(2)Viper Forest

[mafe]

This map is somewhat similar to your "Blizzards Isles" map, and even if some of the criticism from that map still holds, this one is more interesting: The middle area is somewhat asymmetric, however I think it is within acceptable limits so I like it, as it gives the map some character.
The spider drop is slightly stronger than what is common (lvl 3 item for lvl 10 creepspot). I am also not a fan of manaburn creeps, as a loss of mana is often mcuh worse than losing some hp, in particular in the earlygame.

 

[deepstrasz]

1. I know you like Warcraft II flat type terrain but this is Warcraft III man
2. I guess two Mana Burn units are too much for a camp which also has chaos attack type units. However, you could fix this with a mana item (rune/potion/permanent) drop assuming one of those always drops.
3. Boots of Speed on the three spiders camp, I don't know. The Blademaster might get that item quite early. Also, that group might drop Pendant of Energy. You might want to give less boosting items to easy camps.

Awaiting Update.

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[The Panda]

1. I know you like Warcraft II flat type terrain but this is Warcraft III man
2. I guess two Mana Burn units are too much for a camp which also has chaos attack type units. However, you could fix this with a mana item (rune/potion/permanent) drop assuming one of those always drops.
3. Boots of Speed on the three spiders camp, I don't know. The Blademaster might get that item quite early. Also, that group might drop Pendant of Energy. You might want to give less boosting items to easy camps.

Awaiting Update.

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Ok! i will fix these whenever i can.

 

[The Panda]

*Bump

Fixed the spider camps drops.
Fixed some terrain and added hills.