(44 ratings)
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- In the first scene I found the camera moving into the hallway to reveal Rowena a bit unnecessary.
- Most of the voice acting was great. And aside from that, the fact that there was voice acting was awesome.
- Henry's voice was quite robotic at times.
- Reege's voice sounded a bit unemotional and unatural, sometimes because of the deep voice and other times because of the lack of pauses in speech.
- There were some punctuation errors here and there.
- No spaces after periods.
- Unneeded commas.
- The terrain was amazing, but I noticed a few problems here and there.
- The occasional rocks on the mountainside, outside of Reege's tower, seemed really unnecessary.
- The tints in some of the shrubs, in the scene where Henry is talking to his uncle, is a bit off.
- Henry's uncle's voice was extremely deep.
- The camera work when Henry wakes up on the ship is beautiful.
- The sound and music choice is very professional, keep it up.
Thanks for the feedback, Hawking.
Reege's voice is supposed to sound unnatural because, well, he was in Black Riverside for almost a month and even though his voice still sounds strong it lost some emotion, so the lack of pauses in the speech were intentional.
Hmm, I thought I always put a space after a comma...
The tints in some of the shrubs? I'm sorry but I don't understand, do you mean the color or...
And I intentionally wanted William's voice to be deep.
Thanks for the feedback, it will surely help me improve in later parts![]()
Maybe because it's a cinematic and is meaned to be watched? Just Alt+F4 if you wanna close it.well, I wil not tell this is "awesooome 5/5 !!!11 becouse it isnt. The little overaverage map here on hive, 4/5 maybe, but in the prison scene, the carpet or whatever it was, was badly placed and was "bugging" al over the time (i dont know how to tell it better)
Why the hell it doesnt have Cinematic-skip trigger???
well, I wil not tell this is "awesooome 5/5 !!!11 becouse it isnt. The little overaverage map here on hive, 4/5 maybe, but in the prison scene, the carpet or whatever it was, was badly placed and was "bugging" al over the time (i dont know how to tell it better)
Why the hell it doesnt have Cinematic-skip trigger???
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/6607/75863952ky5.jpg .This is ingame also and it is very ugly to see when camera moves. I ask only becouse of this "25) Unit Placement - Superb (6)" Is this placement linked to doodads also?
well, I wil not tell this is "awesooome 5/5 !!!11 becouse it isnt.
The little overaverage map here on hive,
but in the prison scene, the carpet or whatever it was, was badly placed and was "bugging" al over the time (i dont know how to tell it better)
Why the hell it doesnt have Cinematic-skip trigger???
Even a socrates said, that opinion of majority DONT have to be truth.
Ehm, when you watch TV, you cannot turn it off? Lol, your excuse is nonsence.
And YES, i saw many GOOD cinematics, just like Cult of the Damned, The Vision trailer, the Spirit of Vengeance, Shipwrecked part 7, Retribution, Unforgotten Grudge...
And ALL this much better maps have skiping trigger. And for me, the opinion of some anonyms users on hive or moderators, has no value.
And ALL this much better maps have skiping trigger. And for me, the opinion of some anonyms users on hive or moderators, has no value.
See, i am on this site for 4 years, and one more year on wc3sear.ch before. If I give 4/5 (and that still is very good resolve) and some user is attacking me, i think that someone else didnt see other cinematic, not me
http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/6607/75863952ky5.jpg .This is ingame also and it is very ugly to see when camera moves. I ask only becouse of this "25) Unit Placement - Superb (6)" Is this placement linked to doodads also?
Seriously, now you're just fishing for bad points. Today's average graphic cards, such as mine, negate this effect so I missed it. I did raise the carpet, but not enough for your card it seems.
I ask, is this map really good as for example Spirit of Vengeance
"The little overaverage map here on hive, " meaned this map is over-average then other cins on hive. sry for my english.
An opinion normally occurs with sort of arguments explaining ur point of view.So I need to tell why i gave -20% that others? no, lol. IMHo it doesnt deserve 5/5 so why do I need to tell why -20% ??
having people behind u saying :"wow great I cant wait to see the next part" motivates more than "I cant give it the average rating for a reason I dont know".And if you want motivation then ok "awesooome 10/5" so you dont want motivation to improve your maps, you need motivation to make more maps just like this "awesome", and nowhere to grow. Strange
Im gonna try that taking the oldest still affordable and buyable graphic card which I got and Im gonna try to watch it, I guess in that case the cinematic still gets 4/5 rofl.And that " http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/6607/75863952ky5.jpg .This is ingame also and it is very ugly to see when camera moves. I ask only becouse of this "25) Unit Placement - Superb (6)" Is this placement linked to doodads also? "
is becouse if it have more than 100% (which is nonsense at all) it can fit all grafic card created. The judging points are nonsense.
nice, you just dont care about the mapwell, thats all for this map. (btw, why did you wrote smthg about ur world and geografic, I dont need to know it, and it doesnt make this map better if it isnt included)
ok last warning but first some points have to be cleared
So I need to tell why i gave -20% that others? no, lol. IMHo it doesnt deserve 5/5 so why do I need to tell why -20% ??
And if you want motivation then ok "awesooome 10/5" so you dont want motivation to improve your maps, you need motivation to make more maps just like this "awesome", and nowhere to grow. Strange
And that " http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/6607/75863952ky5.jpg .This is ingame also and it is very ugly to see when camera moves. I ask only becouse of this "25) Unit Placement - Superb (6)" Is this placement linked to doodads also? "
is becouse if it have more than 100% (which is nonsense at all) it can fit all grafic card created. The judging points are nonsense.
well, thats all for this map. (btw, why did you wrote smthg about ur world and geografic, I dont need to know it, and it doesnt make this map better if it isnt included)
I second Septimus rating. This cinematic is extremely well done and worth watching it. The character are great, the voice acting is astonishing and the whole outcome is fabulous.
you know what is funny? anythink I said is wrong, you still say "no no it is not". Same with the missing cinematic-skip trigger, it would be a word of man to say "ok ok, my fault" but not, you still have your excuses.
you will never learn how to take critic
but i will have to stop this thread, cos some "mighty people" dont like ppl with other opinion, and no, i dont mind you in this case.
so, none "k, my map could have skipping trigger, thx for acumen"
I expected it.
Ehm, are you trying to be funny? Other genre of maps dont have to have skipping, there is a gameplay, which cinematic doesnt have.
Just quit while you're ahead, restor. I've already neg repped you twice and if you continue I'll move onto an infraction. You're being a cunt, stop it.
You've stated your views, he says he doesn't agree, so stfu. You're not trying to persuade him, you're not trying to argue with him, you're giving critique -- not Critic, just a side note.
okay slow down a minute,
dont give -rep, itz not his fault that he doesn't know jackshit about cinematics.
So lets teach him :
Continue? with what? this all is discussion about this map. Or is a discussion here prohibited?
And see that it isnt me who is miscalling others. I am writing about MAP, others are attacking ME, you too. Who is cunt now? hmm
I ask, is it correct ,if someone tell that your map didnt have one trigger, to tell him right away "You clearly are not a person who values a good story." Or it is only excuse or solid argument.
And why cunt? with what hmm? You can QUOTE my words exactly to find anything "flaming"