Lands Of Honor

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19:43, 28th Jun 2013
Orcnet: Hell_Master's review

 

[Kingmuri]

you need to fix the autor

thats means put your name inside

Edit:Ok I Going to Fix It

 

[Binsu]

Played your map and is quite decent but you have some problems. Here is my review btw to explain more of my own perspective or idea of what I think about the game:

Good Points:

Bad Points:

Suggestions:

• Terrain looks decent but some problems here: first, terrains too flat and lifeless. Add some animals and birds into the terrain and also try decently raising grounds to make different levels. Second, terrain is empty at some point, add some more doodads such as rocks and I must say Wooden Logs really fits at this kind of terrain dont you think? And lastly, Third, no grudges about Blizzard Cliffs but avoid using them and try using raised Grounds serving as cliffs by putting Pathing Blockers into it.
• Creeps are balance but quite few and it lacks guarded creeps at the Gold Mines.

• Creeps are quite few and Gold Mine I do think lacks guarded Creeps and is easily reachable through small armies.
• You should add shops, neautral shops because I do think it looks better. Not being bias btw.

• Some major terrain improvements. Suggestions were fully given above at the Good points.
• Adding creeps might do but if you plan on fast melee map disregard this.
• Add shops, it totally makes your melee better I do know.

Overall, decent melee map with decent terrain but has some problems not major but affects the map in quality of a melee. Rated 2/5 and voting for Pending until some improvements were done.

 

[Kingmuri]

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