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Here's another WiP, hopefully my last one before it's finished, still a way to go though, if there is a mistake I haven't caught it yet.
“Are you sure you saw him die?” The man was in his late forties, his brown hair starting to grey slowly within his neatly trimmed beard and his hair as it fell about his shoulders. His garb was white, bordered by crimson. Both his cloak and doublet had a four point crimson star on a silvery flame; in the center of the star was a white eye with a golden pupil: the crest of the Lord Regent of the realm.
“Aye, m’lord. Stabbed through the heart, he was. Died right ‘fore my eyes, he did. Six moons ago.” The Lord Regent studied him for a moment, weighing his words carefully.
“I’ve seen the Commander suffer many wounds that no mere man can suffer. If you’re certain he is dead, this is bad news indeed.” The peasant allowed no time for consideration before he spoke once more.
“And they lopped off his head, an older man, twice your age methinks, my lord. Told him his time to serve as a mortal was complete, whatever that may mean.” He looked weary, as though he had not understood what had transpired with the Commander, giving him a sincere tale, sure enough.
“Thank you. Lydia, see to it that this man is fed well and paid a silver for this information,” A woman rushed to his side and took him by the arm then led him out of the chambers. “Galtor, you have the tower and command here until I return, I have much I must look into.”
Galtor was a large man, his voice was larger still and many people were compelled to obey the booming voice, but he spoke little. His words were filled with both wisdom and command, making him the idea advisor and guard commander. “My lord, if you would allow me, Elgrid has been sighted not more than a fortnight ago. I am certain of it. I trust this particular source, it has not steered me wrong in my life.”
“Indeed so, walk with me Galtor.” He stood from his seat, affixing a seal to one last document, then strode out of the chamber, his white cloak flowing about him and the big man at his heels. As he walked by the door he grabbed a solid white oaken staff that was laid on several pegs, in the crown of the staff was a sapphire within several gnarled claws. “I have reason to believe that your source is right, as well as this man. Though, that is what troubles me.” He turned down a flight of stairs into a courtyard, where dozens of young men were training with swords, shields and bows. Commands rang out over the hum of bowstrings, the ring of steel and the thump of the shields blocking the blows. Still, the Lord Regent’s voice was heard over the commotion.
“You don’t believe it to be brigands do you?” Galtor was no stranger to the ways of brigands, but to suggest that they were able to kill the most resilient man he had ever seen would suggest a ploy that was well thought up. It was obvious that Galtor was brooding on the threat of an assault on the city, it would be a heavy blow to order in the realm. “I don’t think they would be this organized, let alone be so bold to attack Elgrid; even more so foolish to execute him and don his armor.”
“It wouldn’t be foolish if they had a way to fool everyone into thinking he is still alive and try to ransom him back to us for a large sum, only for us to receive him as an imposter and pay for nothing. It would be a fitting place for brigands, they’ve been few and far between for six years now, but I fear that is not the case.” The noises of the training yard were behind them now, the grounds were quiet. Outside the keep the city bustled with noise and people; within the walls it was relatively quiet save for the training that occurred within the courtyard outside the southern entrance from dawn until dusk. They took a left down a walkway that had shrubs growing alongside it; the building at the far end of the walkway was nestled within a grove on the edge of a small pond.
“What are you suggesting, then? We have no enemies, not in plain sight. Nor would they dare attack a high ranking officer of the Lord Regent.” The big man’s rugged face furrowed at the thought of an open attack and war.
“I’m suggesting a foul magic, an enemy far worse than one you can fight with steel. I believe it to be the work of necromancy.” They neared the building, a young red haired woman bowed as they walked past her and stopped at the door.
“You’re not serious now, are you? The thought of such a thing is just…”
“Just what, exactly, Galtor?” He beckoned the woman over to him and handed her his staff, “Return this to my chambers.” She bowed once more and scurried off, fearing the wrath of Galtor.
“It’s ill-suited of the Lord Regent of the realm. You know that it can’t be. That’s a ridiculous assumption.” His big mail-clad hand rested upon the Lord Regent’s shoulder gently, “I know you’ve believed in many things that most think myths and simple tales, and seen more than what’s told in those, but listen to me, my friend. There are much more pressing matters than the ramblings of those dusty tomes. Knowledge is power, yes, but the right knowledge. If you study the wrong thing it’s like taking an arrow to match a ballista, you’re just fooling yourself. Leave this be.”
He stared straight at Galtor’s eyes, “You’re my most trusted friend, and you’re also most suited to rule while I’m gone. Find the man you see most worthy of command while I find the bottom of this.” He wheeled, brushing off the mailed hand as it balled into a fist aside as he opened the door and slipped through it, shutting it behind him.
“Damnit Lorcan, don’t be a fool!” Galtor shouted as his fist struck the door with a loud thump. His footsteps could be heard as he stormed off back to the tower.
The sun was low on its descent, painting the sky a deep red-orange when Lorcan emerged from the archives. The air was filled with smoke and the scent of roasted meat. Faint sounds of laughter, shouting and other noises that accompany a mess hall floated down from the third floor of the tower, echoing between the walls of the keep. He slowly walked across the courtyard, his long shadow fleeting before him as he made his way back to his chambers.
The door opened quietly, Galtor was sitting in his seat milling over documents writing something with concern on his face, though he never looked up, he spoke as Lorcan neared. “A woman came today. She said she needed to see you, but when I told her to wait here she stormed out, nearly took the door off as she went.”
“Nyiah.” That was a name he hadn’t heard in some twenty years; one that he hadn’t hoped to hear. “She and I once traveled together. I see she hasn’t changed.”
Galtor looked up from his papers, briefly, taking a moment to affix the seal of the Lord Regent to a rolled parchment. “Yes, the five of you, Elgrid, Nyiah, Ace, yourself and…” his voice choked as a tear filled his eye, “and my sister.” He placed the seal and quill on the desk. “The four of you survived, but she did not. How am I supposed to forgive you for letting my own blood die, Lorcan?”
“I don’t ask for your forgiveness, I never have forgiven myself, it is a memory that haunts me to this day.” He looked out the window, past the big man and seemed to be lost in a living horror that once was.
“We’ll live with it as we have, but there is a worse fate than death for my sister. A ranger came today, speaking of seeing Elgrid around the Warrior’s Tomb. Irony, it would seem. I dispatched him to warn sentries around the city, something strange is happening here. Reports have been coming in of those once dead seen walking. Shadowy figures of people in the woods that do not make a sound, and have golden eyes. I’m not sure what to make of it.” He ran his fingers through his hair and sat back with a heavy sigh. “What if all this necromancy is what you make it out to be, what would we be looking at here?”
“A war we cannot win.” His words were cold as ice and hard as steel, cutting a chill into both men. “If the dead can be risen, those who would raise them would command a numerous host; and with each battle as his enemies fall he would rise them as unflinchingly loyal soldiers.”
“But wars are not all attrition, you told me that once.” A woman’s voice cut in. It was soft and sweet, but Lorcan knew that was the only thing soft and sweet about her. He turned to face her, her eyes were a light but fierce blue; her auburn hair fell down to the middle of her back in a thick braid, her skin was a light tan. Her body was slim and toned. She wore a mailed vest on top, though it looked like it might have been one size too small. Perched on her shoulder was the handle of her axe as she held it one handed, on her left hip was a small crossbow, on her right hip was a sword. He imagined she had numerous weapons concealed elsewhere. “Lorcan, it has been a long time.”
“Nyiah, I see you’re doing well.”
She smirked and set her axe down. “Not quite so well as you, Lord Regent.”
Galtor stood when she said Lord Regent and stepped around the desk. “Mind your tongue, girl.” She raised an eyebrow to the big man, “You’re talking to one of the most powerful men in the realm; it would be unwise to be insolent.”
She opened her mouth to deliver a whimsical retaliation but Lorcan stepped between them. “Peace, Galtor. She means me no harm; though I could defend myself if she tried.” Lorcan turned around and gave her a sly smile, but as he looked back to the big man he continued on. “We will ride at midnight, prepare two horses with supplies. Nyiah and I will discover the truth about all of this.”
Once the big man had left Lorcan turned to face Nyiah once again, but before he could speak she pressed her lips to his and drew him in close. Lorcan jerked free briefly from her, but her grip was not so easily broken. “That, I owed you.” She smiled at him. Suddenly his face was stinging in pain where her hand had slapped him. “That was for not telling me where you’ve been hiding.”
Also InfinateAnswers I like yours.
Sure, let's see some variation in the entries! (But he has to be a soldier)
Can it be like a death knight???
As a death knight is a hero that has been raised in the service of the lich king, yes.
I have a few questions:
1.When will mini-contest end?
2.Can this be in any time? e.g Medieval, Modern, Futuristic etc.
3.Can it be a story telling a story.
Also: I'm in, expect a Story before the judging Time.
Read the first post.
The Paragon
by _PV
The immense aura of decay looms
Whom the Prophet of death refused a mere boon
You might be asking I'm speaking of whom?
allow me to divulge this tale of doom...
The crisp morning breeze sent a chill
Drums of war echoes over the steep hill
the battalion marching against their own will
The endless hordes of evil whispering "Kill"
The sky darkens; arrows shall rain
It shall inflict more than enough pain
cavalry fall and warriors met their bane
The unscaved do fall into hypnotic feign
Shields are shattered as body meets steel
The collision had dealt a hefty deal
Infliction wounds not able to heal
Forced on their knees they proceed to kneel
Flesh rends, bone incinerate
The thirst for war can not be sate
The battalion forced back through the gate
The endless horde simply will not wait
The walls crumble under the siege bombard
The king out played his last card
"Teach them the meaning of die hard"
Out emerged the Paladin, wielding his silver targe
The impure are compelled to flee
Brandishing Vengeance, stop them; can he?
Purveyor of light, he shall be -
Purge the evil? We shall see..
Minion after minion die at the enforcer of light
Not only a display of pure finesse, but also of might
Forged by the god's, he is crafted to fight
For fight he shall, illuminating the beholder's sight...
The battle rages on as time slows down -
The King has fallen, he had lost his crown!
The victor had not as of yet been made known,
But all we know is the Threads of fate have been sewn...
Corpses litter the streets; the stench of death about...
The damage is dealt, there is no doubt.
All that remains is an insufferable lout -
Holding arms out towards the enforcer of redoubt.
The Paladin cleanse; the Warlock curse -
The Paladin exorcists; the pain disperse -
The harbinger of doom gives the paragon his worse!
Only to end up being under holy light; immersed...
The battle ends; the sun doth emerge -
The paragon of light cleansed the scourge!
Only at the cost of a great civil purge
suddenly the spirits dissipates as the prophet doth surge
"I have come for your soul" he asked with a grin
The paladin, exhausted, what will become of him?
The former paragon fades to black, part taking in sin -
Who will now bless the souls of his kin?
1000 years past as a kingdom of bodies teem -
The sun penetrates the air and places a thick beam;
Beaming on that specific spot for a specific reason, it seems...
the resting place of out former paragon is deemed.
Suddenly, the flowers decay and the beam dies
The animals merry is turned to cry
That same Prophet doth walk by
that same grin, same tone: "my, my..."
The vile grin doth play on his wretched countenance;
Surprisingly he had bested the disciplinary penance -
At the mere chant of a phrase, he interrupts the balance!
"Rise; Rise and feed!" his visage utter salience...
Woke from his slumber, the forsaken paragon rise -
it's hand burst through the earth's crust, death it denies!
An evil ploy - the prophet devised,
The fallen paladin; all but demised...
"You have been risen to fulfil my ploy -
come now, Don't be so Coy!"
The forsaken corpse lifts it's lifeless carcass from it's resting place
"Off to commit utter Calamity and chaos.. Shall we make haste?"
The Prophet and his unliving minion now roam the lands
In the name of what he once faced, now against what he for did stand...
Holy shit that was really good.
You should use hidden tags though.
There was a story about a famous soldier who returned from the dead and this is his story.
The Generals of the human army disliked the very end of the soldier who had a great potency to swordsmanship.he was sent on a mission by the very general who hated him to kill a deathknight at rivers of lordareon who haunted the city of lordareon.he traveld from his city to lordareon he found some orcs who are about to kill the king of the city he killed the orcs and as a repayment he was given the hellbringer a sword which haunted its user about how the sword slayed countless humans.
he departed again to the river he went where he would see the deathknight.he wanted until dawn he heard the horse of the deathknight
he armed himself for battle as he slayed the death knight.years past and he led the army as an award for killing the deathknight . His pride for being a general blinded into his own muder.During the scourges quest to find a soldier so strong that he can shatter the very well structures of a wall.a ghoul found the body of the soldier and the ghoul brought the body to the necromancer and brought the soldier back and so the soul of the soldier filled with vengence..
Thats the story of the famous soldier who returned from the dead
Holy shit that was really good.
You should use hidden tags though.