Remember Tomorow

[ashbringer753]

Remember Tomorrow

Remember Tomorrow

A consequence of boredom,this is both a tribute to: ~void~ for his outstanding tutorial about lightning, and to Steve Harris and Paul Di'anno for this Marvelous song.
Criticism is more than welcome.


Update:more doodads, new camera angle, and fixed terrain geometry.

Remember Tomorrow

Update 2: fixed sun, added more farms...

Remember Tomorrow

Hope you like it!

 

[Maker]

Looks pretty good, but maybe there could be some weeds or something at the empty space above the small rock at left bottom corner. And also to the left of the hay stack. Somehow it looks a bit unfinished.

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[ashbringer753]

thanks for the awesome video,but I prefer the "a real live one" version. Anw I'll update soon...

 

[darkzxx]

you used voids way of making the sun if i am not wrong
it's a pity you didn't excuted it well,the sun looks like a shape of something circle trapped in a jar thats is small and is trying to squeeze it broken

 

[The_Olorin]

In overall it look pretty nice, but there are things what you should change or do better.
Good things:
The athmosphere is well made, the terraing type is good and you have mostly used right kind of doodads. You used costum models what is right thing to do usually. You played around with fog, what is also good, but personally i think the fading can be done better.

Things what you could make better:
Atm the land seems pretty empty, eventhough it is dry africa type land. Cause it is a artwork, i think you should add more doodads( plants etc.). the mountain in the right look rather boring, try to make it more detail or change it. The rays of light or UTM light you used, is IMO totaly wrongly used( nothing personal). The thing is that you can see sun in backround so it seems so unfitable that you made those rays coming from sky. Maybe try to check out Advanced Lighting
. I hope i helped you.

Keep it going.

 

[ashbringer753]

darkzxx: what do you mean by "voids way"? About how i executed it, i may have failed but it's my first time using this kind of lightning. I didn't understand what you meant in the rest of your comment but maybe it'll get fixed when i change the camera angle.

The Olorin: fixed the mountain and added more doodads in the update, and the tutorial you recommended teaches the terrainer to use ray of light as i used them.