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Chaosy's review on Breken, the Vile Fiend
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CONCEPTLOREPRESENTATIONMECHANICSCOMPLEXITYBALANCEIMPLEMENTATIONTOTAL10 POINTS Is the hero idea valid with the chosen theme? Is the concept original and/or well modified? 10 POINTS Personally I don't think this suits the theme. It's a big spider with some extraordinary poision. The keybinds are odd. The language is horriblly written and there are countless grammar failures. 2/10 10 POINTS Is the lore compatible with the hero? Does the lore paint a clear picture of the hero? Is the lore specific enough in terms of origin of the hero? Does the lore fit with the overall map theme lore? Describes the origin of the character but lacks deph and well.. information. You give a decent base story, but if you want to give your hero/character deph you really need to develop the story with more info. And as said before, it's horribly written, while there aren't spelling mistakes the grammar is very bad and there are missing words at various places. 3/10 15 POINTS Are the hero stats, attributes, abilities, lore and other shown in a clean, readable user interface (UI)? Did the author use enough graphic material to represent his or her hero idea to the fullest? I really like the prentation style here. It's clean and informative. And it's very charmy as well. I truly love the color combination. Full score, no doubt. 15/15 20 POINTS How does the hero mechanics work with each other? Are the spells synergistic between each other? How difficult this hero's play style would seem for an average player? Lacks synergy, but there are multiple skillshots and the ultimate seems really interesting as well since the summoned minions has their own abilities. 15/20 10 POINTS Are the hero mechanics as complex as necessary? Does the complexity level of the hero provide fun and interesting gameplay? If yes, why? I like the ability concept when it comes to ability depth, you take the abilties a step higher and manage to keep it at a simple level. Even though the utlimate can be really hard to controll depending on how you want to design the minions to work. If you want them to be controled manually it could be a little too much. But if there is a pet system or something.. 9/10 25 POINTS Is the hero balanced for the chosen map theme? Are the abilities, stats or attributes shown break the balance in some way? Is the hero in a playable state as described or it needs rework? If yes, what needs to be changed and why? The hero seems a little weak damage wise, but he brings plenty of cc to make up for that. I'd say he is pretty balanced but leaning towards being among the weaker heroes. 22/25 10 POINTS Can this hero be created into the chosen map? If yes, what is the complexity required for a playable state? Approximately how long would an average creator need to create this hero? There shouldn't be any problems to add this unless you want a AI system for the ultimate. Even though you need above basic knowledge to create skillshots. 9/10 CONCEPT (2/10) LORE (3/10) PRESENTATION (15/15) MECHANICS (15/20) COMPLEXITY (9/10) BALANCE (22/25) IMPLEMENTATION (9/10) TOTAL (75/100) |
Where's the results?
I'll double post for everybody to be notified. I can't believe, now I do agree with sentrywiz's opinion about reducing the poll from 25% to 20%.
Please recalculate if you wish, if there's any errors please say it.
RESULTS FOR IC #2 MYTHICAL CREATURES
| Entry Name | Author Name | Finished WIP | Chaosy's Score | Jopi's Score | Public Poll/Vote | Final Score | Place |
| Jhesh'Nu, Guardian of the Underworld | Sentrywiz | Yes | 87 | 85 | 0 (0%) | 64.5 | 1ST PLACE |
| Morikk the Dwarven Prodigy | Nolyp | Yes | 84 | 85 | 0 (0%) | 63.37 | 2ND PLACE |
| Atryxar the Archfiend | Mythic | Yes | 87 | 82 | 0 (0%) | 63.37 | 2ND PLACE |
| Malendis, Creature of Darkness | GreeN!X | Yes | 77 | 86 | 3 (17.65%) | 61.87 | 3RD PLACE |
| Merlinae, The Fairy Sorceress Knight | Templassassin | Yes | 58 | 55 | 1 (5.88%) | 42.62 | Participated |
| Raza'rr, the Blade Tempest | Nightmare | Yes | 80 | 82 | 3 (17.65%) | 61.5 | Participated |
| Romagus the Time Elf | Daffa the Mage | Yes | 49 | 77 | 1 (5.88%) | 47.5 | Participated |
| Zeineia, The Mistress of Hell | Sclammerz | Yes | 79 | 75 | 0 (0%) | 57.75 | Participated |
| Mandalgor, The Dragon Overlord | Fang | Yes | 77 | 48 | 0 (0%) | 46.87 | Participated |
| Gor'thir'hel the Blood of Gore | Edge45 | Yes | 86 | 69 | 1 (5.88%) | 58.37 | Participated |
| Chiron, Centaur Grand Hunter | Dawn | Yes | 81 | 79 | 0 (0%) | 60 | Participated |
| Breken, the Vile Fiend | Dhika axe | Yes | 75 | 64 | 0 (0%) | 52.12 | Participated |
| Furnace, the Missing One | Ukn0wnd3str0y3r | No | 0 | 0 | 0 (0%) | 0 | Participated |
| Garuda, the Mythical Bird | Darko_Darkking | No | 0 | 0 | 0 (0%) | 0 | Participated |
Only the poll saved me. But you are the winner if we will be basing from the judges' scores.
I was really harsh on that one.
