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Story & Lore Mini-Contests ~ Reincarnation of a Dead Soldier

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Congratulations Riotz, good work on judging Dragonson. You are the Dragon :)
 
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w00t 4th place...actually expected less than that seeing the number of talented writers.....thanks for judging and devoting your time to this everyone, especially Dragonson :D
 
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Although the over-arching action of the story was somewhat generic, I must admit it had some interesting features that you don't tend to see often.
However, it is sadly riddled by quite a few bits of bad grammar that break the flow of the story.
It is also clear that you've got a whole bunch of ideas hidden away inside your psyche, and as with many others your problem is the execution of the storytelling, not the story itself.
Keep that in mind and keep writing.

In Short: Average, but in Greece!

Horray! Expected the *Bad Grammar* part, since English is not my forte. And the problem of storytelling, told to me plenty of times by my English Teacher that " You always go around the bush! Tell the story straighter! " or something similar. And Greek Mythology? Hell ( or Underworld ), I like that more than getting a chocolate ice cream for breakfast. And My Age Is
12!
, so you'll see me more especially in contests to spread Greek Mythology :D

Happy to see the results out *unofficially*

Cheers Dragonson ( and other constants! )

-Da Fist-
 

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Thank you Pharaoh, don't sweat about it. Everybody has a life outside of the I-net and I believe we all know and respect that :)
 
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