Tank Arena B
Played your map once , checked it twice with the World Editor
Results:
Rating:
1 - How easy to learn it (8%)
Map is easy to learn, except it takes time to know what to do, there were plenty of texts, buildings, units in the begin, which makes it confusing, also there werent much information written in Quests, except the Credits and Changelogs.
2 - The systems of the map (14%)
The systems werent very good, for them being leaky, buggy, like you can control your tank if you are fast and use all of a big tank abilitys, arrow movement system totally sucks (i will give you a better one), many items had shared cooldown (or that is ment?).
3 - The introduction to the map, graphics, models, cinematics, and terrains (16%)
Terrains were ok, graphics were good, models were very good, though they had hell of a size.
4 - The size of the map (more compressed = better) (3%)
Imported files are very not optimized, you should optimize them, because they took ~2 MB of the map total size, you can reduce it to only 1 MB. (i cant help you with this, i suck with models/icons)
5 - The amount of bugs/leaks in the map (3%)
Some bugs seen (most of those i saw are mentioned in System category), and dozens of leaks seen also.
6 - How much the maker worked (4%)
You worked very well on the map, still more work needed to be done.
7 - The base idea of the map (9%)
Map idea is very good, but not perfect.
8 - Is map balanced? (8%)
Map is fairly balanced, except that item/tank prices arent balanced.
9 - Map Originality (5%)
Map is original.
10 - Text's Language/Grammar (3%)
Many errors seen
Overall Rating: 73% Good map, can be excellent if improved
My tips as an advanced map maker:
-Clean all leaks
-Fix all bugs that were mentioned
-Fix or re-look at your texts, many of them have mistakes
-Remove possible selection of the tank, by adding the Locust ability
-Simplify the map, by removing useless units for useless players
-Optimize imported files size
Map Reviewed.
If i made any mistake, you can respectivly remind/tell me about it.
off-topic: if you have got a messanger, add me
[email protected], just for the movement system or questions.
also, good to hear that you found the trigger.
also will check the other map soon, there might be a delay.