(2)Thundercliffs

[Figglewig]

Hi again, I was able to knock out a small Barrens map, that takes a lot of inspiration from the map Hammerfall by Folderz. It offers accessible goldmines, plenty of creep camps, and a Barrens Mercenary Camp. Hopefully everyone can enjoy this map, and I appreciate any and all feedback.

 

[deepstrasz]

Tad tight in places, expansions are quite near for night elves (ancients) and humans (militia) to expand faster.

Approved.

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[Figglewig]

Thank you for the feedback deepstrasz. I freed up some space at a couple choke points by removing some doodads and clearing some trees at the starting locations. I also beefed up the closest expansion point with the Outlands Salamanders, instead of the Salamander Hatchlings, adding more damage and hp to the creep camp.
I am debating about reworking this map to be slightly larger or making a third Barrens map, that would be the goldilocks, for size, between Thundercliffs and Golden Hills.