Trollland v1.14

[trebla ratilla]

nice map

Spoiler: notes

-the terrain needs improvement add crates, barrels, flowers or any which make it nice. add grass textures not just only dirt textures
-make the path of the creeps clearer
-add several screenshots - to attract more players on your map
-fix your map description just add credits - if you use a custom models ( you should write their names because they do hard work to make a models/icons/skins ), changelog - to know if there's a changes in your map and screenshots
-remove the "create building spell" from the Soul, just delete all structures built on it. find techtree - structures built
-the spell should be arrange properly. 1st,2nd,3rd not just random. sample :

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-Why the Gate still invulnerable after i destroy all the troll towers and Troll Totem at the right side bottom
-Why pikachu was their? then also a pokeball item but its okay i love it very much. "mixed unit" cartoon and wc3 characters
-i think you should lower a little bit about the price of the items
-mods were okay, i choose hard mod ( +8 players ) its so really tough to handle the creeps but i can handle them but one reason i didn't kill the boss because i didn't know how to open the gates of my enemy.
-just add a guide on the quest log how to open the opponent gate
-i think you should increase Punpuns damage and armor a little bit. he dies easily

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[Vajk]

Thx for the feedback!!! To answer some of your questions see the spoiler

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-Why the Gate still invulnerable after i destroy all the troll towers and Troll Totem at the right side bottom
You have to clear all lanes to open the gates (both at the same time --> "new lanes" with stronger creeps, but i will update the quest log)

-Why pikachu was their? then also a pokeball item but its okay i love it very much. "mixed unit" cartoon and wc3 characters
It's a troll XD There are some more funny features (lotr references, names, etc.), we just added everything to the map that came to our mind XD

-i think you should lower a little bit about the price of the items
do you mean the normal items or in the secret shop, but we will think about it to reduce some ginding

-just add a guide on the quest log how to open the opponent gate
Thought i had done it but i will check again and update it to be more specific

-i think you should increase Punpuns damage and armor a little bit. he dies easily
Just how did Punpun die? XDDD
It levels with your heros = same level as your highest hero lvl in the party

 

[trebla ratilla]

Thx for the feedback!!! To answer some of your questions see the spoiler

Spoiler: Q&A

-Why the Gate still invulnerable after i destroy all the troll towers and Troll Totem at the right side bottom
You have to clear all lanes to open the gates (both at the same time --> "new lanes" with stronger creeps, but i will update the quest log)

-Why pikachu was their? then also a pokeball item but its okay i love it very much. "mixed unit" cartoon and wc3 characters
It's a troll XD There are some more funny features (lotr references, names, etc.), we just added everything to the map that came to our mind XD

-i think you should lower a little bit about the price of the items
do you mean the normal items or in the secret shop, but we will think about it to reduce some ginding

-just add a guide on the quest log how to open the opponent gate
Thought i had done it but i will check again and update it to be more specific

-i think you should increase Punpuns damage and armor a little bit. he dies easily
Just how did Punpun die? XDDD
It levels with your heros = same level as your highest hero lvl in the party

- oh! okay i understand now so that's the reason why i didn't destroy the gate
- yeah, i love when you add more easter egg not only just pikachu
- just the normal items its to hard to make gold. reason : gold didn't increase periodically but that's okay you need to kill the creeps to make your gold increase

Edit : oh! that's why punpun die. i'm still level 10 when punpun die

Overall, you improve now your description now and the gameplay is better.. just wait for a reviewer to have more feedbacks on your map . good job and keep it up

 

[deepstrasz]

1. Magical Sword does not have a proper DIBTN. That icon looks like it is still active. You can use this program to create a proper disabled icon: Button Manager v1.8.2
2. How do you upgrade items? OK, so you have to destroy those wards. Quite counter-intuitive. What about some text about this somewhere?
3. Purchase Gold Coins has its description in Deutsch.
4. Punpun has no hero glow. You can add one: How to add Hero Glow without Modeling
5. Tome of Knowledge restock cooldown too slow compared to Tome of Power. The difference is 10:2.
6. The terrain is not too nice. It has 1 tile per zone.
7. Items should have 0 cooldown. I mean those which are supposed to be combined. It's already bad that you have to have two types of the same level to combine them for the next level... Plus you have to get items out of the inventory and back in every time. Maybe an item carrier or a different way to upgrade like runes (items; like tomes which do not get into your inventory)?
8. I hate the random cat sound. I know it's "taste" but it's totally unneeded.
9. I'm not commenting on the Warcraft III spells.

Awaiting Update.

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[Vajk]

Map has been updated!

Spoiler

1. Magical Sword does not have a proper DIBTN. That icon looks like it is still active. You can use this program to create a proper disabled icon: Button Manager v1.8.2
DISBTN added
2. How do you upgrade items? OK, so you have to destroy those wards. Quite counter-intuitive. What about some text about this somewhere?
Quest added
3. Purchase Gold Coins has its description in Deutsch.
Removed
4. Punpun has no hero glow. You can add one: How to add Hero Glow without Modeling
She does have the hero glow, but i change the teamcolor to black and now it's almost invisible
5. Tome of Knowledge restock cooldown too slow compared to Tome of Power. The difference is 10:2.
fixed and cd reduced
6. The terrain is not too nice. It has 1 tile per zone.
edited
7. Items should have 0 cooldown. I mean those which are supposed to be combined. It's already bad that you have to have two types of the same level to combine them for the next level... Plus you have to get items out of the inventory and back in every time. Maybe an item carrier or a different way to upgrade like runes (items; like tomes which do not get into your inventory)?
cd now zero
autoupgrade if you have two items of the smae level and can upgrade them
p.s. why is it bad to combinde the same item if the next level has stats doubled?
8. I hate the random cat sound. I know it's "taste" but it's totally unneeded.
-miau to disable it
9. I'm not commenting on the Warcraft III spells.
dont know what you mean...

 

[deepstrasz]

p.s. why is it bad to combinde the same item if the next level has stats doubled?

Because of the inventory's max of 6 slots.

dont know what you mean...

The spells aren't quite custom. They're pretty much generic Warcraft III ones.

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