1. This is one map. The Campaign tag is invalid. Change it with Medieval/Warcraft and whatever would fit.
2. Coarse Slice is a passive ability with an active icon. You could change it to passive with this:
Button Manager v1.8.2
3. Buff is still Berserk when using Desperation.
4. Toggart doesn't come to attack (aside from appearing out of nowhere). You can heal and wait until you're ready.
5. Units selected during cinematic mode and unpaused.
6. Linear gameplay.
Anyways, it's too simple. Not enough custom stuff for how little time it lasts.
Substandard.
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