/100 Aesthetic Let's start with map name : "Illidan Or Arthas", overused name. I suggest try to search some creative one for starters. [-5] Even the description is making people "oh, another not good map, I'll move along" story. I recommend look for Map Description Generator [1.2] [-20] over 70% of map terrain is empty [-25] 50/100 Bug Author and Hive name aren't the same [-25] There are tooltip issues, LOTS of them. I suggest start looking at every modified unit or abilities and all custom unit and abilities you made [-10] There seems to be issues with Naga units selection circle, check it out [-4] Endurance Aura doesn't stack [-2] The game crashes midway, presumed due to aura or excessive amount of units [Instant Zero for Bug score] 0/100 Summary Well, the crash just sealed the entire map. For starters, I recommend that you improve the layout, like LITERALLY. Does the snow please so much to your eyes that you let it dull like that? Next, I recommend to recheck the tooltips and make the gameplay less monotonous. I can feel AoS and Melee essence, but they're far from interesting for newcomers and the balance tilt too much to AoS aspect. You should remove melee aspects of the game OR make them more viable (faster production for players OR more power etc etc). Score 139/300 46(.33)/100 2(.3)/5 VOTE FOR SUBSTANDARD UNTIL MAJOR IMPROVEMENTS

 

[Wc3Bestfanalsosc2]

Daffa the Mage Review on Illidan Or Arthas by @Wc3Bestfanalsosc2 Gameplay Okay, why with the resources speed? Peon with like 1M damage can hit buildings of enemy forces? [-3] Endurance Aura boost speed like 100x than normal, with a low price [-3] I find Sylvanas and Varimathras helping Illidan quite... amusing, and the opening dialogue The gameplay is quite boring, and units aren't useful, at least by a big margin, better not have the ability to train at all and just use hero all the way [-5] 89/100 Aesthetic Let's start with map name : "Illidan Or Arthas", overused name. I suggest try to search some creative one for starters. [-5] Even the description is making people "oh, another not good map, I'll move along" story. I recommend look for Map Description Generator [1.2] [-20] over 70% of map terrain is empty [-25] 50/100 Bug Author and Hive name aren't the same [-25] There are tooltip issues, LOTS of them. I suggest start looking at every modified unit or abilities and all custom unit and abilities you made [-10] There seems to be issues with Naga units selection circle, check it out [-4] Endurance Aura doesn't stack [-2] The game crashes midway, presumed due to aura or excessive amount of units [Instant Zero for Bug score] 0/100 Summary Well, the crash just sealed the entire map. For starters, I recommend that you improve the layout, like LITERALLY. Does the snow please so much to your eyes that you let it dull like that? Next, I recommend to recheck the tooltips and make the gameplay less monotonous. I can feel AoS and Melee essence, but they're far from interesting for newcomers and the balance tilt too much to AoS aspect. You should remove melee aspects of the game OR make them more viable (faster production for players OR more power etc etc). Score 139/300 46(.33)/100 2(.3)/5 VOTE FOR SUBSTANDARD UNTIL MAJOR IMPROVEMENTS

Well I would say that the description is bad, but good because the game crashes midway playing

 

[Daffa]

mid way game crashes ruins player experience and makes them unwilling to return back to the map.

 

[deepstrasz]

Alright, nothing has really been changed to get this out of Substandard.

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