The Puzzle

[twojstaryjakcie]

I'm sorry to say that, but this map is completely unplayable at this stage. You'd think that you'll have to spend a long time figuring out how to get to the finish line, but NO. You just right-click on the bottom right corner of the map and if you're the first player to do that, you win the game in a matter of a minute or two. Props for the bait traps scattered around the map, but they can't be the only obstacle on your way to the finish. Maybe make the finish line appear randomly at the start of each game so that the game actually make sense; maybe add some abilities like getting other players' vision or pushing them into traps or something like that, because right now, this map is a joke.

 

[MadnessTheKey]

I'm sorry to say that, but this map is completely unplayable at this stage. You'd think that you'll have to spend a long time figuring out how to get to the finish line, but NO. You just right-click on the bottom right corner of the map and if you're the first player to do that, you win the game in a matter of a minute or two. Props for the bait traps scattered around the map, but they can't be the only obstacle on your way to the finish. Maybe make the finish line appear randomly at the start of each game so that the game actually make sense; maybe add some abilities like getting other players' vision or pushing them into traps or something like that, because right now, this map is a joke.

Thanks for the feedback!

 

[deepstrasz]

Everything looks the same. Uninteresting terrain, gameplay. Just repetitiveness. Click to the end and that's it if you're lucky not to get through doodads and near units/regions that instantly kill you.
Fun factor is low. It's more like the author is making fun of the players.

Please take a look at the existing Escape, Puzzle, Maze maps on this site and learn from them.

Set to Substandard.

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[Championfighter25]

Sorry man, but the map in it's current state needs massive improvements
- Using actual walls instead of fountains
- Better terrain
- You will need to upload screenshots
- You will need to improve the description
- The map is too short. Beat it in less than 5 minutes.
- You will need to explain what the player must do and what to watch out for, i know it's pretty obvious, but keep this in mind in a future version when you make it more complex.
- Insulting the player by saying ''what an idiot'' is not nice. Some people will feel sad, offended and quit the map.
For now 1/5 . But keep on improving it and don't let these reviews discourage you. You can make something good. Looking forward to the next version