Threads of Fate Ch 1

[Moderator]

21:36, 27th Nov 2009
ap0calypse: Approved

 

[Kl3sk]

Uh uh uh!! -KingB00ker-s second cinematic! Sweet! Some one's gonna get +Rep if this one will be just as good as the first. *Hint Hint* ~Watches~

- Edit : I don't know how to put this, but seeing the Slithereen Guards' (or what their names are) skins almost made me "j1zz 1n my p4nts"!! Damn you B00ker, you've done it again! Great story, impressive model / skins (as usual) but I still can't give you a 5/5 because some parts where slightly delayed, and I'm talking about combat and text (When Tojora asked :"What?..." it took like 15 seconds before anyone could reply, thus the camera still remained pin-pointed at him)
There's also the slight terrain problem, where seeing the Naga camp from above, it looked very amateurishly done, with the exception of the well-placed doodads that almost covered it up.
I want you to keep pouring in the good quality maps -KingB00ker- , may you keep uploading chapter after chapter of "Threads of Fate"!!
- Voting 4/5 No doubts about it : Approval! +Rep (again)

 

[tyranid51112]

Will go and watch this and see how it turns out looks epic, i think im gonna enjoy this campaign

 

[Luffy]

I watched the both two episodes. It's style looks like eastern animes, but I can say it's interesting and should be a nice one. I am waiting for more episodes, you should mix up all the episodes under one season at last. Keep making them.

EDIT: Some of the dialogs are going out too early and I can't track them. Make longer their duration.

 

[Revolve]

Gonna check this out, as I see the first one Review coming soon.

EDIT: Here comes my review.

Terrain looked better in this one. I just didn't like the sky and some clipping at some places.
Story-wise it was quite entertaining, exciting and had action. What I don't like however, is that you have not explained much more about the characters. They stubble upon protecting a sacred meeting that occurs every 100 years? If they are that powerful, then you should really explain how they could become so powerful, we haven't seen much background history.
Cameras and effects was nice, everything was very well timed. Overall I would just like you explaining more, not just skip all the chat and go straight to action, but that's IMO.
And btw, very anime

Rating would be 3/5, it is a rather short cinematic so I really can't give more for it. Keep working

 

[KingB00ker]

Thank you for all of your replies

Well yes, I watches some animes... but I don't watch fighting animes such as bleach, Naruto, etc.

So if the fighting style is 'anime-ish' it's a coincidence

For the character introduction, I gonna introduce why they are very powerful in the next arc, not this arc .

BTW, I'm asking for you opinion.
Do you prefer a villain who becomes villain because he/she has a dark past (typical, isn't it?) or a villain who is evil because he/she is naturally evil (lol) or because he/she's very ambitious.

 

[Revolve]

Dark past I'd say. Make him go deep, a reason till why he does as he does, he can't just be plane evil. Also, most of the times, villains believe what they are doing IS good.

 

[Luffy]

an original and interesting idea would be perfect. such as he/she is evil because he/she had some insane happening which is affecting him/her psychologically. This would be count as dark past I guess. I say, it should be a mix of dark past and ambitiousness.

 

[Bananite]

Not the greatest but i'd hope you know that. But i liked this game. I'll be waiting for the chapters to come for sure. 4/5

 

[Luffy]

I don't want to bug but I am getting curious about the next chapter kingbooker

 

[Vengeancekael]

As a member of the group Map Reviewers, I will be checking approved cinematics again:

Compatible - X

Permission - X

Map already uploaded - X

Rules - X

Bugs - X

Genre - X

Section - X

Category - X

[X = Passed]
[X = Failed]

 

[deepstrasz]

3/5.
Seems interesting but it's too soon to tell.