Chapter 5, I am not GLAD that there is no cake.
Also in chapter 9, either make invisible flying path blockers around southeastern island or make Ad'al(who is overpowered) landbased like in chapter 7, because I was just flying around with him, scouting the map and BAM! I am victorious. I haven't even killed the Doom Guard.
OK, as I have stated before, this alternate take on Blood Elves lore is your property and your vision we must play, but the chapter 10 seems like a wasted chance. I understand that you are not going to make further attempts at campaigns that take place during Cataclysm and further expansions (frankly I don't even know how would you do it), but chapter 10 you could make bit more canon lore friendly: Lady Liadrin with Blood elves and General Tiras'alan with Draenei assaulting the Black Temple, instead of portal of Burning Legion you could have shown invlovement of the Horde and the Alliance and by making it portals to Orgrimmar and Stormwind and maybe even a nudge for LEGION with Maiev (who might have joined Blood Elves, but seriously doubt Akama and her would fight alongside Legion) returning to Illidan's "dead" body. While it could be entertaining, I understand why you went this way, the Illidari still had to assault Tempest Keep.
Lastly, I have noticed it in eariler version and I think it was mentioned on this thread before, Lor'themar is no battlemage, I think "Protector, Grand-Ranger, Ranger-protector" or something alongside that line would be better.
Regardless, good game as always. Thanks!