Honor Hold v1.1

[Moderator]

Next Review: [2016-05-16]

Rufus Moderation Note What you need to do: Add a decent description. I can see that you have put some effort into making the map description good looking, but there is more to do! You are mixing map features and gameplay information inder map info. You should separate these to make it clearer and structurize it. You should also try to flesh ot the decription a little bit more, as it doesn't really tell us much about the game itself. Try writing something like "This is an arena for up to 6 players with this and this special features." Also, the screenshots are not working. Status set to Awaiting Update until a good description is created.

 

[Chaosy]

This looks surprisingly fancy, despite how simple it is. Good job on the terrain.

 

[northedhh]

This looks surprisingly fancy, despite how simple it is. Good job on the terrain.

Thx dude, but need mb hot fix all terrain in next ver.

 

[Aether]

Aether's Review [TD] Honor Hold v1.0 By northedhh Honor Hold v1.0 By northedhh Gameplay: The heroes was good, but the position of heroes in the tavern was a mess. As well as the icons of the heroes doesn't make a good looks in the tavern. On the other hand, the abilities of the heroes was already learned, which I like the idea. The only thing you need to learn is the stats, to improve the attributes of the hero, like the evade and critical. By the way, the critical has no tooltip, and the ability of the Hunter which is Giant Spider has wrong buff. It has a Water Elemental buff. Items are good, but some are default, like the Helm of Battlethirst. Also, some item could use some colors. Anyways, items are balance. You can improve it by upgrading it. The killing streak sometime happens to the units, or summoned units. It happen to me while I was playing the Hunter. Since she has a pet, I let it tank, when it dies, it shows "Player 13 pwned Aether's head! For 5 gold, and 2 honors." You might want to fix it. The neutrals was not that hard, it makes the map challenging. It also respawn at the right time, with the right amount of units to spawn. The dreadlord is hard to kill. The red lightning can kill almost instantly kill a hero. About the area at bottom, we know its a boss, like Roshan in DotA. But, we don't know how to get there. You should put hint or clue, or add something in the quest menu.​ Aesthetics: The description is good. It has a short introduction about the map, and a changelog. The screenshot won't show. If you don't know how to put screenshot, click here. Your description has missing part, like features, and credit list. Also, you might want to improve the description, like making it appealing. I totally agree with what Chaosy said. The terrain is so beautiful. The doodads such as vines made a huge impact on the terrain. The vines really improve the looks of the terrain. And the way you put the tiles was amazing.​ Verdict: So many great ideas in this map. The gameplay was amzaing, while the terrain is almost close to perfect. Improve it more further. For now, I will rate it 3/5, and voting for awaiting update.​

 

[northedhh]

Aether, thx...
I really enjoyed my full obyanenie " stocks " in the next version be sure to try to do everything that was written in a review , because it's really " shoals " . Map is not yet good enough. About Dredlorda if " sweat " with the 3 characters level 15 and 3 weapons and armor ring can kill him I had some how come to kill him = ) . Another one is in the need to add to it a little teleport mobs light mini bosses and get a game for 3 as a PvE mode.

 

[Aether]

Aether, thx...

No problem.

I really enjoyed my full obyanenie " stocks " in the next version be sure to try to do everything that was written in a review , because it's really " shoals " . Map is not yet good enough.

What do you mean not good enough? Its not finish yet? Is it like a beta? Or something? If its a beta, you might want to post it here. Beta is not allowed to be release.

About Dredlorda if " sweat " with the 3 characters level 15 and 3 weapons and armor ring can kill him I had some how come to kill him = ) .

Yeah, what I meant was in early game. Some runes spawn there, right?

Another one is in the need to add to it a little teleport mobs light mini bosses and get a game for 3 as a PvE mode.

Good to know.

 

[Heaven Editor]

Your environment looks good as mine. We have the same taste! THUMBS UP!!!

The name kidney shot is kinda funny btw. huh

 

[northedhh]

Your environment looks good as mine. We have the same taste! THUMBS UP!!!

The name kidney shot is kinda funny btw. huh

Thx, I am pleased to hear that =)

Aether, Map fully completed yet and is designed for PvP mode, and PvE is a kind of supplement card. Runes are Fixed (v 1.1) a while they both statically = non-renewable )

 

[Aether]

Good to know. But, try avoiding double posting, its against the rules. Just edit it.

 

[northedhh]

Added new Version 1.1.
Added PwE area for 3 persons 19 level
And much more in the description of the version

Good to know. But, try avoiding double posting, its against the rules. Just edit it.

Already edited in the new versions of the current out =)

 

[Heaven Editor]

What is Pererabotan?

 

[northedhh]

What is Pererabotan?

Sorry, fix it...

 

[Rufus]

Next Review: [2016-05-16]

Rufus Moderation Note What you need to do: Add a decent description. I can see that you have put some effort into making the map description good looking, but there is more to do! You are mixing map features and gameplay information inder map info. You should separate these to make it clearer and structurize it. You should also try to flesh ot the decription a little bit more, as it doesn't really tell us much about the game itself. Try writing something like "This is an arena for up to 6 players with this and this special features." Also, the screenshots are not working. Status set to Awaiting Update until a good description is created.

 

[deepstrasz]

Player two couldn't choose any hero because of the need for food.
Is there an autopick system in case a player does not choose in time?

 

[StoPCampinGn00b]

As player 1, red, I had no food and I couldn't play.
Medivh's hero spells were extremely overpowered, killing enemies in seconds.
Most of the map is very basic, using default content and standard customization.
No questslog or anything equivalent to it to help players understand the map.
Also, I deem the description as borderline acceptable, but you were asked to improve it months ago.
Honor Hold has some potential, but the map just doesn't seem ready yet. You can post this in our map development forums and get more feedback there.

Moved to Substandard / Too Simple.