Comic Contest #1 - THW situation

[Zack1996]

Just_Spectating, I love your W.I.P, can't wait for the actual comic slip
PS: I +rep you cos I think the character is so funny!
Anyway, I won't be joining because I am horrible at drawing and I have school

 

[frostwhisper]

Fail WIP xD

 

[Oziris]

I can draw that in 5 seconds.Lol fail WIP

 

[ike_ike]

Just_Spectating, that is nothing short of brilliant. The perfection of the curves in the head... the knowing expression ... the gently amused eyes. The virtuoso control of depth and line thickness brings tears to my eyes. You've clearly adopted the style of Randall Munroe's 'xkcd', yet your appropriation of his techniques is nothing short of marvellous. The use of distorted anatomy and proportion dramatically emphasises your character's naivete and child-like appeal.

In short... that is ****ing epic. Hawkwing, I suggest you get Just_Spectating's winner icon ready, because he's got my vote. And if you know your art, he's got your vote too.

EDIT: Froswhisper, what is this 'sarcasm' you speak of?


Ahem, [/sarcasm]

 

[Hawkwing]

Well considering he looks like he's made the farthest progress, aside from Elenai, he may get mine as well.

 

[Bane]

Okay heres my sketchup of Mecheon's character. I used his avatar as a reference for the face so it resembles him somewhat.



-Bane

 

[Mr.Goblin]

well if we could have 1 more week i could have made my Comic its just i don't really have time during the week ..but (during the week-end i can!) if i don't go to my cottage.. what ever.. i will still show the comic i have in mine even without the contest..

 

[Hawkwing]

Well, people have been a lot more active in this thread and I've seen some WIP's. So...

~ Deadline extended 10 days.

 

[Mr.Goblin]

YIHA!! that's what i'm talking about all cheer Hawkwing!! i will start to work on mine this week-end at my cottage..

and my idea is from a chat conversation i had once with Mr.Bob.. ^^ only me and him are in this ''story'' you will see.. ^^

 

[Bane]

The Naruto user in his orange jump suit.
If you see the joke in this image then congratulations you have a basic sense of humor.



-Bane

PS: How are we going to put the panels together? If we have 8 panels should we just put them in a giant image all together or post each panel seperate.

 

[Gausslander]

I lol'd. Rep for all. Including you. (Rep for all means me too)

 

[Mr.Goblin]

ah i want a rep too!! (joke ;3)

here's the first view of the story.. MOUHAHAHAHHAhahahaha

just to prove that i will work on it..

enjoy.. and be free to imagine WHAT EVER you want..

 

[Bane]

Mr. Goblin i hope thats not one of your frames because the theme is the hive being a place not a board.
Anyways guys heres my sick first scene, the dreaded requests building where the naruto shinaniginz happenz xD.



-Bane

PS: I'm going for a new style, call it whatever you want but i call it "going out of the lines". Its exactly what our parents told us not to do when we were in kindergarden. I am purposely drawing outside of my outline to give it a more cartoony effect, let me know what you think.

 

[Just_Spectating]

Its called,

"I know im supposed to color in the lines, but i dont anyway because i want to be myself"

style



I wonder who this joyous little character must be.




EDIT:

W.I.P. scenario.

 

[Mr.Goblin]

well its not a frame.. its only the last frame.. cause it tells the story but i will the drawings..

 

[Bane]

I'm digging your style man, may the best comic win.
My 1st Panel:



-Bane

 

[Mr.Goblin]

lol... well for my caracter i will more use.. the goblin characters shape i already created.. (Marley.. can see his drawing in my secret lab) ^^ and Mr.Bob want to be represented by a Centaur so..^^

 

[Bane]

Cool.
Everyone i present my favorite start to one of my drawings.
Happy tauren. Behold....



My favorite so far still have to add detail and color but i really like it.
Anyways iv gotta go do homework, see yall tommarow.

-Bane

 

[Hawkwing]

He doesn't look too happy.

 

[Elenai]

Where am I?....I FEEL TOTALLY UNAPPRECIATED! LOVE ME!

 

[Hawkwing]

Elenai has been hugged.

 

[Bane]

He doesn't look too happy.

Well hes about to yell at another naruto lover. So yes he isnt too happy.
-Bane

Edit: Didnt feel like doing homework right now so finished Happytauren
(this is for the 2nd panel when happytauren is about to do his usual ruitine with naruto "map makers"
Enjoy.



-Bane

 

[Just_Spectating]

Elenai!!

 

[Hawkwing]

Quick example of what I'm going to do just to announce that I will be joining.
This is not the finished quality just a quick mock up of what I want to do with it.
oh and sorry about pic quality I had to use my phone because I didn't feel like hooking up my scanner.

Enjoy.

 

[Just_Spectating]

i wish i could read it.

i think i can make out some of it



Love me, Skills, Skills, look, Wrong, Section!, Welcome!

 

[Hawkwing]

And," Man everyone is going to love my skills. I'm so good. I bet everyone will love me."

And on the big envelope it says "My leet Skins".

 

[Just_Spectating]

W.I.P. Scenario.

 

[NearbyHermit]

I better start making mine!

Hawkwing,can we use Gimp?

Please,my Photoshop License expired,so I need to buy a new one to contiune this ...

 

[Hawkwing]

Of course you can.

 

[frostwhisper]

PHOTOSHOP! I has it again. Temporarily. So expect a WIP soon.

 

[NearbyHermit]

PHOTOSHOP! I has it again. Temporarily. So expect a WIP soon.

Prepare to get floor rubbed!

 

[Just_Spectating]

ha, so far mine has brought alot of peeps down to the floor.



EDIT:
W.I.P. scenario.

 

[Mr.Goblin]

well i think we should work alot on on our grammar cause than we don't understand the hole point of your message.. and we lost the Funny part of it.. but meeh... you decide..

 

[Bane]

Um mr.goblin thats the whole idea, the incorrect spelling is part of the humor... I dont think anyone acually spells that bad.

 

[Mr.Goblin]

well i know no one spell that bad.. is just i can't laugh when someting is so badly written.. like Frostwisper Comics thread.. i stoped to read it cause it was taking to much effort for me (that don't read chat english) so meeh... i guest its only me..

 

[Hawkwing]

You're exaggerating it too much Just_Spectating. People do/will focus on reading the crappy spelling more than paying attention to the humour.

 

[Mr.Goblin]

that's what i was trying to say

thanks Hawkwing..

and remember well writen comics can be REALLY funny... like this one.. Calvins and Hobbes my Favorit comic ever..

http://www.neophilia.de/onlinehome/calvin/war.gif
http://uncertaindogma.files.wordpress.com/2008/02/calvin-and-hobbes-silence.jpg

 

[Just_Spectating]

lol ok ill ease it up.

EDIT:

Lil BetteR?

 

[Bane]

Yes better. What is the story behind your comic exactly ?
Anyways heres my second panel:



(Caps part is a direct quote from an actual Naruto request, reply by HappyTauren)

My comic so far in large images

-Bane

 

[Just_Spectating]

W.I.P. Scenario.

 

[Bane]

um okay? lol.
-Bane

 

[Just_Spectating]

W.I.P. Scenario

 

[Mr.Goblin]

lol.... my question is.. how are you going to make the diffrents between a Member from an other?

 

[Just_Spectating]

i already have.

Edit

W.I.P. Scenario.

 

[Bane]

Brilliant

 

[Elenai]

ooooh...I like it! simple but sweet! Keep going and you might just have my vote.

 

[Bane]

i Present my comic so far, including 3 panels:

Comic so far, 3 panels

-Bane

 

[Just_Spectating]

you comic makes me kinda want to cry.

that little naruto nooblet :'[




why does his L go backwards from the second panel?


he actually changes in each panel.

second his L is backwards,

Third , his shirt and pants combine.


EDIT::
W.I.P. Scenario.

 

[NearbyHermit]

Hehe

Some sweet comics!

 

[Bane]

Just spectating, its because i took the time to completely redraw him, he isnt going to look the same each time.
And thanks for pointing out the middle line and L, ill make sure to fix those.
-Bane