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[Moderator]

19:15, 23rd Nov 2009
ap0calypse: Approved

 

[Revolve]

Gonna take a look at it, review comin in a min

 

[Kl3sk]

Just as a suggestion : add a screen-shot, it might convince more people into downloading it. Cheers!

- Edit : Thanks for adding the screen-shots! I'm gonna watch the cinematic now! ^^

 

[Vengeancekael]

Improve the description, it's a rules violation!

 

[KingB00ker]

Sigh..., you expect description in cinematic map.
What you should do is downloading it and watching it.

Very well maybe I should add some screenshots..

 

[Narrat0r]

Nice, not bad, good... but, now optional: why don't you upload your legendary "Mortal Wrestling" to the Hive?

 

[KingB00ker]

Nice, not bad, good... but, now optional: why don't you upload your legendary "Mortal Wrestling" to the Hive?

Cuz, Mortal Wrestling is in Indonesian and I'm too lazy to translate it.

BTW thx for the comment.

 

[Shion_Uzuki]

nice effect, that bear is too small lol, and the story is not really interesting, but nice one ^_^

 

[Kl3sk]

KingB00ker , this Opening is really promising! I can't wait to see what else you have in mind, but one thing's for sure : this story must go on!
Favorite lines : "lol, I over-killed them!" and "This is what they call "gang-bang" in human language" XD!
Nice story , good effects , great models (Jorn and Tojara) - Rating 4/5 - Voting for Approval!

+Rep for the entertainment value!

 

[KingB00ker]

KingB00ker , this Opening is really promising! I can't wait to see what else you have in mind, but one thing's for sure : this story must go on!
Favorite lines : "lol, I over-killed them!" and "This is what they call "gang-bang" in human language" XD!
Nice story , good effects , great models (Jorn and Tojara) - Rating 4/5 - Voting for Approval!

+Rep for the entertainment value!

Thx. Rep for you too.

Oh btw, I'll appreciate you more if you rate it lol. (I mean click and hover)

 

[Freeze87]

Nice Cinematic, but you can set that Transmission from units last little longer,i barely read text +Rep for you work!

 

[gert123]

Very nice! I realy liked it and I cant wait to see the rest of the story.I wish that the battles lasted a little longer.I barely read the text because it disapears too fast.Good Job.

 

[Revolve]

Heres my review btw;

Terrain was rather Meh. Many places were not even terrained, and such. Also you could see the end of the world couple of times. You shuold also have used the whole map for terraining.

Music was rather nice indeed. Sound effects were well used aswell.

Story was okay I guess. Some things were abit too unspontanious. The battle was a bit too short, and I really knew that the turtle would be the one saving them.

Effects were awsome. Very well done on many points.

Overall I think it's okay, I give it a rating of 3/5.

 

[duke-zip]

no music ? or maybe i need to reload warcraft... i will relook at it then

i also wish i could host this on bnet and you added some player slots

 

[The Mechanic]

Ok. I will give you the good news first:

Some cool fighting effects.

The fight with the elf reminded me of Luke and Darth vader vs The Emperor in Return of the Jedi

It works.

And:

There was almost no character development, I know its an intro, but at this stage the characters aren't very interesting at all.

You have large continuity errors.

You have also get some kinda of weird water effect going on. ie: There are wave effects in the air. This is probably caused by the bright yellow light.

Also you have got quite a lot of grammar errors.

I will give it a 3 for now.

 

[Aznpride3]

Fights are to easy? maybe you should make some of them a challenge instead of them just over-killing everything?

Other than that nice effects, good models, good lines lol, I over-killed them!

 

[KingB00ker]

Ok. I will give you the good news first:

Some cool fighting effects.

The fight with the elf reminded me of Luke and Darth vader vs The Emperor in Return of the Jedi

It works.

And:

There was almost no character development, I know its an intro, but at this stage the characters aren't very interesting at all.

You have large continuity errors.

You have also get some kinda of weird water effect going on. ie: There are wave effects in the air. This is probably caused by the bright yellow light.

Also you have got quite a lot of grammar errors.

I will give it a 3 for now.

Oh thanks for your comment.

Yes, as you've said. It's an intro so I won't develop the characters in this chapter. I'll develop it later as the story continues

The weird water effect is there because I made it from waterfall, but when I rotate it, the particles didn't move (maybe I need some help)

lol, yes I realise many grammar errors, but I'm too lazy to fix it.

Heres my review btw;

Terrain was rather Meh. Many places were not even terrained, and such. Also you could see the end of the world couple of times. You shuold also have used the whole map for terraining.

Music was rather nice indeed. Sound effects were well used aswell.

Story was okay I guess. Some things were abit too unspontanious. The battle was a bit too short, and I really knew that the turtle would be the one saving them.

Effects were awsome. Very well done on many points.

Overall I think it's okay, I give it a rating of 3/5.

Yes I made it in one day, lol. So the terrain is meh.
I know the empty one is when Jorn kills the first harpy.

It's an intro so the battle is short, I'll make longer battle in the next chapter.

Thx for your comment

 

[thedeathunterxx]

ill watch it.

 

[Vengeancekael]

As a member of the group Map Reviewers, I will be checking approved cinematics again:

Compatible - X

Permission - X

Map already uploaded - X

Rules - X

Bugs - X

Genre - X

Section - X

Category - X

[X = Passed]
[X = Failed]

 

[deepstrasz]

2/5.
Should've told his story in this chapter. As it's now it looks like a cheap cartoon.