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Vail and Gardon have raised their ''misfits'' pretty well. Larine, ehhhhh... Still though, they have big shoes to fill and considering what they will face in the future, those were rookie level accomplishments.
Garan:
A worthy commander who really knows what he's doing. He cares to learn from history and make sure he doesn't repeat other people's mistakes. I also like how Garan has inherited his father's assertiveness and non-openly expressed pity.
Zurae:
She made Gardon sincerely smile. She's certainly going places. A bit sad he doesn't pay her much attention though. Her skills are quite admirable, would certainly make a nice Grandmistress of a flame order.
Hotar:
He is certainly a good and kind soul. Those traits make him unique from the rest of the family, in a good way. I just hope his constant striving for improvement won't lead to something terrible happening to him.
Parlea:
Pretty sad. If it wasn't for her being a bastard daughter, those bullies would've been dealt with way sooner. And indeed, she is way too good for her own good. Sadly if she doesn't toughen up soon, she'll remain an insecure person for the rest of her life, allowing everyone to shame and bully her further.
Velina:
Don't really have much of an opinion on her. Seems like a cheerful, mostly innocent and a bit of an indecisive child.
A worthy commander who really knows what he's doing. He cares to learn from history and make sure he doesn't repeat other people's mistakes. I also like how Garan has inherited his father's assertiveness and non-openly expressed pity.
Zurae:
She made Gardon sincerely smile. She's certainly going places. A bit sad he doesn't pay her much attention though. Her skills are quite admirable, would certainly make a nice Grandmistress of a flame order.
Hotar:
He is certainly a good and kind soul. Those traits make him unique from the rest of the family, in a good way. I just hope his constant striving for improvement won't lead to something terrible happening to him.
Parlea:
Pretty sad. If it wasn't for her being a bastard daughter, those bullies would've been dealt with way sooner. And indeed, she is way too good for her own good. Sadly if she doesn't toughen up soon, she'll remain an insecure person for the rest of her life, allowing everyone to shame and bully her further.
Velina:
Don't really have much of an opinion on her. Seems like a cheerful, mostly innocent and a bit of an indecisive child.
The Strategist:
ruined casle -> ruined castle
us severly -> us severely
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The Magician:
severly -> severely
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The Soldier:
him move -> him to move
was a honest person with sharp tongue -> was an honest person with a sharp tongue
been severly -> been severely
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The Student:
halfblood -> half-blood
neccessary -> necessary
takes in one -> takes is one
Tojaz' -> Tojaz's
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The Archer:
slighly -> slightly
ruined casle -> ruined castle
us severly -> us severely
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The Magician:
severly -> severely
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The Soldier:
him move -> him to move
was a honest person with sharp tongue -> was an honest person with a sharp tongue
been severly -> been severely
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The Student:
halfblood -> half-blood
neccessary -> necessary
takes in one -> takes is one
Tojaz' -> Tojaz's
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The Archer:
slighly -> slightly