asd 3 SE

[A Void]

Code: There's very little code in this map and it's very basic. It's not optimized.

Terrain: An average Blizzard dungeon crawler terrain, nothing unique, nothing new. A lot of doodads are spammed in an artificial way.

Aesthetics: A lot of units were over-sized, had a variety of different eye-wrecking colors. The aesthetics in this map are a total chaos, to put it bluntly the map itself visually is a mess. There were some words, names in an another language.

Game Play: Loading screen provides no relevant, useful information. There were a lot of grammar mistakes. Instead of telling not kill each other you could simply prevent team killing by creating a trigger. The map is more of a dungeon crawler than an RPG. Honestly, it gets boring quite fast, there's nothing unique, nothing interesting or fun. It's just monster killing.

Overall: A repetitive, chaotic get-together RPG that closely resembles a more erratic version of "Warchasers".

The highest score I could give you is 2/5, I should even go lower but I want to encourage you to keep working on this. The map will be set to awaiting update until you make the required changes, I have underlined them for you. After that the map will be moved to Substandard / Too Simple.

Awaiting Update

 

[The Witch King]

Code: There's very little code in this map and it's very basic. It's not optimized.

Terrain: An average Blizzard dungeon crawler terrain, nothing unique, nothing new. A lot of doodads are spammed in an artificial way.

Aesthetics: A lot of units were over-sized, had a variety of different eye-wrecking colors. The aesthetics in this map are a total chaos, to put it bluntly the map itself visually is a mess. There were some words, names in an another language.

Game Play: Loading screen provides no relevant, useful information. There were a lot of grammar mistakes. Instead of telling not kill each other you could simply prevent team killing by creating a trigger. The map is more of a dungeon crawler than an RPG. Honestly, it gets boring quite fast, there's nothing unique, nothing interesting or fun. It's just monster killing.

Overall: A repetitive, chaotic get-together RPG that closely resembles a more erratic version of "Warchasers".

The highest score I could give you is 2/5, I should even go lower but I want to encourage you to keep working on this. The map will be set to awaiting update until you make the required changes, I have underlined them for you. After that the map will be moved to Substandard / Too Simple.

Awaiting Update

im trying to fix them. but can you give a link or tell me what trigger can prevent team killing? and how to make my map unboring?

 

[A Void]

im trying to fix them. but can you give a link or tell me what trigger can prevent team killing? and how to make my map unboring?

Here is the trigger:

• Prevent TK
  • Events
    • Unit - A unit Is attacked
  • Conditions
    • ((Attacking unit) belongs to an ally of (Owner of (Attacked unit))) Equal to True
  • Actions
    • Unit - Order (Attacking unit) to Stop

As for the other question you could add hero selection, custom abilities, items and events. Right now it's just simple kill to win, it's not interesting. Try looking at the map from your perspective, is it currently the best that it can be? Do you enjoy playing it?

 

[The Witch King]

Here is the trigger:

• Prevent TK
  • Events
    • Unit - A unit Is attacked
  • Conditions
    • ((Attacking unit) belongs to an ally of (Owner of (Attacked unit))) Equal to True
  • Actions
    • Unit - Order (Attacking unit) to Stop

As for the other question you could add hero selection, custom abilities, items and events. Right now it's just simple kill to win, it's not interesting. Try looking at the map from your perspective, is it currently the best that it can be? Do you enjoy playing it?

thanks for the trigger, for the other question i will add hero selection and i will increase maximum hero level and maximum ability levels , i will upload it today ( + i added units list and bosses list in f9 )

 

[A Void]

A nice little improvement. However I spotted several mistakes:

• In player lobby it says "Heros", it should be "Heroes".
• Yellow computer is called "eskelet green", what's up with that?
• I found a bug where you can select multiple heroes. Make it so that the wisp is removed or killed after entering the region.

Once you fix these issues the map will be sent to Substandard / Too simple. You can keep updating the map to make it better and it might meet the quality it needs to have for Map section.

 

[deepstrasz]

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Set to Substandard until a proper rehash is done.

It's just killing units on the map.