Protect Your Ally War of Beast

[Rufus]

It is a good start for a description, but it is not yet finished.
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Good luck!

 

[trebla ratilla]

It is a good start for a description, but it is not yet finished.
Check this out, as it may help you: Description Guide - Maps

Good luck!

done editing

 

[Rufus]

Since this is still Beta, I think it is better that you post this map in map development, until it reaches 1.0?
You can still update this thread, and have a link in your development forum though.

When it reaches 1.0, contact me, and I'll move it back to pending status.

 

[trebla ratilla]

Since this is still Beta, I think it is better that you post this map in map development, until it reaches 1.0?
You can still update this thread, and have a link in your development forum though.

When it reaches 1.0, contact me, and I'll move it back to pending status.

ok thanks

 

[trebla ratilla]

Since this is still Beta, I think it is better that you post this map in map development, until it reaches 1.0?
You can still update this thread, and have a link in your development forum though.

When it reaches 1.0, contact me, and I'll move it back to pending status.

Done, Protect your ally War of Beast is already version 1.O

 

[StoPCampinGn00b]

Set back to pending by request / Rufus' word. It should be reviewed sometime soon, trebla.

 

[trebla ratilla]

Set back to pending by request / Rufus' word. It should be reviewed sometime soon, trebla.

thanks StoPCampinGn00b

 

[Paillan]

Ummm... that map description is very poor... can you choose your heroes? how much time do you need to win? can you win at all? are there waves? if so, is there time between waves? Does the tree do something? what happens if you die? this and more questions are not answered by your description.

Set to Awaiting update
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[deepstrasz]

1. There should be more than 1 hero. Every player is the same hero.
2. There are only three items.
3. There isn't really much to do than stand still and wait for the enemy to come. No objectives in the rest of the map. Basically you don't even get to see the rest of it.

Overall feels like an unfinished map.

Awaiting Update.

 

[trebla ratilla]

1. There should be more than 1 hero. Every player is the same hero.
2. There are only three items.
3. There isn't really much to do than stand still and wait for the enemy to come. No objectives in the rest of the map. Basically you don't even get to see the rest of it.

Overall feels like an unfinished map.

Awaiting Update.

Done. All errors has been fix. Hope you enjoy playing ...

 

[deepstrasz]

It's an improvement, however 7 items are quite few for various strategies when all four players play at a time.

 

[trebla ratilla]

It's an improvement, however 7 items are quite few for various strategies when all four players play at a time.

Okay, Done update version 1.4 deepstrasz

 

[kirbyfish]

Noice!

 

[Lord_Marrowgrath]

Here is my review

Terrain: 5/5

+Smillar terrain from Temple Battle. It looks unique again and dont have any path problem.

Heroes: 3/5

+4 Heroes with diffrent playstyle.
-Passive abilities not powerful for hero defense map.
-Flamethrower have only 2 targetable abilties. (also ultimate) Game becomes boring when you just doing auto attack.

Items: 3/5

+I love the less item idea. There is a one shop and 12 items. It's not confusing players.
-It's hard to get items on early game. Towers are too powerful on phase 1-2. It's hard to acquire gold.
-There is no upgradeable item.

Gameplay: 2/5

-Waiting for phase duration too long. 40-50 seconds just waiting for mobs and it's short for camping neutral creeps.
-Towers are too powerful on early game and they become weak on late game.
-Ancient tree dont have attack or Hp recover itself.
-Heroes dont have unique abilties to crush enemies.
-Creep level increases too early. You wipe everytime without playing AI (I mean friends).
-AI becomes powerful than you. They have instant item buildç

Overall: 13/20

Here is my Suggestions.

>add HP regeneration to Ancient tree.
>add Tower upgrade for each phase. It will reduce tower damage on early game.
>add Unique Aoe Abilties for Heroes. Single targeting spells meaningless on Hero defense.
>add item upgrades to become more powerful on late game.

The game looking beautiful and It needs improvements.

 

[trebla ratilla]

Okay, thank you for a very nice review. Done update!

 

[BoleSrbin023]

Really nice and interesting map! 5/5

 

[trebla ratilla]

Really nice and interesting map! 5/5

Thanks BoleSrbin023 Try Version 1.1.0 !! New update

 

[Lord_Marrowgrath]

Okay, thank you for a very nice review. Done update!

It's much better. 4/5 for now and +4rep

 

[trebla ratilla]

It's much better. 4/5 for now and +4rep

thanks @Lord_Marrowgrath https://www.hiveworkshop.com/members/lord_marrowgrath.209690/