The Capital City

[lesnarpower12]

I just finished the map .Its very good wish awesome terrain.And i have some suggestions about it.How about adding levers for the city gates???I believe it will be a better way to enter the city than just smashing them down.I also suggest adding a cidadel in the center of the map.Also i have an idea about creating some kind of enents,for example have the city to be in lockdown while at nighttime and during this have bandits to spawn at random mecenary camps in every quater and start attacking random bases.As the time pases the attacks will become more numerous and with better tactics perhaps.(please tell me your opinion about my ideas)

 

[Championfighter25]

I played the map and here is my review:
-The description can be formatted better.
-Isn't it supposed to be capital city?
-In the map info there is no need to write kill with a capital letter,since it doesn't start a new sentence.Artifacts is with only one s,not two.
-I see you have put a lot of work in the terrain and because of that the map looks awesome!Good job!
-I think replacing a few of the orange creep camps with green ones especially near the player's starting location won't be a bad idea
-I think each mercenary camp should have different units,to have a little bit more variety
Other than that the map is very good!You get a 4/5 from me +rep!

 

[bojanpet55]

Oh yeez does are some nice ideas, ill actually add some of them inside the edited version, but this for now is supouse to be a normal standart melee version. I also have a version when its 12 players vs PC : bandits but it still in the making , first wanted to see how it will play out

I just finished the map .Its very good wish awesome terrain.And i have some suggestions about it.How about adding levers for the city gates???I believe it will be a better way to enter the city than just smashing them down.I also suggest adding a cidadel in the center of the map.Also i have an idea about creating some kind of enents,for example have the city to be in lockdown while at nighttime and during this have bandits to spawn at random mecenary camps in every quater and start attacking random bases.As the time pases the attacks will become more numerous and with better tactics perhaps.(please tell me your opinion about my ideas)

 

[bojanpet55]

I played the map and here is my review:
-The description can be formatted better.
-Isn't it supposed to be capital city?
-In the map info there is no need to write kill with a capital letter,since it doesn't start a new sentence.Artifacts is with only one s,not two.
-I see you have put a lot of work in the terrain and because of that the map looks awesome!Good job!
-I think replacing a few of the orange creep camps with green ones especially near the player's starting location won't be a bad idea
-I think each mercenary camp should have different units,to have a little bit more variety
Other than that the map is very good!You get a 4/5 from me +rep!

Yea i wanted to add more green camps at the starting locations but it is suppose to be a 3man working team, so i prefered to have 1 slightly easy orange camp than 3 green camps, and yea typos happen xD , Tnx a lot for the reply !

 

[kirbyfish]

Noice

 

[deepstrasz]

1. To avoid enemy players starting near you in less than 3v3 matches, you can use the triggers in this map: Skeletal Coast v1.3
2. The map does not look symmetrical. Some buildings are placed farther or closer to some players than others (example: Way Gate placement; usually the neutral buildings in the center are asymmetrically placed; the shipyards on the east shallow water crossing are not placed on the same side as in the west).
3. Most mines have the same amount of gold. Why not diverse this a bit depending on the neutral camps protecting them?
4. The east side river does not have murlocs near the shipyard like the on the west side. Instead there's another group of sea elementals.
5. I suggest a Way Gate on the other hydra island for balance reasons, one which takes you back. This isn't Heroes of Might and Magic and not a solo game. Besides the map is huge.
6. Overall, I think some two more gateways would be good since moving your units by Zeppelin and or Ship isn't a fast way to travel and it's also inconvenient.

Awaiting Update.

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[bojanpet55]

1. To avoid enemy players starting near you in less than 3v3 matches, you can use the triggers in this map: Skeletal Coast v1.3
2. The map does not look symmetrical. Some buildings are placed farther or closer to some players than others (example: Way Gate placement; usually the neutral buildings in the center are asymmetrically placed; the shipyards on the east shallow water crossing are not placed on the same side as in the west).
3. Most mines have the same amount of gold. Why not diverse this a bit depending on the neutral camps protecting them?
4. The east side river does not have murlocs near the shipyard like the on the west side. Instead there's another group of sea elementals.
5. I suggest a Way Gate on the other hydra island for balance reasons, one which takes you back. This isn't Heroes of Might and Magic and not a solo game. Besides the map is huge.
6. Overall, I think some two more gateways would be good since moving your units by Zeppelin and or Ship isn't a fast way to travel and it's also inconvenient.

Awaiting Update.

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Okey so :
1. The trigger didnt seem to work for this map it just crashed it .
2. Its not suppose to be symmetrical . But yes i did change it a bit now so its more even , ( moving the taverns and shipyards , aswell as the Way Gates ) .
3. Most of the mines hade the same amount of gold but the far ones had less. But yes i agree and i changed it . The camps closes to the main base have 15k gold, the mines closest to your opponent have 12.5k and the goldmines near the main entrance of the city have 10k now.
4.Yes i know i wanted to add a little spice to it , but i changed it now ( i know the camps are not the same length to the shipyard on both sides, but one side is closer to the top team and one side is closer to the bottom team ) .
5. Done !
6. Now there are 4 gateways , and i think that should be enough .
7. I also reduced the size of some of the creep camps in the middle and added 1 extra red creep camp.
Waiting on reply !

 

[deepstrasz]

1. The trigger didnt seem to work for this map it just crashed it .

You just have to correctly adapt them to your map.

Changes made,
Approved.

 

[Svetli]

Nice map! Congratulations for its approval and good luck for further @bojanpet55!