Hillsbrad Foothills

[trebla ratilla]

nice melee good job and keep it up!

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-the terrain is amazing, i really love it specially what you did in the center
-the gameplay is good
-the marketplace takes more time to sell items, i think you should change its ability just like Goblin Merchant
-you should fix this one i think you really forget this or you just intent to make that into dirt cliff, the cliff was in dirt cliff not in tile cliff

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[Maximal]

The terrain is quite good in the center, thou on the outskirts is pretty bland.
-I think there's too many neutral buldings in the center. 4 goblin labs can be easily abused by one player.

Other than that is dandy.
3/5

 

[bojanpet55]

The terrain is quite good in the center, thou on the outskirts is pretty bland.
-I think there's too many neutral buldings in the center. 4 goblin labs can be easily abused by one player.

Other than that is dandy.
3/5

noted i though the same ill update it when i get a better idea

 

[bojanpet55]

Map has been updated !

 

[trebla ratilla]

Map has been updated !

you should add changelog for the updates

 

[deepstrasz]

Please do not specially make an image for the minimap as the site will make it for you.

1. Terrain is kind of flat.
2. The Rogue and Golem are a bit too near the base. Also, for some reason there is only one Golem with a Rogue instead of two as in the rest of the map.
3. To avoid enemy players appearing on the start location near you, the triggers in this map could be used: Skeletal Coast v1.3

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[Deleted member 238589]

I like the idea of having to take a zeppelin to the marketplace. These screenshots seem to be outdated.
Anyway, the map is pretty good, there are just a few thing that need fixing, like item drops, which are generally quite weak, and gaps between the trees should be filled, so smaller units can't get past them.

EDIT: Also, the map file is called Tarren Mill for some reason.

 

[mafe]

That's a very nice map. As someone who plays a lot of 4v4 in bnet, this map looks very fun to play. Terrain is very nice, I particularly like the look of the center where these rather large buildings such as the cathedral or the towers seem to fit in perfectly.

If you intend to make some further adaptions, here are some points you might consider:
-The main bases are more open than usual. For undead players, this could mean that making a "perfect" wall around your mine (to prevent the blademaster or others from getting to the acos) is impossible. The bigger distance from main to trees as means that wood will be gathered more slowly.
-The backward area (assuming that the players starting in each quarter are on the same team) is huge. It might be possible to spend the entire early-to-midgame creeping there, while the expansions being away from enemies means that they should be very safe. Combined, this might lead to very passive play until lategame. If you agree, you could think about swapping one starting location per quarter with the corresponding natural expansion.
-On a related note, the center has nothing you can access (because of the strong creep camps) until you have a large army. Also the itemdrops in the center are a little strange to me, for example you have a lvl 4 permanent item drop from both a lvl 17 and a lvl 25 creepcamp (counting the sum of all creeps in one camp). Then you have a lvl3 permanent iteam drop from a lvl 15 and a lvl 23 camp.
-There are many bridges. They can lead to standoffs even in 1on1s, but imagine a 4v4 where both armies sit on either side of a bridge. Whoever tries to cross it will get slaughtered, as the defending side can attack with everything from while the attackers will block themselves (though in fairness, armies in 4v4 often consist of many air units). This could further make the game more static.

 

[bojanpet55]

That's a very nice map. As someone who plays a lot of 4v4 in bnet, this map looks very fun to play. Terrain is very nice, I particularly like the look of the center where these rather large buildings such as the cathedral or the towers seem to fit in perfectly.

If you intend to make some further adaptions, here are some points you might consider:
-The main bases are more open than usual. For undead players, this could mean that making a "perfect" wall around your mine (to prevent the blademaster or others from getting to the acos) is impossible. The bigger distance from main to trees as means that wood will be gathered more slowly.
-The backward area (assuming that the players starting in each quarter are on the same team) is huge. It might be possible to spend the entire early-to-midgame creeping there, while the expansions being away from enemies means that they should be very safe. Combined, this might lead to very passive play until lategame. If you agree, you could think about swapping one starting location per quarter with the corresponding natural expansion.
-On a related note, the center has nothing you can access (because of the strong creep camps) until you have a large army. Also the itemdrops in the center are a little strange to me, for example you have a lvl 4 permanent item drop from both a lvl 17 and a lvl 25 creepcamp (counting the sum of all creeps in one camp). Then you have a lvl3 permanent iteam drop from a lvl 15 and a lvl 23 camp.
-There are many bridges. They can lead to standoffs even in 1on1s, but imagine a 4v4 where both armies sit on either side of a bridge. Whoever tries to cross it will get slaughtered, as the defending side can attack with everything from while the attackers will block themselves (though in fairness, armies in 4v4 often consist of many air units). This could further make the game more static.

Map Updated,
- Added more trees in all starting positions
- Nurfed all of the creep camps in the water portion and the item drops , so people dont spend all early game there .
- Nurfed the creep camps in the middle and boosted the item drop
- Still think the bridges are fine enough as there are many ways to enter the zones, including air and zepelin drops .

 

[nigromante2012]

The map is great, continue like this.

 

[Krixus]

Enjoyed the map, played it on FFA verse the computer.