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PhantomBlade(#2)

Submitted by kangyun
This bundle is marked as approved. It works and satisfies the submission rules.
My 1st model, kinda simple hope u guys like it.
gv credit when use :)
updated add hero glow on weapon!
updated hero weapon glow!
back attachment fix!

Updated#1
Chest
Helm
Hair
no sure you guys will like it or not LoL
with the weird Helm I make.
Updated#2
adding some chain & skull on pauldron
attack slam sound

Keywords:
motred, phantom assassin, death knight, banshee, forsaken, phantom blade
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PhantomBlade(#2) (Model)

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00:06, 22nd Feb 2015 Deolrin: As with your previous model - the changes you've made are good, but there are not enough of them! Try working on the helmet, chest, hair... A simple re-wrap should make it all much better. Try looking at Frankster's...
  1. 00:06, 22nd Feb 2015
    Deolrin: As with your previous model - the changes you've made are good, but there are not enough of them! Try working on the helmet, chest, hair... A simple re-wrap should make it all much better. Try looking at Frankster's models - for example, this one: http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/models-530/bloodelf-phoenix-guard-50668/
    That should give you some ideas about how you should approach model editing.


    13:52, 5th Mar 2015
    Deolrin: The updates make this model more than good enough for approval. This is your finest model yet - keep it up! Although the gem-eyes look a little bit strange, they are very creative and set the model apart from the in-game Warden and Dark Ranger, as well as other similar models. In-game, the model is sufficiently unique and looks great. One thing that I would change is perhaps mess with the blood-splats a little - right now she only has one blood splat, and it spawns a bit late in the Death animation, plus it seems to be night elf blood and not undead blood. Plus, maybe change the Death and Dissipate sounds to fit the undead better.
     
  2. Splub

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    I like it! It's like if Sylvanas found Maiev's armor!
     
  3. Gokusek

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    It's simple model, but i like it :) 8/10
     
  4. kangyun

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    :ogre_hurrhurr:
    thanks dude !
     
  5. kangyun

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    :ogre_haosis::ogre_haosis::ogre_haosis:
     
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    I don't think we've seen an undead warden yet. Very nice edit.
     
  7. Misha

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    humm.. i think her chest needs a different texture..
     
  8. Heinvers

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    I think that it's good enough.

    Maybe adding some particle effects to the attack anim to make her look more corrupted.
    'love the idea.
     
  9. jonbon29

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    Yeah I like it too especially the weapon.
     
  10. kangyun

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    thx for the suggestion
    I'll try make some effect for her soon:ogre_kawaii:
     
  11. Direfury

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    Maybe add a ribbon effect during her attacks and spell animations?

    I assume you have Oinkerwinkle's tools, so I'd also suggest using Animation Transfer or something to add a second Warden 'walk' animation, with that new ribbon effect active, for the "Walk Fast" animation.
     
  12. kangyun

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    sir can u teach me how to attach custom animate?:ogre_love:
     
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    the capes endsa re messed up
     
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    An undead warden? Very useful, it also doesn't require any new textures. Well done! 5/5
     
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    DotA 2 PA in Warcraft III universe. It is amazing!
     
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    this is actually pretty fucking nice.
     
  17. NourmeusXL

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    Its really nice for a first model.
    Indeed deserves a cookie :)
     
  18. Stefan.K

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    Nice one, dude.
     
  19. Paillan

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    hmm, that glaive on the back doesn't suit her too much... It makes her look almost exactly like the original one.