Well if you dont like that one, check out my The Wolf Prince story. Not alot of people have seen it but the ones that have do like it. And if ya could post something, I dont want to double post to get it back on the front side of the scrypt/screenwriting forum and I would very much like for people to read the story so far. And theres a poll because I want to know if people like it, if not I'll just leave it be and not worry about writing more of it.