The descriptions are what flower fairy wanted them to be.Easter egg runestone boosts stats, but this doesn't appear in the description.
Lots of empty inaccessible spaces.
Fel orc shamans, giant frost wyrm (middle western edge of the map), doom guard hero (named Kazzak in the cutscene, and his level floats around him), abomination hero have no names.
The subtitles for Kargath's "Lok-Tar Ogar" and "Life for Life" lines are mixed up.
Kargath is invulnerable at the start of the bossfight.
Another schizophrenic one. The part before the bossfight didn't even need units (they're more liable to get themselves Charmed anyway), while the bossfight needs them as meatshields at best while the heroes get the hell away.
"bodies will fester before my vengeance"- not sure what that means.
I think it should be "changed my gender" rather than "change my sex" (I know it's the same thing, but it seems better-suited to the situation).
After everyone is done talking, the text is missing.
All that appears on the loading screen is "Esc".
I assume these are the credits, the only thing that show up are numbers and "bug".
The plot is interesting, but again, it'd be a lot better without the Warcraft references.
Difficulty is badly done, as it mostly relies on swamping the player.
Waiting for the sequel.
Also: About the character descriptions up there, you might want to remove the spoilery parts. How is Tyrande cowardly?
When you say Kargath was invulnerable, do you mean you could not complete the mission?
Also, how did you access the "afternote" mission? I thought it will crash your warcraft 3 if you play it.
Anyway, thanks for making such detailed review of the language errors.