Story & Lore Mini-Contests ~ Reincarnation of a Dead Soldier

[Fussiler1]

Thanks for judging and posting this after Pharaoh couldn't. +rep

 

[Deleted member 212788]

Congratulations Riotz, good work on judging Dragonson. You are the Dragon

 

[Nicolas CB]

Riotz, _PV, Darthmechas, congratulations! Dragonson, thanks again for judging this contest.

 

[Firedragoner]

w00t 4th place...actually expected less than that seeing the number of talented writers.....thanks for judging and devoting your time to this everyone, especially Dragonson

 

[Da Fist]

Score: 19

Although the over-arching action of the story was somewhat generic, I must admit it had some interesting features that you don't tend to see often.
However, it is sadly riddled by quite a few bits of bad grammar that break the flow of the story.
It is also clear that you've got a whole bunch of ideas hidden away inside your psyche, and as with many others your problem is the execution of the storytelling, not the story itself.
Keep that in mind and keep writing.

In Short: Average, but in Greece!

Horray! Expected the *Bad Grammar* part, since English is not my forte. And the problem of storytelling, told to me plenty of times by my English Teacher that " You always go around the bush! Tell the story straighter! " or something similar. And Greek Mythology? Hell ( or Underworld ), I like that more than getting a chocolate ice cream for breakfast. And My Age Is

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12!

, so you'll see me more especially in contests to spread Greek Mythology

Happy to see the results out *unofficially*

Cheers Dragonson ( and other constants! )

-Da Fist-

 

[_PV]

Awesome, second place haha, Congratz Riotz on winning t'was a good contest ^-^

 

[Allain55X]

Awesome, second place haha, Congratz Riotz on winning t'was a good contest ^-^

Nice, _PV for making it to the top 3!

 

[Pharaoh_]

Eh, excuse me for this. I feel terribly, but I really can't control the damage of the contests at the moment. I will try to be more active in the fields, until I get 100% available in a week.

Sorry for the inconvenience and for playing with your patience, it was definitely not my goal.

Congratulations everyone!

 

[Deleted member 212788]

Thank you Pharaoh, don't sweat about it. Everybody has a life outside of the I-net and I believe we all know and respect that

 

[Codric]

Yeah thanks Pharaoh_.

 

[Maldruzard]

Darn, quite sad I missed this, I love writing Any plans on other lore/writing contests?

 

[Brambleclaw]

Wut 50% i was expecting less. Anyway gratz riotz xD

 

[Pharaoh_]

I already have a theme for the next one (two of them, actually!), but I will try to wait, until I am free again

 

[Allain55X]

I already have a theme for the next one (two of them, actually!), but I will try to wait, until I am free again

Wating for some more mini contest but wishing it can be finished even with a busy guy like me...

 

[RiotZ]

Wait what, I won. What the fuck? xD

Edit: I guess I'd better read my story LOL. Accidentally deleted it from my computer.