Warhammer - All Out War

[Loolazo859]

I like it

 

[Ardenaso]

Some screenshots would be nice

 

[deepstrasz]

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Screenshots could attract more players to download your work.

A credits list is required where the names of the resource (models, skins, icons, spells, sound etc.) authors are mentioned along with the specific resource. It would be a luxury to have links leading to the used resources.

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General

-there is no description/text on the loading screen
-it would be a good idea to remove the things from the credits list that did not make it to the game
-player one's (red) camera start point is not where the units are but somewhere south in the fog of war
-there is no information in the Quest Log; would help players a lot; credits could go there as well
-some heroes have glow, others don't
-many buildings and units don't have DIBTNs meaning their icons will look like green squares on pause/F10
-units need proper descriptions not like: "builds... things"
-the terrain needs a lot of work: tileset variation, doodads etc.
-all heroes have the same spell
-the camera position at the start might represent the task of the player?

Player 1/red

-the Herald has no DISBTN; same goes for his ability which is called Battle Roar when learned and has the icon of Roar there
-the idle worker icon looks like an Acolyte, not Peasant
-the Barracks requires a larger selection scale

Overall, needs work. It looks unfinished/unpolished. Would be nice to have objectives and more stuff to do than build and train countless units.
Set to Awaiting Update.

 

[Hazop / Sarven]

How do you add DISBTN?

 

[deepstrasz]

How do you add DISBTN?

Complete Icon Tutorial - All About Icons
You need an icon named DIS[name of the icon].blp.
(example: ReplaceableTextures\CommandButtonsDisabled\DISPASBTN + IconCustomName + . IconFormat = DISPASBTN_cat.blp)
This program can help you modify an icon to look like a disabled one: Button Manager v1.8.2

 

[Hazop / Sarven]

Complete Icon Tutorial - All About Icons
You need an icon named DIS[name of the icon].blp.
(example: ReplaceableTextures\CommandButtonsDisabled\DISPASBTN + IconCustomName + . IconFormat = DISPASBTN_cat.blp)
This program can help you modify an icon to look like a disabled one: Button Manager v1.8.2

Hey I tried uploading a image but It did not work..

 

[deepstrasz]

Hey I tried uploading a image but It did not work..

Can you be more explicit? What do you mean upload? We're talking about the import manager. You need to put it in your map.

 

[Hazop / Sarven]

Can you be more explicit? What do you mean upload? We're talking about the import manager. You need to put it in your map.

I mean that for the description to have a screen shot. Like a spoiler button that reveals it.

 

[deepstrasz]

I mean that for the description to have a screen shot. Like a spoiler button that reveals it.

You first need to upload the image on your profile as media and then link it in the main post or use an external image uploading service like imgur (not recommended over the first suggestion).

 

[hypsandar]

Judging from the screenshots, this looks epic.

 

[deepstrasz]

The Black Orcs and the Orc Commander have the same spell. The one for the hero has no description mentioning the damage bonus it gives if it is not read while in the learn ability menu.
Orc commander spell=Empire commander spell but with different icon (!?).
The terrain is a bit eye hurting with those repetitive tiles and cluttered copycat trees.
Why not nurture the techtree a bit? There's only one upgrade and two buildings to construct that are not present from the start. Some upgrades, some abilities, something, I don't know.

Set to Awaiting Update.

 

[hypsandar]

Do you plan on making an AI? I tried this in singleplayer as Empire, it was fun expanding around but it would've been cool if the enemies were as well.

 

[Hazop / Sarven]

Do you plan on making an AI? I tried this in singleplayer as Empire, it was fun expanding around but it would've been cool if the enemies were as well.

I don't really no how to make AI but I will try and work something out.

 

[deepstrasz]

A detailed changelog in the first post would be helpful to reviewers and notify fans about the newest implementations to your map.

What did you update with this time?

 

[SNIper of DARKness]

You may want to consider expanding the map.

 

[Hazop / Sarven]

You may want to consider expanding the map.

Where exactly? And what would I do with that space?

 

[deepstrasz]

Much better changes.
How does calling the 5 goblins work?

Approved.

 

[stein123]

will you add more factions in the future?

 

[Hazop / Sarven]

will you add more factions in the future?

I plan on adding Dawi (Dwarves) into the mix maybe even chaos or elves, Its just I need to expand the map more increase its size.

 

[cleavinghammer]

Needs an income timer.
Hero revives with less than full life.
It's hard to tell the dark green trees apart from the ground.
Charge's tooltip is unchanged from Battle Roar.
Stables and Siege Workshop have the same hotkey.
Farm, House and Tavern have tower tooltips.

Imperial:
Halabardier-> Halberdier
Steam Tank is affected by Mantlet Guard, Mortar and Great Cannon are not.
Mantlet Guard uses Devotion Aura tooltip.
Reiksguard can't target buildings.
Tooltip for Sigmar's Light reads "Adopt Sigmar's Light"

Orc:
Barracks uses Fortress icon, Encampment uses Barracks icon.
Troll Artillery has messed up animation: they throw the rock before their arm swings.
Gather a Waaagh! does nothing and only has one level.
Troll Smashers hurt themselves when using attack ground.

Bretonnians:
Grail Knight's Charge does nothing.
Aura circle doesn't show up on the Knight of the Realm model.
Bretonnians have the same siege engines as the Imperials.
Settler's ability does nothing.

 

[Hazop / Sarven]

Needs an income timer.
Hero revives with less than full life.
It's hard to tell the dark green trees apart from the ground.
Charge's tooltip is unchanged from Battle Roar.
Stables and Siege Workshop have the same hotkey.
Farm, House and Tavern have tower tooltips.

Imperial:
Halabardier-> Halberdier
Steam Tank is affected by Mantlet Guard, Mortar and Great Cannon are not.
Mantlet Guard uses Devotion Aura tooltip.
Reiksguard can't target buildings.
Tooltip for Sigmar's Light reads "Adopt Sigmar's Light"

Orc:
Barracks uses Fortress icon, Encampment uses Barracks icon.
Troll Artillery has messed up animation: they throw the rock before their arm swings.
Gather a Waaagh! does nothing and only has one level.
Troll Smashers hurt themselves when using attack ground.

Bretonnians:
Grail Knight's Charge does nothing.
Aura circle doesn't show up on the Knight of the Realm model.
Bretonnians have the same siege engines as the Imperials.
Settler's ability does nothing.

The farm and house and tavern arnt supposed to be buildable, Cavalry inst supposed to be able to target buildings, Gather A Waaagh is work in progress, Also betonnians use trebuchets, Impeirals use Mortars, cannons, etc.
Settlers ability allows him to settle... Your points are valid to a extent, and require reviewing.

 

[cleavinghammer]

As in, the Bretonnian building produces Imperial guns, and the Bretonnian settler does nothing when told to settle (it worked for the Imperial one).

 

[Hazop / Sarven]

As in, the Bretonnian building produces Imperial guns, and the Bretonnian settler does nothing when told to settle (it worked for the Imperial one).

Also the Lady's Protection, I didn't change the tooltip much cause it already suited what I needed, The Bretonnian Settler works just fine...

*Update*
Fixed

 

[Emperor Lucas II]

For Sigmar! For the Empire! For the WARHAMMER!

 

[Kasrkin]

Spoiler

Grail Knight charge ability does nothing but is clickable
I don't think the income changes from the gain of 20 even when building new towns or upgrading them
The troll smasher can attack ground itself to death?
The Bret settler stopped being able to found settlements after I made two.

 

[Hazop / Sarven]

Spoiler

Grail Knight charge ability does nothing but is clickable
I don't think the income changes from the gain of 20 even when building new towns or upgrading them
The troll smasher can attack ground itself to death?
The Bret settler stopped being able to found settlements after I made two.

k... First of fall this map is expecting an update, second of all "The Bret settler stopped being able to found settlements after I made two" population surplus BOI
Troll Smasher I can fix dat

 

[BrothForMyPeople]

I love this map.