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Short Story Contest #5 - Dual Perspective Partners

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Yet another Work In Progress from Team Wolfanson (hehe). I understand there are some errors, but if you do uncover some, please don't hesitate to point them out. ^.^

The Bone Wastes embraced the golden rays of the sun openly. It had been years since light had touched the surface, and the land had been starved of all life. It was purely barren, much like the hearts and minds of its now-destroyed owners. Upon a pile of bones, resting in the middle of this arid place sat a woman of elven descent. A beautiful emerald shroud caressed her delicate figure, hung together by a brooch of an obsidian raven on her chest. Her innocent turquoise eyes gazed out onto the desolation as a brief wind swayed her hair, splitting it into ivory strands that flickered like white flames. Beside her was Lichenbane, a long, shimmering violet bow and in her hands, was a crude yet deathly looking hammer. Her face did not show any signs of aging, a trademark of her race, as she frowned with impatience. This woman was Sestina Lamente, a once decorated scout, spy and assassin amongst the high elven rank in the early parts of her life. However, she was unable to recall such events, as a violent battle had left her mind scathed and without any recollection of her early life. She wandered the world as an outsider, but then formed a bond with a group of adventurers. Now, she is once more a hero, not just to her people, but also to the thousands who inhabit the lands around these lands.

She smiled, and looked up at the dawning sun. For the first time in many years, the Blackwind Mountains nested under the light of the sun. Once, this land was imbrued by the taint of undeath, but with partial thanks to Sestina, the necromantic tyranny that dominated the black peaks no longer haunted these lands. As she saw the heat slowly melt the rime from the dead trees, and tiny, transparent droplets of ooze disappeared as it touched the ground, joy filled her heart. She contemplated the events of the past few years, and slowly broke the illusion of reality and came to stroll down memory lane.

It was a magnificent autumn morning as the band of adventurers that slaughtered the impurities of the mountains and razed the necromancer’s fortress, Necropia, strode into the city square of <insert name here>. The group had marched proudly up the steps of the town hall, greeted by the inhabitants of the entire Blackwind Mountains. They had noted that these masses exceeded the amount of homes this village could contain. The group was delighted by the cries of joy emanating from the crowd for their efforts in slaying the Archlich of Necropia.

Amongst the peasants was Xall Planebreaker, a man that held power greater than most of the pantheon of gods. As he angrily weaved through the masses like a snake in the summer bush, silence fell upon the crowd. Like a storm, he paraded to the steps, and his gaze met with a powerful magus named Mourg. Xall outstretched his arm and unclenched his fist, and in his eyes fire danced with fury. “Hand it over,” he demanded, pausing for a moment of tension. “Now.”
A smile came to Mourg’s dark green lips as the two gazed into each other. “No,” he said firmly.
The crowd murmured to each other, entertained by the suspense between the group and the massive man. Behind Mourg, the group’s hands slithered to the hilts of their weapons. Xall’s expression stiffened.
“Orc, you will give it to me, or I will be sure that you never get a closer look at it.” His tone was cold and dark, and did not invite disobedience.
“I am quite aware of what it is, Xall. You will not have the Planebreaker.”

The crowds quivered with shock as the name of the mysterious weapon resonated throughout the blackened peaks. The Planebreaker was a treasured legend amongst weaponry, a masterpiece of magical blacksmithing and enchantment. It held power that could sever any travel between planes and prevent the use of chronomancy. The Headmaster of Necropia forged the weapon to defeat Xall and ironically named it after him. However, Xall discovered the project and its rationale and was quick to destroy it and its masters. The Planebreaker, however, survived the tempest of magic and rage Xall let loose upon Necropia. Rather, years later, the orc sorcerer discovered it hidden deep within the shadowy depths of the necromancer’s keep.

As Mourg denied Xall the weapon, the hellion transmogrified.



His facial expression changed so suddenly that the closest serfs stepped away from the city hall. From his back sprouted two pitch-black wings. Xall roared as the rest of his body changed to the colour of his wings. In a matter of seconds, he was a living epitome of shadow – a winged demon as dark as the night. From his mouth, he unleashed another loud roar and the masses dispersed like sands falling from a curious child’s hands. The Blackwind Lords, as the group came to be known, withdrew their weapons rapidly. Mourg raised his hand and motioned for them to stop.

The shadow, now towering above them, raised its right arm to smite his challengers. As its arm came crashing to the earth like a falling star, Mourg closed his eyes and began to mumble silently. Then, faster than even Sestina’s hawk eyes could follow, he withdrew the Planebreaker. A flash dominated her view, and an indescribable sound thundered through the crisp, autumn winds. The shadow wailed and reverted to what little humanity he had left and lay there, unconscious.

Stupid as they were, the group had left Xall there. When he regained consciousness, he was furious. A mortal, a simple mage, had bested him. The mere thought caused him to, quite casually, raise a small army of undead creatures and violently destroy the nearest village. However, his stirring rage remained unquenched. It remained there, unsatisfied, for a mortal wielded the weapon that could very well result in his demise. Additionally, that same mortal hated him.

The Shadow screamed, and thus began his rampage. Village after village was crushed by the shadowy grasp of Xall Planebreaker His rampage was so fierce that it took three gods to prevent him from destroying creation itself. The gods charged the Blackwind Lords with dispatching him. After much deliberation, the Planebreaker came to the hands of Sestina, and she was to face the Shadow in a duel that would hopefully end his existence.

Thus, Sestina sat in the wasteland, waiting impatiently. She first attempted to lure the demon out into the open to do battle. However, he denied her, and thus she resulted to threats. In her hands, the Planebreaker thundered slightly, and she provoked him by saying that she would use the power of the ancient hammer, a threat she had no intention of following through. Yet, Xall could not take the risk, and so he appeared in the horizon.

Sestina gazed at the figure that slowly came into view. The figure was tall and masculine with long, athletic legs, and broad, sloping shoulders with two arms that dangled to his waist. The assassin’s lips arched to form a devilish smirk. As shadows parted, she could clearly see her opponent. His face was locked in a grim snarl. From his hand dropped a wicked kris dressed by a robe of charcoal barbs reminiscent of a whale angler’s harpoon.

The high elf stood tall, her hand clenched around the base of the legendary Planebreaker as an uncertain breeze crept through the wasteland. She grew impatient, indicated by her fierce expression. However, now was the time to prepare. Xall Planebreaker was notorious for the horrors that he unleashed with the flick of a hand. Sestina was the guest of a series of tales told by refugee villagers from the Blackwind Mountains. They told of skeletal armies, flaming balls of warped arcane energy, rivers of blood and shadows as black as night turning daytime into a living nightmare. Of course, such stories were embellished. However they were enough to make her shudder at the thought of facing this creature. She needed all the time she had to observe and get ready.

Sestina’s eyes then became empty – two pupilless voids devoid of all but white. The world, to her, vanished to nothing but a hazy black fog. White lines soon formed, outlining every mountain in the backdrop, every rock or barren tree in the Bone Wastes, and finally tracing Xall. His body was decorated with various red and green dots. Aim for the red, but green if desperate, she thought to herself. Xall stopped dead in his tracks, noting the sudden change undergone by the high elf from afar.

He threw his dagger to the heavens, muttering and clapping his hands together. As his palms met, a rune appeared on his forehead, radiating with silver light. As the dagger fell, Xall caught it and in almost no time at all, charged at Sestina with such immense speed and velocity that the action in itself emanated with arcane magic. As he hastily stampeded across the wastes, the winds cried in protest.

Sestina jumped at the suddenness of his charge, the red and green dots in her vision swayed violently and changed constantly as Xall quickly came towards her, creating an array of puzzling red and green that spilt all over the black haze. She was quick to withdraw her soulblade, a dark metallic arrow, from her quiver and placed it gently against Lichenbane. Her arms were outstretched, both parallel with the arrow, as she raised her weapon to shoulder height. She adjusted her sight, fully aware that this shot would be a lucky one if it hit true, and unleashed the arrow as it divided itself into five. The darts sliced through the air, producing a sickly sound. Despite not yet having found a target, her arrow materialized once more in her hand in a black and purple cloud.
We actually are nearly finished, but what you are reading is refinement of what we already have. Granted, it is still not completely refined! ^.^
 
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As I previously stated, we're nearly finished, but the WiP is only a part of our entire story of which we have gone through and edited. The rest still needs fixing.
 
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With only a week left, I'd be very surprised if you could find a partner.

If you do manage to, let me know, and I will add you to the list on Page 10.
 
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Yeah, I'll wait for the next one that isn't a paired contest, hopefully it's something I can write about, :3
 
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Am i too late or can i still join this.
Ahh so i do need a partner
Edit: Anyone wanna be my partner :p. Also instead of writing about 1 part each cant you mix your writing in scenes so you write half the first section your partner does other half if that works better or is it you have to do 1 perspective and your partner the other of what?

Somone please be my partner? also vizel thanks for clearing that up for meh
Edit: another note qq hmm Wolfe nice Wip like the story just wondering is it a personal touch to add to something which was purposely done or was it a mistake. When you describe the elf you put a comma , hung by a broach just wondering if it should be ,which hung by a broach. Or is either acceptable english other wise looking forward to seeing the finished product
 
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PAIRED means:
"pairing - the act of grouping things or people in pairs"

From google definition search.

PAIRED writing contest means you need a PARTNER. Meaning you need to write approx. half the story and your partner needs to write the other half.
 
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Hmm, I'm still waiting for a accurate answer for my question. Is it allowed to have a single character, but it has two completely different minds?

Surely you can though like in Dr.Jekyl and Mr.Hyde you could have 2 conflincting view points with 2 entirely diffrent people who share the same body. So therefor it is still 2 people and 2 view but in 1 body. really it would be 2 characters in 1.
surely that is allowed?
 
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But ofc... you still NEED A PARTNER ;)

@Vizel, bet your just about sick of saying that ^^

I was sick of it by page 6...

a schizophrenia-based story would be quite interesting, :p

Reminds me of a movie that came out a few years back, about a man and his young daughter, who befriends "Charlie" who is a bad influence,
but is actually the father's alter-ego.
I can't remember the name of it, though, it was an interesting movie.
 
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Does doesn't contain all of the stuff, nor the stuff we've already shown you but here's some text TWIF knocked up =D (it's good though :p)

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Faint veins of blue lined the heavens, gentle tones of warmth and brightness that had been long since concealed. A trace of pink became more prominent amid the frothing clouds as the drifting sun announced the coming of dusk, painting the mountains in a poignant, greying light. Winter now oppressed the Karthek Mountains, shrubs and wild flowers that once studded the summer slopes lay dormant in seeds, blanketed by a fresh drape of frost. A white shroud silenced the rugged landscape; every stream, tree and rock seemed bound to a phantom death, a false life of servitude under its ever-present standard. Fine crystals of snow shivered atop glazed ice, each eagerly awaiting the pristine torrents of air which would inevitably carry them away. Rock and earth towered upwards in a thousand fractured facets, extending to the horizon in every direction; a string of successive sentinels.
Deep within the bowels of these imposing, guardians, a small cluster of dwarf pines was growing timidly from a rocky shelf; each thin tree huddled beneath snow and pressed tightly against a formation of stone. The medley of minute evergreen needles piercing through their glittering garments. The group was one in a handful that remained standing in the high reaches, after the ravages of the month's most recent blizzard. In the valleys below, larger cowards of trees grew in abundance, giddy with the white caps that concealed their rich greenery.

Somewhere near, a raspy voice unfolded over the glacial air, chasing wisps of the speaker's pale breath. “The signs are clear - she is not far now.” His words were uttered in Nithean – the Karthenian tongue - they were brisk and clipped. A sheaf of snow split from its cold moorings and plunged into the clear air, disintegrating into a white mist as it fell.
A gradual terrace of rubble and time-moulded stone lay against the mountainside. Gradually, with barely a sound their feet merely skimming across the uneven surface, eight or nine men climbed upwards. White, frost-painted fur clothed their bodies, bulking them to nearly twice normal size and concealing them in the milieu. Elk-hide wrappings and gloves barely outlined their figures. They were heading towards the lonesome, diminutive grove of pines. Each man crept cautiously and softly, like wind-blown plumes. A staggered trail of faded footprints lay in their wake, winding down the rugged mountainside, disappearing in the distant contours. The man at the procession's head was taller than the rest, and dark bands encircled each of his wrists. He was quickening the pace - hands and feet moving in graceful patterns of precision as he navigated on. He dexterously clambered up a sheltered slab, surmounting the step. With a bear's strength, he helped his comrades to ascend - and one by one they knelt along the stretch of rock. Then, their leader left them to catch their breath as he trudged to the pines. With a strong arm he thrust a snowy clump of branches aside. His gloved finger pointed into the shadows. White flakes drifted lazily down.
“Wounds tell tales.”
Some of the men stood. A browned, flaky smear stretched across the grey rock. Scattered flecks of the dried blood trailed away, into promiscuity. The climbers approached and carefully scrutinized the sign. A man's voice, unaccustomed to speech, uttered a hoarse whisper. “Three nights?”
“It is all but certain”

As the leader drew away, the branches snapped back with a flurry of frost. His fur hood masked a rare smile. At last, their hunt was close to an end. Their quarry would be no more than a stiff corpse, a broken trophy to return to the tribe. They would find her in some sheltered cave, or lying crumpled at the bottom of an icy crevice. She would be mangled, maimed by nature's wild ravings and the wounds they had inflicted upon her. It was three days ago - seemingly longer - when the blizzard came to spirit the girl away, halting their search. Once the winds had abated, the inept scouts stalled for two days, vainly searching for her elusive trail. The task demanded their leader's adroitness and knowledge. Already he vowed that when her body was secured, when the scouts were no longer needed, they would feel the lash.

He straightened his back, feeling a sore, bodily groan. The persistent throb of hunger had not faded since the great hunt, many a day past. He surveyed the slope that lay ahead - his vision was limited naught but a thin slit, he raised a hand to wipe away the accumulation of snow on his matted brow and with trained eyes, he found a likely pathway.
“Ramas, Horo!” he rounded, peering sternly into the meek group. “Hasten ahead. Climb to the plateau.” He flicked his wrist impatiently. “Tell us what you see. We will follow.”
Two men emerged from the pack, grunting in response - they were the smallest, yet their frames bulged with lean muscle, making them ideal scouts and climbers. Abandoning caution, they did as they were ordered, scrambling deftly towards the distant plateau. The loose rock, snow and ice of the perilous slope barely quaked as their nimble feet passed them by. After a savoury draw from the chilled air, the leader set off, his cadre aligned behind him. When they reached the slope, a sheet of sheer ice leered at them, eagerly awaiting a misjudged movement. With sharp eyes, the leader and his men analysed every grainy rock and thin recess. Hardened boot edges found unseemly grips. It was rare for the Range to betray their children, having nurtured them in the bitter elements since their mothers gave them life - yet, the group would go slowly, for one man's folly could bring death to all.

“Tarka!” A gruff voice called from below. The leader paused, wedging a toe in the nearest crevice.
“Speak.”
“Another sign.”

The man fingered a loose chunk of rock; a vein of dried blood ran over it. This assuaged the doubts any still had. The leader - known as Tarka - nodded in recognition. He could not comprehend why the girl had fled to these heights - the blizzard's terror must have dissolved her judgment, and it’s winds must have been at her back, driving her onward. The motion of limbs overhead softened; Ramas and Horo had reached the steepest incline of the slope. They halted for the moment as the wind pulled at them menacingly - then, with well-placed hands and feet, they pressed on. Just as Tarka immersed himself in some obscure reflection, the wind's vigour grew, blowing fiercely over the men’s’ now exposed backs - the keen stalkers gritted their teeth, focusing on the rewards they would soon reap. Shortly later, within the time-span of a dozen breaths, the two scouts drew near the lip of the plateau. They began to slow to a crawl, as if harbouring some fear of what they might find.

Tarka called out to them: “Don't steady - keep going!” His words were muffled by the mounting whine of the gale. Obediently, the scouts hauled themselves higher, labouring to circumvent thick, rounded loaves of ice. With their garments fluttering they rose up over the edge of the plateau, and dropped out of sight. The onlookers did not linger, climbing with great haste, eager to see for them if their long-sought quarry had finally fallen under their grasp. A tribal, ancestral power ran through their veins - stronger in some than others -just then awakening within, the frenzied energy rising to a nearly irrepressible level. A clump of snow and ice was kicked free from the cliff and caught by the wind. The seven stalkers were closing upon the prize.
Suddenly, a strained cry came from the plateau. “She is here, Tarka! But-” Horo's voice wavered, “- she’s not alone...”
The sun had passed beyond dense cloud, leaving the sky a bleak grey akin to worn steel. The climbers froze, bracing tensely against the gusts which now struck without warning. Waves of angst blended with Tarka's pulsing blood. What body heat he had not lost to the wintery day deserted him. Confusion blurred his thoughts and his thin frame shook violently.
“Explain, Horo!”
The reply did not come. In the distance, arching geysers of snow careened from the mountain peaks, born from the wind. Anticipating a fearsome gust, Tarka adjusted his weight, pressing close to the rock and gave rapid hand gesture signalling his men to follow suit. The howl came, the wind clawing fearsomely at anything loose and supple. One of the men lost his footing, crashing against hard rock. He was steadied by a firm hand, prior to the torment subsiding.
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“Ramas, Horo?!”
The question was veiled by the air currents. I closed my mind to the prying voice and filled my ears with the messages of the wind. The two scouts were standing still. My gaze shifted from one to the next. No doubt a lurid fear had suffused their hearts. I was standing between them and the rigid body of the poor girl. They glanced furtively, first to her, then to one another, and then back to her. They sought her. I willed myself calm as a snarl came unbidden. I had thought I would never know the truth. It was almost soothing to see her kinsmen - her torturers - draw back with fright. The wind was speaking to me. Whispers were passing among the Karthenians on the slope. They sensed something was amiss - misgiving had been woven in their sinew since tender ages. Rock shifted as they resumed the climb. The fears playing through their thoughts would be devoid of a Golem… until death doused their squalid lives.

I summoned my breath, hushed words slipping from my mouth in their native tongue. “You shall not touch her.” I was observing two souls about to die. The freezing air grated their thin nerves. I sensed rocks shift as the climbers below drew near. “Your deaths shall be swift.”

These men had trained as hunters… and killers - I saw the blood of past lives sadistically marring their sight. But they were no warriors; they could barely wield the blades sheathed at their sides. They stood dumbly, as if in disbelief. The wooden staff moved with blurring speed, flying bird-like over my raw skin. The spiralling currents of air swept across my face. The scouts were precariously close to the edge as I advanced. Cold air wafted through my lungs in tandem to the rhythm of the staff. The knotted tip carried the momentum.
They scattered with impulsive fear as I unleashed the blow. The heft of wood struck, tearing fur and breaking flesh, but not where I had intended. The man's uninjured arm groped for his sword while the second scout scrambled to his knees, leaning over the rock ledge to signal his comrades. My staff struck a white-knuckled fist, disarming the first scout. With a free hand I seized his own blade's hilt and swung the glinting steel across his neck. Doused by adrenaline I ignored the mindless splutter of pain and terror. The disembowelled sight was a blur in the crook of my vision. Before the corpse struck the ice, I threw the blade – it spun wildly through the air – embodying itself with a sharp thud and accompanying scream. Both lay lifeless when my next breath came. A pool of bright, glistening blood saturated the white snow, causing it to steam with heat.

From below, unintelligible voices rang through the crisp air. I tore a bloodied strip of fur from one of the scouts and flung it over the edge for every fearful eye to see. Nervous, mystified hearts were easily overcome.
The coldness of the air had become unkind, and impressed upon the climbers. Whenever they made a free gesture its soporific effect slowed their movements. After a night to face the elements, they would be as lifeless as the girl. The leader was the first to see the bloodied scrap descending ominously over their heads. Worrisome cries and dark curses sprang from his men. He looked them over with a rending gaze.

“Kulo, go!” I heard him bark. “Make haste. See what has happened. The rest of you, keep on – carefully now.”

I needed no sight to see the scene, for the mountain told me all. A solitary white figure began to climb, passing the leader with a curt grunt. His stubby limbs pulled and pushed off the rock, all but without effort. His haste was impressive to say the least. Upon his cresting of the plateau, the leader drew in a sharp breath. The low evening sun shot brilliant beams through a gap in the clouds, and through the piercing luminescent light I watched the man ascend the rim.

As the blinding light faded, I dipped the end of my staff in the blood, lacquering the gnarled wood with liquid. The sour smell of death wafted through the calm air of the plateau. The men I had killed were fodder for the blood-lust singing its demanding song within me. I would defend the girl to the very last dregs of strength, though why I felt so inclined, I knew not. I stepped forward, noting the third Karthenian was both oblivious to my presence and preoccupied with catching his breath.
My fists tightened around the knotted staff. His pain would end as soon as it began. A droplet of frost-blackened blood slipped from the grooves of the staff and splashed upon the ice.

Alas, the fool raised his head, his line of sight revealing the bloodied corpses, and he seemed puzzled, stunned. He must have been no more than a boy - unaccustomed to wars and death. The imminent deed, which I'd seen many a man shy from in fear, soothed my soul and sent flames of passion through my vision. I unleashed the fury that coursed through my veins, swinging the staff at his proffered skull. It was then that his own shock took him, and he wrenched to the ground in a convulsion. My misjudged blow struck the side of his head uncleanly, ripping off the fur hood, leaving a red-smeared entanglement where his ear should have been. The boy staggered forward on hands and knees, dazed. Vomit spewing from his lips, excavating a rancorous trough in the snow.

The pulsating gusts of wind whipping around the mountain formed a protective halo, nearly visible against the dim evening landscape. I paced slowly forward, footfalls compressing the ice with the sound of a nightmarish presence – only fitting for a Golem. The Karthenian filth crawling on the ground spun around as he battled with dismay. I was perversely pleased that he looked me in the eyes. Those brown disks that must have witnessed the unimpeded torment of at least a handful by his own doing suddenly contracted in animalistic desperation, the mind within realizing it was on the receiving end now. If it had any acumen it knew its life was over, since the moment it scaled the ledge. Wielding the staff like an axe in both hands, my second blow struck the ice, slamming a disappointing finger's breadth from his flesh and bone, scorching a burning path down his cheek.

At the top of my lungs I roared belligerently, not withholding strands of spittle. “You will suffer far worse than she!” My prey's face contorted in heightened, vivid trepidation. Time seemed to slow while I once again envisioned her final day: stumbling, grievously pain stricken, beaten and berated by the foul Karthenians who shared the same mountains. This scout was one of them. “Die!”

The end of the staff struck his shoulder and I drove it deeper with unrelenting pressure until it seemed to sink through the wretched flesh and crush bone. The body's arms and legs flailed, the man twisting and writhing as he tried to be free. But there was no escaping the just retribution for his acts. I smiled cruelly, unable to deny the elation I felt as his life drained away.

“Tarka! Tarka!” He was yelling at a frenzied pitch. My right boot cut him short, driving down over his chin. Silently, I chastised myself for letting him live so long. The other two died far the quicker. I felt the sensitive, squirming face underfoot buckle and bend. The joints of the jaw slipped with a subtle pop. The man's eyes rolled uncontrollably, tilting into whiteness, gazing into the back of his head. He turned pale and I heard his hysterical breathing tainted by a trickle of blood that flowed down his throat. His hands and feet jostled, moving spasmodically. Any moment and the others would ascend the ledge. I twirled the staff from hand to hand, waiting.
 
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Story Submission - idodik & naitsirk: Book & Blade

Okay guys, we have our submission! If someone will comment on it we might change something but otherwise we are D-O-N-E! Nearly 5,000 words are joined to this creation, that I hope you will all enjoy. Feast your eyes!
Book and Blade
It was a dark and misty night, and only few glittering lamps lit the village with their faded lights. The sound of feet hitting the ground became clearer and clearer as a man, a warrior of the village came walking down the road. He was on a security stroll, looking over the village during the nighttime. He was satisfied with this shift as it gave him time to think about how much he loved this little village and all the people living in it. You could only hear a handful of sounds throughout the village, as most of its people were sleeping as they waited for the night to be over and for a new day to begin. He was halfway through the normal patrol route when he decided to walk slower than usual, as that particular night was unusually dark and as he had many things stuck inside his thoughts that he just wanted to sort out.
Suddenly the warrior heard steps to his side, and he readied his stance, gripping his sword fiercely. The sound of steps neared, and he drew his sword and started striding towards the sound. As he did, the sound stopped, and a figure formed in the darkness, the figure of a woman. The warrior slowed his pace, frowning, and returned his sword to its sheath.
"What are you doing here at this late hour? You surprised me," he called. His voice was filled with frustration.
"I'm sorry – I'm just returning to my home,” the woman said, so quietly he hardly heard her. As he neared her he saw her more clearly; she had dark eyes, long brown hair and a long blue gown, and appeared to be rather young.
"Not an ideal time for a maiden like you to be walking outside."
"I think… I think I got lost." Her voice quivered and she dropped her gaze.
The warrior's frustration grew. "That's not good. What were you doing out this late?"
"I…" he recognized a small patch of blush appearing on her cheeks. "I was at the church… praying for my sick grandmother."
The warrior was not convinced, but he did not want this story to waste his shift-time. "Well then, would you mind if I accompanied you until you recognize the way?"
The woman seemed relieved. "That would be very helpful of you, kind sir."
"Where do you live?"
"I live in the western part of the village, near the barn."
"That’s quite near. We'd better get going."
They began walking towards the western part of the village; they only had to go a few hundred meters to get to the western part of town. There was an awkward silence in the air as they walked towards their destination. They reached a lamppost near “The Wicked Tavern” when she finally said “Thank you, good sir, now I know the rest of the way.” He replied, “Glad to have helped, milady,” and they parted. The warrior went back to his patrol and continued his thoughts and worries from before the encounter as if nothing happened.


The young woman, however, was walking not towards the Tavern, but towards another direction. The real reason why she had visited the church was hidden in her hands, which the warrior did not bother to inspect when he had approached her. She didn't stop to think how lucky she was to have it, even if she needed to steal it. She only thought about the moment she'd reach… There it is! She approached an old barn which belonged to her family. She rushed inside and settled on an old chair next to a battered table, letting her treasure fall with a thump to the table. She prepared a candle so she could admire the reward of her hard work, and feasted her eyes to the light of the little flame – on the table lay a book which looked as if it was written in the beginning of time, and she could just make out its title which she had craved for so long: "Arts of the Magi".
She could not resist flipping the pages to admire this book's beauty: Conjuring spells, Transformation spells, Blessing spells, and Cursing spells. As she flipped through the Blessings a particular spell caught her eye, one entitled "Taros gore Thur". Its description said "The person/animal/object holding this blessing will have better luck in general, little in every area." Taros gore Thur… Taros gore thur… The phrase seemed so gentle to her, so loving… She decided to use it, even if the blessing itself could not be implied. Not that the saying would leave her mind if she decided to forget it…
Who could she practice this phrase upon? Maybe her family? No, they have enough luck already. She could give it to the warriors – they say these are dangerous times – or maybe to that particular one who had just accompanied her… He seemed kind of cute! Or maybe it would be better to save it to herself (if she could) to help her against the priest's fury once he found out his book has been stolen… But soon she left this question and passed on into more reading, little did she know that by the next day a stolen book would become the last of priorities for them all.


"Seth, wake up! You're on duty!" The soldier grabbed Seth by his feet, and then dragged him out of bed. "OK, OK that's enough, I'm awake." Seth stood up from the cold, hard floor, then put on his uniform and took a piece of bread. The sun was shining as he went out the door, birds were singing and people filled the streets, running up and down, trying to live their lives as they have always lived them. Only a few market stands were open at this time of the day, though they still seemed to wait in lines for the closed stands. All the streets were so much quieter at night, Seth thought as he made his way towards the barrack to pick up his swords and the rest of his armor.
He kept thinking about the encounter with the girl, it was probably the most interesting part of the previous night's patrol. Nothing really happens during the nighttime or at least nothing new since the new captain of the guard began two years ago. When he came to think about it, the new captain was actually incredibly inspiring.
Seth was nearing the barrack to get his assignment, equipment and chainmail. He continued his thoughts from the night before, while he was on patrol: he tried to find a way to utilize his battle technique, as he was not one of the strongest but rather one of the quickest soldiers. In the previous night he had tried to think about stances in which he could slash enemies so that they would be paralyzed and unable to fight, or tried to find out how he could take out an enemy within seconds. Of course, he had not tested it out, but he thought it would work nonetheless.
"Hi Seth," said the guard sitting near the duty board as he looked up with a smile. Seth did nothing but wave back as he passed by him to the armory.
His equipment was composed of two short swords forged in silver light metal which were created just a few years ago, chest chainmail forged in light iron especially for Seth as he was not strong enough to wear the heavy chain mail in combat, and last but not least a helmet forged in aluminum found in the nearby mountains. He carefully put his chainmail on, and then got some help from a soldier to close it up for him. As the chainmail went on he picked up his helmet and put it on his head, and then took the swords, sheathed them and fastened them to his belt.
"You're guarding the village mayor today," the guard honored Seth, "you're finally going to defend an important person!" Seth merely nodded, as he had already gotten used to his cynical attitude in the years he had served with him.


"Amber! Wake up! We need to prepare breakfast!"
Amber woke up with a start from a dream filled with magic and bookshelves, and sat up. The dream seemed so real… She laid her head in her hands, still dizzy from the abrupt waking.
"Amber! Are you awake yet?"
At last her senses stabled, and she sat up again and yawned. "Yes, mother, I'll be right there," she said, and turned to examine her room with her eyes. Something made her feel more confident than usual today, she thought, what could it be? Her eyes passed from the window onto the door, her chair, her desk… And the book on her desk that looked as if it were a hundred years old. She jumped up, the memory of the previous night finally caught in her memory, and a big smile spread across her face: she had caused her mother to worry quite a bit when she had been away but she managed to hide the book yet again, and no one knew it was laying on her desk now. Tonight, after all the chores will be done and after she will help in the fields, she will be able to read in the barn again. With great anticipation she rose from her bed, dressed and left her room to help make breakfast.
Later that morning, when Amber and her family sat around the table and ate together, they chatted excitedly at the recent happenings, which included Amber's recent break of the curfew. Well, everyone except Amber did – she had been kept busy trying to nervously dodge and deflect her siblings' attempts of figuring where did she go and why. However, as successful as she was, children are very keen gossipers.
"Maybe she went to pray at church over something urgent!"
"No, no, she wouldn't leave curfew for that!"
"Then maybe she had to make confession of something terrible?"
"What, perfect Amber would have something to make confession of?"
"Well then maybe she's meeting someone in secret?"
"Ohhh!" The kids giggled, and Amber blushed in fury, something that didn't help prove her innocence in this matter. "Who could it be? Amber, is it John? Is it Edmund? Who is it, Amber?"
She was about to try and hush them when there was a knock on the door. This was unusual, since they were not expecting anyone and all their guests notified their intentions to visit in advance. As the children stopped chatting immediately the parents quickly appeared at the threshold, exchanged looks quickly, opened the door, and quickly straightened up.
At the doorstep was Brother Kyle, the church priest, a grave expression on his face. He never left the church at all, so this was a very strange happening to all of them. Amber jumped on her spot in fear – how could he know what she had done?
At once, he spoke. "Good morrow to you."
"Good morrow, Father," the parents stammered, "How do you do?"
"I thank you, but there is a matter to discuss. I'm afraid one of my books has been stolen."
"Oh!" The mother exclaimed. Brother Kyle was kind and just to all, even to those who were unkind to him, and there was no reason for a soul to bid him evil. "I'm terribly sorry to hear. When did this happen?"
"Just this evening. I don't know how this has happened. This book is of major importance – I must get it back immediately."
"Well, firstly, you could tell me where you have been last night."
"We were all home, Father."

"Well, all of us except for Amber."
The conversation was audible to the children, and one of them could not help utter this sentence. Amber blushed until her cheeks became beet red, but remained silent. The three adults slowly turned to face her.
"Yeah, didn't you say that you were going to the church?" another chimed. Amber blushed even more and the adults grew even closer, their eyes widening.
After a moment's silence, the priest spoke again.
"I will resume this conversation in private, with your permission of course."
"Y-yes, yes."
"Come with me, Amber, we have something to talk about."
"Yes, Father."
Amber rose slowly from her seat and walked to the priest's side in silence. Her parents, still not managing to grasp the recent happenings, followed her with a gaze of awe. When she went through the door Brother Kyle said "I promise you that your daughter will return before noon. Good day to you."
"Good day, Father."
The door closed and the two started to head to the Church. After a while of silence the priest said "Amber, if you should have a hand in this, you should know that this is not a fitting deed for a young woman like you. You should be more considering towards your future and towards finding a husband."
Amber simply walked in silence and didn't answer, and the priest said nothing more of it. As they continued to make their way Amber thought she heard the distant beat of a drum, perhaps even a war drum, but she thought it to be absurd.


Seth stood still at his duty post, waiting for something exciting to happen. His duty post was guarding the mayor, meaning he had to stand outside the Town Hall, waiting for the mayor to do something. He sometimes chatted with the other guard beside him, just to make time pass faster by at least a bit. The village mayor said he had a lot of paperwork to do that day, so it was not going to be one of those “traveling” days that he so often had.
The day went slowly by, until the mayor finally came out of his office, telling the guards that it was time for the daily stroll around the village. Finally, this is what I've been waiting for! Seth thought as they began walking slowly down the street. Many eyes gazed upon them as they walked downwards the market place, with the mayor waving at all the people, while Seth and the other guard just walked silently beside him. They were heading towards the village gate, as the mayor usually held a speech to keep the moral of the soldiers guarding it up so that they could work better. Everything seemed normal so far that day, but this was all about to change.
The cry of a war horn was heard, after which came many battle cries. The sound of metal slashing against metal soon filled the air as orcs charged the little village, flooding it thoroughly. In several seconds all the guards near the gate had been killed like lambs to a slaughter. The attack had come so suddenly, with all the death and the blood splitting through the air, that the villagers were paralyzed with fear. Seth joined his brethren in arms and fought against the orcish horde, striking with agility he had never known he had before, knowing that the lives of the villagers were at a great risk of being lost today. The good old mayor that Seth had been appointed to guard was soon lying dead on the ground, despite Seth's efforts, with an arrow seated right beneath his head, in the middle area of the neck. Red drops of blood flew around the battle, mixing with the black orcish blood, and the screams of women and the weeping of children were audible throughout the village. It was a nightmare of death and decay, enough to drive a man crazy.
The fight became more intensive as back-up arrived for the guards. The Captain of the Guard screamed "We must hold the orcs outside of the inner sanctum! Lead the women and the children there immediately!” A group of guards instantly rushed to the inner sanctum of the village, shouting to the villagers: “Follow us; we will protect you from the orcs!” Most women gathered their children and some supplies; they knew that the village could fall today. The soldiers quickly formed a circle around the villagers, taking defensive positions to repel any orc attack. Another cry was heard through the village, as the captain of the guard blew his horn valiantly.
An arrow flew right beside Seth’s head, flying the Captain's chest and knocking out his breath. He was pushed back, struggling with the pain, as another arrow hit his shoulder. Seth turned his head to the Captain, all alarm: the guard would suffer a fatal blow should the captain fall. He sprinted to the captain's location, tearing through every enemy which stood in his path. Ten seconds had not passed before he was beside the dying man, the man which was his hope until now. “Captain, don’t you dare leave us! We need you to win this battle.” Seth was nearly out of breath, both from the battle and from the tears in his throat.
"I cannot continue… The wound… is fatal," Croaked the Captain, "you must go on… without me, Seth… and secure the village… until the last orc falls." As he finished his dying words an arrow smote him in the forehead, splitting it and sending him to the next world.
The guards around Seth only now noticed the Captain's absence, charging with rage upon the orcs that stood close enough to them, but Seth could not think clearly anymore. He could not harness all his agility to aid him in battle, and he was left to wave his sword at his foes. Suddenly an orc berserker charged at him and faster than the eye could blink he attacked him, tearing through all his mail and armor and leaving a bloody gash on his chest. Seth instinctively grabbed the wound, falling to his knees, while another guard slashed the orc in half mercilessly. The world was becoming vague before his eyes and he was losing hope: the humans had no leader while the orc did, and they were overwhelmingly outnumbering them. The pain in his chest made him numb as he realized the wound was poisoned, and so Seth fell from his knees into a world of darkness.


While the mayor was heading to the market Amber was still walking silently beside Brother Kyle towards the church. They had not walked much more when they heard running footsteps nearing them, and turned towards the sound in surprise. Out came an orc berserker, the same one that will strike Seth afterwards (and that will soon afterwards find his death), wielding his weapon at the ready and charging towards them. The priest did not hesitate and came in front of Amber, shouting "Back, you beastly mongrel! Return to your fowl home!" The orc swerved to look at him and in a flash slayed him with a swing of an axe, throwing both him and Amber on the ground. Bloodlust rushing in his veins, the orc did not stop to see if he had killed his victims, but rushed on to find more.
Amber, however, had not been killed, not only that but miraculously she had not even been injured. The priest's body had taken the full strike, leaving her unscathed but frightened to death. She was lying beneath a body, a body of a person she had known, who had helped her not once before… Who was now dead, she shivered, and suddenly she jumped up and away from the body, coming to her senses in fright. The stench of death seemed to stick in her body, her clothes – without warning she turned and vomited, she couldn’t control herself. She was shaken and frail, but she survived – how? This could not be mere miracle alone – came a thought – it was someone's doing! Some magic had saved her! But –Apprehension suddenly dawned on her face – it must have been that blessing she practiced the previous day! Perhaps she had accidentally given herself the blessing when she had repeated the phrase. That means she could work magic! She must get that book now, no matter the costs, she thought, and instantly forgot about the body lying beside her and why it was there, and jumped up. Her confirmed powers strengthened her spirit and she ran back to her house without considering what she might find there.
When she reached the houses of the village she was already smiling and imagining the things she could do with her magic. As she neared her home she was shaking with excitement, until she heard beastly, grotesque sounds from within it. With a silent cry she remembered the attack she had just experienced, and quickly hid near a wall outside the house. Shivering, she attempted to look at the entrance to see what is happening, only to glimpse blood-splattered orcs leaving it with a run, screaming their pleasure of tasting human blood. She understood with a start that the village is under attack, and at once all the surroundings came out to her: the screams, the clash of steel, and the splashes of blood. This was too much for her to absorb, and she collapsed on the grass beneath her, weeping silently but bitterly. All thought left her and she surrendered herself to trauma. Both orcs and humans mistook her to be dead, and so she was left to weep for a long time.
When her panic attack had ended she sat up, gathering herself back together. She had to be strong to have survived up until now, she told herself, and so all she needed was to keep it up. She connected with her surroundings at last, opening her eyes and listening to the battlefield, only to realize that everything was quiet, frighteningly quiet. The village was filled with blood, debris and corpses – both orc and human, and both male and female. There was not a living soul in sight, and not one to be heard for quite a long distance. She gasped, and a clear thought echoed through her mind: she needed her book to survive. At once she came to her feet and strode into the house, and as she entered she witnessed the corpses of her parents and her siblings, their eyes open and their expressions frozen. Revolted and shocked she urged herself to go past them into her room, and thankfully grasped the book lying on her desk. This battle may not be over yet, she thought, and flipped through its pages, searching for whatever may aid her in a situation like this. When she had memorized a few healing blessings and a few harmful curses she murmured "Taros gore thur", turning to it as a last resort of hope, and set out to the field with the book in her arm. She would die of starvation or thirst if she ran away, and so there was only one option left – searching the battlefield for anything that might help her.
At once the bodies came into view again, broken and bloody. She was revolted and frightened, but as there was no choice she urged herself to go further, holding the book tightly in her hand. As she left her house and started to walk between more corpses she focused less on the revulsion and more on the search for anything, anyone that survived. The more she walked the more focused she was, but there was nothing in sight, and she thought that perhaps nothing survived this onslaught. Towards the remains of the market she walked, with disgust but surprising calm and focus, and then she heard a cough and a splutter. Rushing as she had never before in her life towards the sound she saw a human warrior lying on the ground, a gaping wound in his chest. He seemed not to be unconscious, but in a trance… As she grew nearer her eyes rested on the man's face, which she recognized with a jolt – it was the guard that had accompanied her the previous night! She didn't know his name but she knew that if she sought another living soul this would be a one-time opportunity, and she kneeled beside the weak young man and searched for the healing blessings she memorized. When she was ready she put down the book and placed her shivering hands above the wound, focusing all her thought on her will to cure it and remembering one thing… If this won't work, nothing will.
As the magic flowed out of her hands she stood still in fright, ready for anything to happen. The warrior's body tensed and his chest rose in the air, and Amber felt the fears rise in her again and weaken her. Finally the ritual was done, and the warrior lay on the ground again while Amber lost her focus – all he glimpsed was his pale handsome face surrounded by his long black hair before she burst into tears on his wounded chest.


Seth was surrounded in darkness, falling into an endless pit. All hope was left aboveground, far away, and now he was alone plunging into the deeps of death. His last breath neared, he saw a light…
At once Seth hit land, yet he was on his back. His back arched as he returned to his senses, his muscles screaming from pain, and he collapsed on the ground again. Amazed at his return to life he became aware he was lying on the ground, and became even more surprised as something came onto his chest, which he noticed to be wounded. His senses, which had faded when he had been wounded, were kicking so hard that he could not concentrate on the many things going through his mind: his gratefulness of the gift of life given to him again, the pain and discomfort which come with awakening, and his confusion from the wound on his chest and whatever had came onto it. He lay some time like this for some time, gradually regaining control of his arms and legs, and suddenly turned over and vomited blood and filth.


As Amber was crying, she thought she felt him move. She immediately raised her head and looked at him, half hopeful half fearful, until she felt his chest move again. She screamed and quickly withdrew her hands away from him as he turned over and started to vomit red filth. Her sensation of success and triumph was so strong it vanquished any trace of recoil, and she quickly took a bottle of water from a soldier corpse lying nearby. As he returned to lie on his back, coughing and spluttering, she put the bottle in his hand, and he hurriedly drank from it as though he had not drank water in weeks and wiped his mouth with his hand. When he threw the bottle away and lay exhausted on the floor again she leaned gently on his chest to reexamine him, the man whom she had saved – his face had a strong jaw but gentle lips, a long, proud nose and amazing black eyes looking at her, oh those beautiful eyes.


Seth lay in exhaustion as he finished vomiting, and before he could start thinking he felt a bottle being put in his hand. All suspicion of his surroundings faded immediately as he instantly raised it to his mouth, quenching the liquid of life. The water relieved his throat and body, and he lay back with satisfaction as he threw the bottle away. The pressure on his chest returned and he opened his eyes to look at his savior. He saw a blurry brown shape, and as his vision cleared the image formed into a girl, in fact it was a girl he was familiar with – suddenly he remembered – the girl he had accompanied the previous night which had occupied his mind so often today.
"You… You saved my life," he said in surprise, "You saved my life!", and her eyes glowed with happiness.
He did not know it was his own generosity that had returned, doubled, upon him to save his life, neither did he know that he was lying in the middle of a battlefield in which lay dead and severed his family, friends and brothers in arms; all he knew was that her hair, as well as her eyes, were not black but a deep bright hazel, a hazel that seemed to give her a halo of beauty. As she neared him and he put his hand against her cheek he could feel an invisible connection form between them and thought this could only be destined to be…


In the battlefield where once stood a flourishing village walked an orc archer, stepping on human and orc bodies as he passed. While walking through the ruins of a once wealthy market his keen eye spotted a couple of living humans – an armored man with long black hair and a woman with long bright hazel hair. He did not heed the connection that was forming between them, nor would he heed if he had known they did not know each other's name, and put two arrows to the bow string. He prayed to the Orc God of War to let his aim be true, and fired the arrows. He hit.
 
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If there is nobody else to judge (I don't think 1 judge will be enough, :p), I could probably read everything next week while I'm on vaca (Well, technically I leave friday afternoon EST, so, next weekend). I'll just need to have some time to do so. Reading a dozen or so thousand words takes a while. Especially with needing to judge, I'll have to comment, etc.

So, if there's not a sufficient amount of judges, I will do it.

I'm harsh. Like, TOTAL "Grammar Nazi." So, yeah. You've been warned.
 
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i would rather not do it and instead focus more on spending time with my mom and grandpa while i am up there, though.

Yeah i live in FL and I am going NORTH for vacation ;)
 
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i would rather not do it and instead focus more on spending time with my mom and grandpa while i am up there, though.

Yeah i live in FL and I am going NORTH for vacation ;)
Impossible!

Winter and you're going far north? Boy you have balls. xD
 
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Well if you havnt got enougth judges then i would love to judge since obviously i cant find a partner >.<
And i will definatly have time :D
 
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naitsirk, if you have suggestions you can freely share them with me and I'll do my best to get them in! In fact the only reason I didn't do it was because I didn't have any time because it was late.
Anyways it looks like we'll be winning technically since no one else has given an entry :O Even if not, the max I see will be three competitors... So technically everyone wins something :p
 
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lol...I could totally enter this contest with my roommate type up 5k words in a couple hours, spend a couple hours editing it and enter, xD

But same IPs aren't liked by Py.
 
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