Darkgamma:
This entry is a complete and utter cheat. I urge a moderator to go to the homepage of noteworthy composer (just google “noteworthy composer”), and download the free trial. Go to file, and click the option that says “Open Samples” there will be a file near the top of the list called “Caverns” If you open it, you will find that it sounds exactly like this entry. I am highly disappointed in Darkgamma and would expect better from anyone. This entry should be disqualified. I know for a fact that this song came with the original version of Noteworthy, which means that, even if Darkgamma is the real composer, the song was composed way before this contest started.
Rating: 0/0 Highly disappointed.
Drenferalis:
This is interesting, to say the least. I was certainly never bored while listening to it, and found it pretty entertaining. As it is, the music makes me feel more like I’m on an alien spaceship than in the warcraft universe, even if this is about elementals. Also, while it is interesting, and entertaining, it’s not particularly exciting. The music doesn’t really go anywhere, it stays at about the same level, volume, and mood for the duration of the piece. At the same time (although I have to give you credit for this, because I find it incredibly hard), the music meanders about, with no apparent goal or purpose. Yes, I know it’s about chaos, but I honestly did not feel the slightest glimpse of war. However, it was resolved pretty well in the end. In all I find that I can best compare this piece to pie with no filling. The crust on the outside is fun and delicious, but I lacks any substance or variation, since it has no filling.
Theme: 7/30
Creativity: 13/20
Dynamic/Tonation: 5/20
Composition: 15/30
Total: 40/100 Average
EMPerror:
I do seriously like this piece. It has an incredibly catchy theme, and is upbeat, entertaining, and exciting throughout. In terms of criticism, there are two main points I want to make. Firstly, while this is an incredibly catchy and well-written song, it is very clearly a had a race fitted to it, rather than a song fitted to a race. However, there is nothing wrong with it, and, while I probably wouldn’t think of water elementals if I were an average gamer hearing it for the first time, I can see how it could represent water elementals. Secondly, it is a tad length for a monothematic song. I have to admit, I was getting a little bored of hearing the same thing over and over near the end, but as soon as I felt that, it got into the final bit and ended very pleasingly. Also, you did do a good job of varying the theme enough to keep the song interesting, and, while, the song pretty much kept the same dynamic level for most of the song, it flows, all in all, very well. You did a great job with this.
Theme: 12/30
Creativity: 13/20
Dynamic/Tonation: 11/20
Composition: 24/30
Total: 60/100 Good
Fanny.Shaver (not on the poll, but I’ll still review it anyway):
This song had so much potential. My greatest criticism, and this is what really ruins the song for me, is those laser-sounding bits that enter throughout the song. They serve no purpose, as I can tell, and both wreck the tune, and detract from theme relevance. You really should have gotten rid of them and replaced them with light drums or something, because, behind them is a gorgeously serene melody which would have been one of my favorite of all entries for this contest. Now, I don’t want to only say what I didn’t like about this song. The melody was amazingly beautiful, and flowed very nicely. However, it does meander a bit, and follows no specific theme or pattern, but, then again, it is piano music. The ending, while it was okay, felt a bit unresolved and sudden, but was still pretty good.
Theme: 15/30
Creativity: 10/20
Dynamic/Tonation: 11/20
Composition: 15/30
Total: 51/100 Okay
JetFangInferno:
This is an excellent piano piece. While I don’t particularly think of humans, or really any race when I hear this, I can totally feel what you were trying to depict. Infact, I can see an entire film scene from a hypothetical Wacraft 3 movie playing out as I listen to this, the music playing in the background as we see a silent montage of what the war has both brought and taken. There were certain parts that sounded jarring, not because of tonality (the harmonic structure was superb), but because they seemed slightly offbeat. I don’t know if that was what you were aiming for or not, but I did find myself cringing slightly when I heard them. Still, though, the thematic development is great, and the piece flows very well, although the ending is a tad abrupt. All in all, this is a very good piece.
Theme: 17/30
Creativity: 14/20
Dynamic/Tonation: 17/20
Composition: 26/30
Total: 74/100 Very Good
KeleNoR:
This really isn’t all that good. It’s basically just the same drumbeat over and over again way too many times with seemingly random quiet things in the background. That being said, the drumbeat was pretty catchy, and I thought it had huge potential. As I heard it in the beginning, I found myself wondering where the song would go, only to find out that it did not go anywhere at all. After the first few playings of the beat, I found myself incredibly bored, and the little held notes in the background did nothing to help. If you had made the drums a little bit more quiet, perhaps it could act as background music, but, as it stands, the you would have to turn the volume up to hear the background notes during a game, and, at that point, the drums would be too loud for your to concentrate.
Theme: 15/30
Creativity: 5/20
Dynamic/Tonation: 5/20
Composition: 6/30
Total: 31/100 Lacking.
VoidLordXtreme:
This is really good, head and shoulders above many other entries. I won’t say it’s my favorite, because it’s not. However, the main theme was very well thought out, and the instrumentation and harmony were both brilliant. I’m going to break the piece down into sections because that’s the best way to critique it. The piece opens very strongly, plunging into the main theme. The theme is powerful, and brilliant. I like it a lot. Then however, the transition to the next part comes far too abruptly, suddenly halting and turning in bringing us to softer, yet still powerful part. For me, the transition was far too abrupt. If you had made this transition more smooth, perhaps by adding a diminuendo on a downward-moving melody, this next part would totally complement the first part. Then, however, we are smoothly transitioned back into the main theme, which repeats several times (almost to the point where I was bored, but not quite), and ends a tad abruptly, but still very nicely. In all, this is a superb piece. I am very curious what programs you used to make this, because I loved the sound of the instruments.
Theme: 20/30
Creativity: 12/20
Dynamic/Tonation: 14/20
Composition: 21/30
Total: 67/100 Pretty Damn Good
WaldBaer:
Pretty Good. Your choice for race was very good, and I can totally see how this song fits it. There were several points where this song sounded truly evil and militaristic. I could totally see the hordes of the legion marching to this. Also, your combination of the melodies and countermelodies played on the brass were truly brilliant. However, I did find the introduction rather slow, and the main theme came in rather late for me to consider it a true main theme. Furthermore, I really liked the melody introduced on the tuba, and thought that, while it was fairly simple, I really wanted it to repeat more times than it did. Also, the main melody, played on the trumpets and trombones, is also fairly simple, and sounds rather weak in the beginning, though it quickly picks up strength. Also, while the brass were an excellent choice for this race, and very well written for, I do think that you needed to also have some strings playing a clear, dramatic countermelody to the brass to add tension and emphasis where needed. Finally, while the ending was pulled off well, I was disappointed with it, because, considering the overall motif of this piece, I wanted it to end with a bang, and all I got was a rather soft ending. Still, though, you did a great job, and I do think that this piece was the best fitting for its race of all entries for this contest (except perhaps mine, but I won’t talk about that).
Theme: 23/30
Creativity: 12/20
Dynamic/Tonation: 13/20
Composition: 17/30
65/100 Pretty Good
Teuncreemers:
Definitely one of the better compositions in this contest. I thought that your harmonic structure and melodies were very well thought out and executed. That being said, I did not really think that this fit the Furbolg race very well. The opening part would be more suited to something like night elf or forest troll. However, when the xylophone (at least, that’s what I think it is) comes in, I do get a sense of that this could fit Furbolgs, and the melody is very nice. I wish you had developed it more. The violin/fiddle (again, that’s what I think it is), while it also has a nice part, and complements the other parts well, kind of ruins the mood you had going. To me, it sounds nothing like a shamanic race of bear-people. I wish you had reiterated the theme introduced on the xylophone on a different instrument, maybe shifted up or down a few notes. From there, the music develops well, and the ending is superbly pulled off. All in all, this is a pretty good piece on its own, with the exception of the violin, but I, while I think it had the potential to do so, I don’t think it fit the race you chose that well.
Theme: 11/30
Creativity: 14/20
Dynamic/Tonation: 14/20
Composition: 24/30
Total: 65/100 Pretty Good