PhantomBlade(#2)

[Moderator]

00:06, 22nd Feb 2015
Deolrin: As with your previous model - the changes you've made are good, but there are not enough of them! Try working on the helmet, chest, hair... A simple re-wrap should make it all much better. Try looking at Frankster's models - for example, this one: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models-530/bloodelf-phoenix-guard-50668/
That should give you some ideas about how you should approach model editing.

13:52, 5th Mar 2015
Deolrin: The updates make this model more than good enough for approval. This is your finest model yet - keep it up! Although the gem-eyes look a little bit strange, they are very creative and set the model apart from the in-game Warden and Dark Ranger, as well as other similar models. In-game, the model is sufficiently unique and looks great. One thing that I would change is perhaps mess with the blood-splats a little - right now she only has one blood splat, and it spawns a bit late in the Death animation, plus it seems to be night elf blood and not undead blood. Plus, maybe change the Death and Dissipate sounds to fit the undead better.

 

[Splub]

I like it! It's like if Sylvanas found Maiev's armor!

 

[Gokusek]

It's simple model, but i like it 8/10

 

[kangyun]

It's simple model, but i like it 8/10

thanks dude !

 

[kangyun]

I like it! It's like if Sylvanas found Maiev's armor!

 

[Direfury]

I don't think we've seen an undead warden yet. Very nice edit.

 

[Misha]

humm.. i think her chest needs a different texture..

 

[Heinvers]

humm.. i think her chest needs a different texture..

I think that it's good enough.

Maybe adding some particle effects to the attack anim to make her look more corrupted.
'love the idea.

 

[jonbon29]

Yeah I like it too especially the weapon.

 

[kangyun]

I think that it's good enough.

Maybe adding some particle effects to the attack anim to make her look more corrupted.
'love the idea.

thx for the suggestion
I'll try make some effect for her soon

 

[Direfury]

Maybe add a ribbon effect during her attacks and spell animations?

I assume you have Oinkerwinkle's tools, so I'd also suggest using Animation Transfer or something to add a second Warden 'walk' animation, with that new ribbon effect active, for the "Walk Fast" animation.

 

[kangyun]

Maybe add a ribbon effect during her attacks and spell animations?

I assume you have Oinkerwinkle's tools, so I'd also suggest using Animation Transfer or something to add a second Warden 'walk' animation, with that new ribbon effect active, for the "Walk Fast" animation.

sir can u teach me how to attach custom animate?

 

[takakenji]

the capes endsa re messed up

 

[A Void]

An undead warden? Very useful, it also doesn't require any new textures. Well done! 5/5

 

[GaLaxY_256]

DotA 2 PA in Warcraft III universe. It is amazing!

 

[-Grendel]

this is actually pretty fucking nice.

 

[NourmeusXL]

Its really nice for a first model.
Indeed deserves a cookie

 

[Stefan.K]

Nice one, dude.

 

[Paillan]

hmm, that glaive on the back doesn't suit her too much... It makes her look almost exactly like the original one.

 

[Kyrbi0]

This is pretty cool. I can't help but think that aside from the weapon & the backpiece, there's not much to distinguish her in-game (great undead-wrapping & holey cloak notwithstanding).

But that's a minor complaint; just means it's not likely to be seen in use with the regular Warden. Neat stuff!

 

[Maxwell]

Kangyun its awesome)) I really like it!

 

[kangyun]

meusXL;2655461]Its really nice for a first model.
Indeed deserves a cookie [/QUOTE]
Cookiesssssss!

 

[kangyun]

This is pretty cool. I can't help but think that aside from the weapon & the backpiece, there's not much to distinguish her in-game (great undead-wrapping & holey cloak notwithstanding).

But that's a minor complaint; just means it's not likely to be seen in use with the regular Warden. Neat stuff!

hope its helpfulfor ur map project

 

[kangyun]

Kangyun its awesome)) I really like it!

just artsense. have fun!!!

 

[L71292]

Nice! but please don't change her default weapon.

 

[GaLaxY_256]

It's DotA 2 type model, L71292

 

[kangyun]

It's DotA 2 type model, L71292

u right the idea was came form dota2 phantom assassin

 

[kangyun]

Nice one, dude.

thx due

 

[Deleted member 237964]

Nice one.Simple but good.Weapon design is interesting.

 

[Misha]

that chest tho xD
thumbs up on that. gives it a pretty different and unique look

 

[kangyun]

that chest tho xD
thumbs up on that. gives it a pretty different and unique look

Thx misha
as u said
change the chest skin.
but sir i is hard to fix the other "broken pieces"... sign~~

 

[Misha]

no-one said model-making is easy the amount of will to go and fix stuff, is what counts. or will to improve. I also have models that were somewhat half-assed and i still didn't find will to update them

 

[GaLaxY_256]

Powered PA?

 

[Gismo359]

Looks awesome! Just the armor texture doesnt really fit for an undead in my eyes. I would imagine it to be bit more like the death knight.

 

[Misha]

it's fine-ish to me, not all undead have to be the same

 

[Prince_Webby]

this is cool

 

[kangyun]

no-one said model-making is easy the amount of will to go and fix stuff, is what counts. or will to improve. I also have models that were somewhat half-assed and i still didn't find will to update them

you right!
and it is challenging~ I very enjoy it XDDD

 

[kangyun]

Powered PA?

immortal pa with Helm of dominator!!!!

 

[Cienfuegos]

Hey do you think you could make an earless version, for a undead human female

 

[kangyun]

Hey do you think you could make an earless version, for a undead human female

 

[Kyrbi0]

The new helm is interesting... But the eye-cover is just weird, IMO.

Nice changes, otherwise (except that torso-wrap... Ew)

 

[Bain_Rebirth]

I love the changes, it has a nice look to it but the armor itself, along with the animations, still strongly resembles the base warden model. There is a ton of nice edits, and this is one of the best models I've seen a beginner make.

Also, there is absolutely nothing wrong with it resembling the warden model, just thought I'd say what I thought.

 

[Misha]

I think this is sufficiently edited, Deolrin any further miiight make it bad.. i dunno

 

[kangyun]

I think this is sufficiently edited, Deolrin any further miiight make it bad.. i dunno

hope it is approve able...

 

[Stefan.K]

Nice update. I think you should remove that red glow from her eyes. Imo.

 

[kangyun]

Nice update. I think you should remove that red glow from her eyes. Imo.

remove it d
i hv replace it with team glow!

 

[Apheraz Lucent]

Banshee UW did an amazing job here.

Have you considered a different weapon? With the blades she has overhead, and double-edge she wields, there's just a liiiiitle too much blades in here for my taste.

Perhaps some long claws or katars, along with Shaman's attack animations if her won't fit?

 

[kangyun]

Banshee UW did an amazing job here.

Have you considered a different weapon? With the blades she has overhead, and double-edge she wields, there's just a liiiiitle too much blades in here for my taste.

Perhaps some long claws or katars, along with Shaman's attack animations if her won't fit?

I wish i noe how to edit the animation here T^T

 

[Misha]

It is fine, really.. let's not distract from what the author wanted, it's one thing to suggest stuff, and another to express an opinion