-Elenai's Comic Gallery-

[Elenai]

Thanks guys ^^ as for the red...he just blushes real bad like I do.

But I think I am going to take a break from chibis for a while...I'm getting bored with them.

 

[Hawkwing]

Also, I think you should show a bit of the upper torso in the picture. Just a really little bit, too much will ruin the cuteness.

 

[Naze]

But I think I am going to take a break from chibis for a while...I'm getting bored with them.

\Naze cheers

 

[Hawkwing]

I'm getting bored with them.

Me too.

 

[Vegavak]

Troll

I have begun to experiment with a pencil shading sort of style. Here is my result. I hope the experiment worked.

Mr Burns fell in love with the evil wizard Jafar. I love it. Time to write some slash!

 

[Elenai]

tutorial

I'm so clever... ^^

 

[LiOneSS]

wtf?

 

[HappyTauren]

wtf?

 

[frostwhisper]

wtf?

 

[Elenai]

^_^

_________________

 

[Kyrbi0]

"Him"? I thought for sure Elenai was female.

Or at least feminine...

 

[Elenai]

TURTLE!

AM I NOT TURTE'LY 'NUFF FOR THE TURTLE CLUB!?

 

[frostwhisper]

That was one fucking major thread cleanup.

Anyways, nice turtle.

 

[HappyTauren]

Yeah, I like the colours. Nice concept though.

 

[Naze]

The bullets are ctrl+c and ctrl+v.

 

[Squiggy]

I'd change the pupil - it looks a bit weird compared with the rest.
If it's not made by hand, you could redraw the circles/ellipses - in general, nicely done

 

[Elenai]

Gwaihir

Gwaihir, the Lord of Eagles, this is the 'full version' of Hawkwing's requested avatar. His avatar version will of course be cropped and etc. But the full version is here for all to enjoy, as per tradition.

 

[Pyritie]

That shading is all over the place.

 

[Hawkwing]

Thank you very much. ^.^

 

[Elenai]

That shading is just fine for the purpose it serves, an avatar.

 

[Hawkwing]

That shading is just fine.

Agreed.

 

[Pyritie]

No, it's not.

 

[HappyTauren]

Py is right, it's misplaced.

 

[Elenai]

Take your fight elsewhere py, it will not be started here.

 

[frostwhisper]

Then explain where, what and how.
Don't go posting "No it's not, no it's not, no it's not"

 

[Elenai]

I'll just ask more qualified experts on the matter, DA has enough tutorials to satisfy my needs, and at much higher quality.

 

[Pyritie]

Well, for example, where is that light from his mouth going?

And the wings and tailfeathers: why is every feather shaded exactly the same?

 

[Elenai]

Because I wanted to shade it that way. Its an avatar...not a masterpiece

 

[Pyritie]

So? The shading's still wrong.

 

[Elenai]

Right for my purposes. Discussion closed, prepare for the next art piece at a later date, and I'll make this one how I see fit as well.

 

[Naze]

Py, I think that the main problem of the lightning is that every feather is shaded the same.

But it doesn't really matters, the head of the eagle is awesome.

 

[Hawkwing]

I'm sorry I have to say the unspoken word but... seriously. Shut up you two. You both have your reasons and you both don't want to give in, but just keep them to yourselves.

 

[Elenai]

Here is a sample of the new art style I will be applying to future creations.

A WIP of Lon, in a slightly caricaturization of his HIVE online personic form (as I see it).

I will be making a Grecian style pantheon of various HIVE users in this style, and Lon (samuraid)will be the first...though I'll probably redo this one.

Sample

 

[Kyrbi0]

Niiice. Very flowy and smooth lineart. Is (s)he supposed to be legless, though?

 

[Elenai]

Well, the robes are covering his legs

 

[Angry_Bovine]

He's kinda... uh... thin? Unless that's part of the character, then it's fine. I just think it looks not-masculine-enough as is.

 

[Elenai]

Well, it is meant to be the character, though like I said, probably redo it.

 

[frostwhisper]

Now this style pleases my eyes.

 

[brad.dude03]

Right for my purposes. Discussion closed, prepare for the next art piece at a later date, and I'll make this one how I see fit as well.

God damn you're such a fascist.

 

[Elenai]

Yes I am.

 

[Naze]

Sorry Elenai, but something forces me to talk about that thing (I have to say now, until it is too late, right?)

I attached an image for a better explanation. At the first part of the image attached, you can see the hand the guy, wich I think the arm is too large. Making it thinner would look better. Also, the jaw of the man shouldn't be there, I mean, look carefully where it is placed.

Dude, that's awesome. The lines and the design of the piece are really cool. And the face deserves to be pointed, it is awesome. I suggest some kind of long hair. It wouldn't hurt

 

[Elenai]

Very perceptive, and many thanks.

I'll be redoing it most likely, but a very keen eye there /naze.

lol, I put the jaw too far foreward. Excellent eye, +rep.

 

[Elenai]

Some pencil style line art drawings for you ^^

When swords falter, and armour fails...It is often only the stalwart heart, filled with courage, that drives men forward

The Hearts Of Men

Locked away in his tower...wrestling with a will far beyond his own...

The Madness of Denethor

 

[donut3.5]

Oh goodness, crop circles. Are the Haosis invading?
Anyways, the new style you're developing is interesting, very cartoony jaws.
--donut3.5--

 

[Elenai]

Oh goodness, crop circles. Are the Haosis invading?
Anyways, the new style you're developing is interesting, very cartoony jaws.

lol, indeed they are

And thanks on the compliment ^^ I am not exactly sure where these new jaws came from lol.

 

[Squiggy]

I like that smiley on the field and nice shading by the way on the second picture

The first one is not exactly my style - it looks a bit melancholic

 

[Elenai]

Melancholic? (I know what it means...but what do you mean?)

 

[Squiggy]

It seems like a symbol to 'oh my god, life's hard but I need to get through it'

 

[Pyritie]

Locked away in his tower...wrestling with a will far beyond his own...

That's a very hard pose you chose, and it shows that your foreshortening could do with some work.

 

[Naze]

Yes, the crop fields got Haosi'd...

I liked the first one, the design and the lines were very thin, wich makes it looks cooler IMO.

At the second, the lines you used to make the walls and the other lined stuff were too "noisy", and I think that's why I thought the whole draw was weird, lol.

Is it me or you like long-haired men?