Arthas Campaign - Orc

[Venkolm]

Um, that Jaina pic. For a moment i thought i am in the wrong site.

 

[ShadowFox555]

My god, finally. I'mma play it now.

 

[LISBOAH]

Now that I have more free time, I will start giving a more proper review starting tomorrow.

 

[sagi5533]

Um, that Jaina pic. For a moment i thought i am in the wrong site.

Well I thought we should spice things up now that she's a queen
plus some queens in the medival times dressed like that so why not?

My god, finally. I'mma play it now.

gl & hf ^^

Now that I have more free time, I will start giving a more proper review starting from tomorrow.

Good good your reviews helped build this campaign so why not more?

 

[Leochief]

okey wow Your already done YAY GONNA WASTE MY LIFE ON SOMETHING BRAND NEW YPIPPIYY

 

[Theoden of KoMe]

finally its out i will definatly try this one out

 

[sagi5533]

Aff guys I've forgot to remove 3 peasants in chapter 3 intro xD
and added the wrong chapter 3 interlude:/
For those of you that already download the campaign you should redownload it as soon as I update it to be able to watch the interlude to chapter 3

Edit: I've reuploaded the campaign and Chapter 3 Interlude should work fine now.

 

[ShadowFox555]

Welp, played first mission, here's the only criticisms I have, for now.
-The Hakkar boss fight kind of, well, sucks. Make him summon felhounds and nerf Cenarius a little. I know he's a demigod, but for the sake of the boss fight.
-And please, change that Azshara model, it looks, ugly.

 

[Leochief]

there are also some name problems as well

 

[Leochief]

adn such, but thats not importent now

 

[sagi5533]

Welp, played first mission, here's the only criticisms I have, for now.
-The Hakkar boss fight kind of, well, sucks. Make him summon felhounds and nerf Cenarius a little. I know he's a demigod, but for the sake of the boss fight.
-And please, change that Azshara model, it looks, ugly.

That's the first chapter of the campaign, people complained on my previous campaigns that the first chapter is supposed to be easy so.. here ya go
about the azshara model it's the best one that's similar to her highborne model so it stays for now..

 

[Venkolm]

I knew that there were something strange about some of those pictures. They are edited, probably by you. And actually, you did good with the Jaina one. Otherwise, it would be the wrong site, ahahah.

 

[sagi5533]

I knew that there were something strange about some of those pictures. They are edited, probably by you. And actually, you did good with the Jaina one. Otherwise, it would be the wrong site, ahahah.

Yeah I know how to use photoshop, I had to edit some of them and the models in this campaign

 

[LISBOAH]

My review

Prologue
-What does 'Aftermate' mean?
-Loading Screen: 'After the return of the Burning Legion, in Ashenvale, the Horde's... what had happened.'
"Are there any survivors?"
"Thrall must be avenged!"
"Night Elves" not "Night Elfs"
"Demigod" not "demi god"
"...alongside the demigod? He is responsible"
"Grom wait! You must hear me!"
"...other choice. We must speak with Cenarius..."
"...trust them? We only..."
"Darkshore" not "darkshore"

Chapter One
-Loading Screen:
--"what had happened"
--"unaware" not "unware"
-The Rage ability's Research tooltip doesn't give specifics regarding what each level provides
Quest 'Not Enemies' description: 'against' not 'aginst'
"Weakling coward, your magic is no match for me!"
"watch out! It can hurt you."
"...Saurfang, trusted servant of Thrall."
"...did you do that? He..."
"you possess"
"and yet you attacked him..."
"I honor you shaman..."
"Priestess Tyrande, may I ask..."
"Broxigar doesn't have a weapon during..."
-The Escape Quest description "You have been freed" "opportunity"
"beyond your imagination"

 

[sagi5533]

My review

Prologue
-What does 'Aftermate' mean?
-Loading Screen: 'After the return of the Burning Legion, in Ashenvale, the Horde's... what had happened.'
"Are there any survivors?"
"Thrall must be avenged!"
"Night Elves" not "Night Elfs"
"Demigod" not "demi god"
"...alongside the demigod? He is responsible"
"Grom wait! You must hear me!"
"...other choice. We must speak with Cenarius..."
"...trust them? We only..."
"Darkshore" not "darkshore"

Chapter One
-Loading Screen:
--"what had happened"
--"unaware" not "unware"
-The Rage ability's Research tooltip doesn't give specifics regarding what each level provides
Quest 'Not Enemies' description: 'against' not 'aginst'
"Weakling coward, your magic is no match for me!"
"watch out! It can hurt you."
"...Saurfang, trusted servant of Thrall."
"...did you do that? He..."
"you possess"
"and yet you attacked him..."
"I honor you shaman..."
"Priestess Tyrande, may I ask..."
"Broxigar doesn't have a weapon during..."
-The Escape Quest description "You have been freed" "opportunity"
"beyond your imagination"

I don't get it, I thought that if i've added you as a tester you would report grammar issues before letting me upload the campaign? lol
thank you for the corrections however, and it it's supposed to be the aftermath

 

[LISBOAH]

I don't get it, I thought that if i've added you as a tester you would report grammar issues before letting me upload the campaign? lol
thank you for the corrections however, and it it's supposed to be the aftermath

I think I have already noticed these errors and putted it in the conversation. Didn't I?
Edit: I went to recheck and only putted some. Point withdrawn. Sorry.

 

[Deuxh]

This moment of my life, this little moment its call Happiness

 

[sagi5533]

I think I have already noticed these errors and putted it in the conversation. Didn't I?
Edit: I went to recheck and only putted some. Point withdrawn. Sorry.

Np mate you still offered to help and I appriciate it ofcourse^^ but if next time you aren't sure/don't have the time let me know so I'll try to recheck somehow else xP
I fixed them, some of them you already mentioned so there was no need to correct, but the title aftermate.. boy gotta check in google those main stuff next time xP

This moment of my life, this little moment its call Happiness

Glad to hear it mate! gl & hf ^^

 

[LISBOAH]

Chapter One
-Another thing I only noticed now. Broxigar's name is written in the japanese way
-Aside from the intro cinematic, the rest are not not skippable. In fact, if I try to skip the cinematic where Brox meets Cenarius, the screen turns black

 

[sagi5533]

Chapter One
-Another thing I only noticed now. Broxigar's name is written in the japanese way
-Aside from the intro cinematic, the rest are not not skippable. In fact, if I try to skip the cinematic where Brox meets Cenarius, the screen turns black

You mean his name in the dialogs or "Broxigar Saurfang"?

 

[LISBOAH]

You mean his name in the dialogs or "Broxigar Saurfang"?

In the dialogs

Continuing, since either Furion or Broxigar tends to die in the final battle
Chapter One
"Rest brother, may you..."

 

[sagi5533]

In the dialogs

Continuing, since either Furion or Broxigar tends to die in the final battle
Chapter One
"Rest brother, may you..."

Ok ok hm just send me your review in the testers conversation once you've finished the campaign.
no point in spamming here

 

[Lazarator]

I'm so glad the campaign is finally finished after months of making. It's been a great pleasure to test each chapter, looking for bugs, doing best in fixing things and also being a part of this testers/advisors great team of awesome people. The campaign itself is great and I've enjoyed playing it. Now, some chapters may not have a balanced difficulty system, but the campaign is certainly fun to play and I hope people will find it entertaining and interesting. So I'm really looking forward to take part in making of the coming campaign - Curse of the Worgen

 

[sagi5533]

I'm so glad the campaign is finally finished after months of making. It's been a great pleasure to test each chapter, looking for bugs, doing best in fixing things and also being a part of this testers/advisors great team of awesome people. The campaign itself is great and I've enjoyed playing it. Now, some chapters may not have a balanced difficulty system, but the campaign is certainly fun to play and I hope people will find it entertaining and interesting. So I'm really looking forward to take part in making of the coming campaign - Curse of the Worgen

Ineed cheers mate, pretty sure we've done great job with the orc campaign

 

[pleasancer benediction]

YESSS it's out!!! WOOHOOO.

 

[Kuras2003]

Remember those elite chaos grunt's?

Since this campaign is not editable, can you tell me somehow how to make them?

 

[sagi5533]

Remember those elite chaos grunt's?

Since this campaign is not editable, can you tell me somehow how to make them?

Uh well I just made a custom chaos orc unit and edited his stat through the objects editor in the units tab
you can set their health/dmg/scale etc

 

[Mammadnener]

Hi why chapter 3 isnt playable!?
Im playing 1.26a

 

[sagi5533]

Hi why chapter 3 isnt playable!?
Im playing 1.26a

Are you reffering to chapter 3 interlude? If so I've fixed it but you will need to download thr campaign again

 

[Verb8im]

Hi why chapter 3 isnt playable!?
Im playing 1.26a

You need to update your patch

 

[Kuras2003]

Uh well I just made a custom chaos orc unit and edited his stat through the objects editor in the units tab
you can set their health/dmg/scale etc

well... ok

 

[OblivionDeadra]

I knew that there were something strange about some of those pictures. They are edited, probably by you. And actually, you did good with the Jaina one. Otherwise, it would be the wrong site, ahahah.

Ohh boy you don't know the half of it XD

 

[OblivionDeadra]

Well It is a pleasure to test and giving advise also *Cough* suggested ideas *Cough*
to this wonderful campaign what a ride though

I'm so glad the campaign is finally finished after months of making. It's been a great pleasure to test each chapter, looking for bugs, doing best in fixing things and also being a part of this testers/advisors great team of awesome people. The campaign itself is great and I've enjoyed playing it. Now, some chapters may not have a balanced difficulty system, but the campaign is certainly fun to play and I hope people will find it entertaining and interesting. So I'm really looking forward to take part in making of the coming campaign - Curse of the Worgen

Yeah which is true.

If anyone read this

 

[bdbxwz]

My only complain is that in chapter 6, the unit of the computer always block the way of my troops to go through that narrow entrance to attack, hell I have to cut down some of them to go through!

 

[FallAlone]

Longwaited. Go play it and feel happy...

 

[LISBOAH]

My only complain is that in chapter 6, the unit of the computer always block the way of my troops to go through that narrow entrance to attack, hell I have to cut down some of them to go through!

I know that feel.

 

[sagi5533]

My only complain is that in chapter 6, the unit of the computer always block the way of my troops to go through that narrow entrance to attack, hell I have to cut down some of them to go through!

Well it's the capital city.. In wow blizz didn't make it that wide xD

 

[Coreyx24]

Alr everyone, let's do this!!! LEEERRROYYYYYYYY JENNNNKIIINNSSSSSS

 

[Walichrage]

Really cool campaing. Playing Broximar felt great (that solo battle againts demons <3 ), story of War of the Ancient was shown pretty good and is well combined with your own, hovewer someone unfamiliar with the story of War of the ancient may sometimes feel lost (ex. why Cenarius made that axe for Broximar. why tyrande die and is alive in next scene). Difficulty on medium seems okay, didn't play on other but what exactly is the diffrence betwen them?(like hp threshold or more units?). For now I am at beging of "By Demons be Driven" and Broximar keep his OP passiv (50 to all stats). Not sure if this is bug or not but now he is literally unkilable (I found mask of death ealier). I suggest to remove it (Sargeras hit him so this could be reason to loosing this), because why I should bother to build army when i have Broximar XD.

 

[LISBOAH]

Really cool campaing. Playing Broximar felt great (that solo battle againts demons <3 ), story of War of the Ancient was shown pretty good and is well combined with your own, hovewer someone unfamiliar with the story of War of the ancient may sometimes feel lost (ex. why Cenarius made that axe for Broximar. why tyrande die and is alive in next scene). Difficulty on medium seems okay, didn't play on other but what exactly is the diffrence betwen them?(like hp threshold or more units?). For now I am at beging of "By Demons be Driven" and Broximar keep his OP passiv (50 to all stats). Not sure if this is bug or not but now he is literally unkilable (I found mask of death ealier). I suggest to remove it (Sargeras hit him so this could be reason to loosing this), because why I should bother to build army when i have Broximar XD.

Broxigar isn't unkillable, he can be killed if it requires a lot.

And his OP status is a two-edge sword in a way. In order to win the mission you will most certainly require his skills, since you will be facing fel orcs and demons, so if he is neutralized or killed, you will quickly lose the battle.

A good example is on the second chapter, when you have to steal the Dragon Soul. When facing a demon army standing next to a bridge, the Dreadlord will constantly use Sleep on Broxigar, leaving Furion all by himself and Furion is more of a support hero than one that can stand by himself against a dreadlord and several demons. After losing the first time, I simply sent Broxigar alone and left Furion behind.

 

[deepstrasz]

A good example is on the second chapter, when you have to steal the Dragon Soul. When facing a demon army standing next to a bridge, the Dreadlord will constantly use Sleep on Broxigar, leaving Furion all by himself and Furion is more of a support hero than one that can stand by himself against a dreadlord and several demons. After losing the first time, I simply sent Broxigar alone and left Furion behind.

Sure, but that's not an argument. You can still use that Avatar spell and quickly kill the Dreadlord with Critical Hits and Entangling Roots.

 

[LISBOAH]

Sure, but that's not an argument. You can still use that Avatar spell and quickly kill the Dreadlord with Critical Hits and Entangling Roots.

The wretched demon units tend to surround me, while the dreadlord circles around launching spells. I try to kill him, but the other demons stand in the way and he always casts Sleep on Broxigar and never on Furion. Every time I manage to awake Broxigar, which is hard due to the demons constantly attacking me, the dreadlord once again casts Sleep.

So I decide to only send Broxigar and he kills them quite easily.

 

[Lazarator]

because why I should bother to build army when i have Broximar XD.

Actually, it's Broxigar

Ohh boy you don't know the half of it XD

We all had at least one argument to say regarding Jaina's new look. I can see it's justified since others noticed that as well

 

[deepstrasz]

Spoiler: prologue+chap1

1. -suddenly the rain stopped before they began talking?
2. -why does Broxxigar have red eyes? (it's the model, I know )
3. -music plays through the sound channel for some reason

1. -if possible items like Broxigar's axe should be highlighted somehow. People might confuse it with a doodad unless they hover the mouse over it. Maybe that's the puzzle?
   
2. -Rage doesn't have a proper hero ability description. It does not mention how many levels it has and the values for what it gives.
3. -Broxigar the bear killer!
4. -from a logical perspective it's weird to find a healing potion on a spider. From Warcraft III gameplay perspective it's not. Or a potion hidden in an egg sack
   
5. -maybe you could make spells have hotkeys like WERT for faster use/cast.
6. -it was night when Broxigar was in the cell and people were around then suddenly morning came Were they standing there all night to watch him? During the talk night came again
7. -why would Illidan tell Tyrande that the character needed rest?
8. -why would Furion have a Voodoo Doll ? Is he doing something dark Tyrande doesn't know about?
9. -you should not use models with hero glow (Lunar Mage) for units because they usually don't have a decay animation and the bodies remain on the ground for a very long time plus it's confusing because heroes are supposed to have hero glow.
10. -they rescued Brox in the middle of the day Also, shouldn't Tyrande get off the tiger once in a while ?
    
11. -well, you really need to not reuse the Warcraft III spells over and over. Why change Force of Nature with Forked Lightning!? Kind of out of character for a druid.
    
12. -so, when Broxigar doesn't have the axe, he has Frenzy but not other spells !?
13. -where are Furion's friends?
14. -summoned units (e.g. from Stone Token) should not appear in cinematic scenes unless they act appropriately and not become idle.
15. -why would Cenarius only bring the two heroes to fight and not other elves as well?
16. -I didn't see anything on the stone table But why did Brox call it a toy and suddenly steel?
17. -why do I have to choose Brox's spells again!?
18. -Cenarius should have something else than Entangling Roots for diversity's sake.
19. -Cenarius' aura has an active ability icon. You could make it look passive with this: Button Manager v1.8.2
20. -meh, Nature's Wrath is Impale. Why not be more creative or use custom made spells? (Spells | HIVE) Not only that but you can keep the boss in continuous E-roots with no problem making the enemy not even using mana for spells or anything just shooting once the roots go off if you don't cast the next one too soon. Not to mention there's also Impale. So, the fight with the hounds was more challenging. You'll have to rethink the boss fight I'm afraid.
    
21. -the camera should be on the heroes not in the dark where the demon was shown in the cinematic scene.
22. -I don't understand... where did Tyrande come out of nowhere without Illidan and where were Broxigar and Cenarius in that ending scene!? The three heroes were beating Hakkar eyes closed and hands tied but then two of them disappeared and somehow Hakkar suddenly became so strong to almost one-shot the heroes? I understand it's a cinematic scene but it doesn't fit with the gameplay if two heroes aren't in that scene without any explanation.
23. -how do they know to speak orcish or Broxigar elvish?

Spoiler: chap2+interlude

1. -that Fel Guard was facing the column when it stopped instead of turning to face like the others.
2. -the map in the cinematic map, did you make it or is it a template? It's lovely.

1. -for character development and getting to know how Broxigar feels, we should not get a black screen with some text on it; instead we should see the characters speak to each other with sentiments.
2. -I don't remember from the other campaigns but was Rhonin here with the night elves?
3. -we have two heroes with Shockwave now. Also, when you create new heroes you should not use the exact same spells as normal Warcraft III heroes have. Rhonin is basically an Archmage while Jarod is a Tuaren Chieftain. You should be creative. Read about these characters and get ideas what they might do.
4. -monster packs/groups should all attack; now you can make them come at you one by one or few by few.
5. -for three heroes, I think they're a bit too many runes.
6. -well made terrain/environmental immersion,
7. -wait, just realized that Brox had 2 levels for Shockwave learned. I did not choose those in the previous level... you have to sort out your game cache.
   
8. -Mask of Death+Very Fast Attack+Critical Strike=too powerful. Not to mention+Avatar.
   
9. -it's weird that the western gate opens up after killing a Doom Guard in the east. There should be more than this, either a key, a discussion about how it is important to eliminate the demons in the east first to proceed towards west. But, it says proceed north but the ping on the map is on the southwestern gate.
   
10. -again, black screens with text aren't too nice. Maybe you should just showed how the zombies attacked and what happened.
11. -Risen Elves have no portrait. Maybe you could ask someone to make one in Requests
12. -spiders (and big ones) coming out of a zombie ? Maybe, worms instead?
    
13. -even playing only with Broxigar on medium it's too easy. You should fix difficulty levels.
14. -items should be representative, not reused Warcraft III ones. Also, the drop rate is like playing melee (the number I mean, not the randomness).
15. -Zenedar should be a mini-boss fight. Make him stronger, cast spells, zombies, skeletons, necromancy stuff, flesh golem, whatever you can think of, curses etc.
16. -we should experience the story not read it on a blank screen. Transmissions generally run too fast.
17. -the transition between the demons and the city part to Krasus and Furion is a bit forced. The events should be properly connected.
18. -Furion and Krasus are sleeping during the first time they are shown in the scene.
19. -how do they know that was the place, it's not like they saw any black dragon at the rolling stone?
20. -why isn't Krasus also coming? Is he afraid ?
21. -now, Furion has Force of Nature and not Forked Lightning? Also, we have to make him learn the spells again.
22. -Krasus should be another colour. It's confusing that it's the same as Brox's.
23. -so, how did Rhonin teleport to Brox and from where?
24. -"Intruders, don't let them escape!" but they are not even coming toward the heroes unless provoked.
25. -I think goblins should use gunpowder or rockets or something like that (tower), not spears/arrows.
26. -who is Deathwing telling who he is?
27. -some towers don't even shoot because they're not actually towers but orc burrows and they're empty...
28. -enemy heroes and stronger units should have more life/hit points. Brox can deal 500+damage with Critical Strike.
29. -maybe you could find some proper goblin buildings instead of using the orc ones.
30. -who needs a fountain of health when you always have full HP? Let's say you don't, then you have Tranquility.
31. -Black Dragon or Dragon Aspect, not Black Dragon Aspect.
32. -by the way Deathwing's model already has plates on, does it not ?

Spoiler: chap3+interlude

1. -Arthas keeps remaining behind when walking with Renault and the wagons.
2. -you can't clearly see how/when Renault dies because there are too many troops around. I suggest the troops fighting the undead ones a bit to the north of the heroes.
3. -I did not understand. Suddenly the battle scene is cut and we get to see Arthas and in a castle with Scarlet and Lordaeron troops cheering(?) or preparing for battle. Were they victorious against Renault and Kel'thuzad? Shouldn't they have prepared a funeral for Renault? Or did he not die?

1. -during the intro, not all night elves fight, many stay behind and Broxigar runs like crazy up and down a cliff/ramp.
2. -dragon disk? (was it soul?)
3. -replacing the icon and name of an original Warcraft III spell isn't nice. You could have at least left it as Healing Wave.
4. -the siphon mana FX from Illidan to the fel hound should be positioned near their chests or heads not on the ground.
5. -cinematic scenes cannot be skipped.
6. -it's weird that you cannot see Brox and Rhonin on dragons but they are talking to each other as if they were there. Maybe request someone to fuse them to dragons.
   
7. -you could add Locust to the portal of nether to make it unselectable.
8. -Brox is invulnerable or at least immortal against the demon hordes with the Mask of Death on. Should the demons all attack at once?
9. -storywise I think he is too strong as if a demigod.
10. -shouldn't a portal close once the sustaining eredars around it are killed?
11. -another Mask of Death (Balnazzar)!? Is it in case you didn't take the one in the first level?
12. -so, Nozdormu saved him? Problem is, how are the events in the past related to the current situation? I mean Broxigar is talking to the chieftains as if those events are happening in the present or something. That danger moment has passed hasn't it? If not, how did they come to the present in this state? It's not clear to me what's actually going on and how the timelines are connected.

Spoiler: chap4

1. -why would murlocs have tiny building items? Or them lying on the ground somewhere?
   
2. -also hinting about going back for items isn't nice. The players should explore by themselves.
3. -you should also change the hue of Gar'thok's icon.
4. -as in the previous level, there are some quests without requirements.
5. -how did they find out about the other tribes? I mean, they just arrived there and there was such a distance between them. Plus there was an enemy base in the way.
6. -Tauren Kodobeasts are too big for how weak they are.
7. -LoL, the tauren workers use the lumber they gather to strike the tree.
8. -I guess one of the Satyrs talked where Xavius' location was, since it's on the opposite side of the map?
   
9. -the game text says Main Quest instead of Optional Quest for Xavius as in the Quest Log.
   
10. -after two group attacks, the purple orcs come unit by unit. Also, their hero is being resurrected too fast. Alone with Broxigar you have to eliminate their production facilities fast while you build and train some units.
    
11. -"These furbolgs stole our resources!" What!? I mean, come on... what resources? I just started building a base. Plus, no orc reported resources missing. More like: "We are stealing resources from these furbolgs!" Once again, these woods lack a ranger.
12. -Corrupted Ancient Protectors have an animation issue when rooted and attacking. Use a skin or a different model or request someone to fix the animation issue. They don't attack when you're near them. They should, I think. Now they act like Cannon Towers/artillery units. Actually all corrupted ancient buildings have the animation bug.
    
13. -haha, you could have made it so that if you clicked Thrall's necklace a splash image of Jaian and him would appear for a few seconds. Also, try using different icons for different items. This one looks like the Amulet of Magic Immunity.
14. -Xavius, is weak. So basically you only need Broxigar to finish this mission. The player's base is almost useless especially when their units are decimating yours like butter. They help you progress faster though.
    
15. -Another Mask of Death? Guess I'll put it on one of the chieftains if they become mine or I'll just drop the item on one of them anyway. Cairne already has one, lol.
16. -they're coming to the allies from caves ?
17. -maybe slow level up for Brox for Attribute Bonus?
18. -shouldn't force players to destroy all buildings even farms, just the production facilities and workers.
19. -Frenzy does not say how much it lasts.
20. -honestly, these orcs are more problematic than the demons in the previous level
21. -"Now we must go to kill Mannoroth!"!? But Mannoroth wasn't even mentioned until now... This line just makes everything feel so random or so that the player should know beforehand about some things to know what's going on which is bad.
22. -"In Mannorth's name!" Is Mannoroth fighting in his own name ?
23. -Grom is weak, you can potentially just run with Broxigar to him and kill him.

Spoiler: chap5

1. -were was Drek'thar in the previous level?
2. -since Grom has level 10 why do we have to choose the spells ourselves?
3. -Brilliance Aura? Well, Rhonin has that one... also where are those guys? I lost the Searing Blade on Jarod... Also, passive abilities are usually on the third place (where the Spirit Wolves are now).
   
4. -but Gar'thok died during battle in chapter 4
5. -there's a purple Grunt to the left of Gar'thok even though it becomes yours.
6. -you should give players a reason why they should kill 20 doom guards. Some transmission from Drek'thar for instance wouldn't hurt.
7. -two Critical Strike heroes
8. -funny how Grom talks about alliances with humans and not one of the other heroes.
9. -I'd make these Doom Guards special ones, more powerful and stuff.
10. -this is incorrect. Jaina and the others teleported right where Doom Guards were (that if you use the Way Gate and see for yourself).
11. -"Orcs, here? Interesting." and they become yours. At least there was talk with the other groups.
12. -I don't understand how can Granis reanimated ghost people?
13. -I get a message that the allied town is under attack but is it not invulnerable?
14. -why would a paladin have Jaina's crown? Shouldn't it be on her head?
15. -doesn't feel right for the undead buildings to be placed aimlessly. They should at least be better guarded.
16. -when Broxigar gets Jaina's crown (which requires a proper icon by the way) he's even more powerful...
17. -pit lords should be bigger and stronger.
18. -what's the point of Araj the Summoner if no demons come through the gate? Same with the other green lich.
    
19. -Cho'Nammoth is level 1, a lich near a Way Gate. Too weak.
20. -when you "revive" Lunara, the unit is not a ghost anymore.
21. -Rage changes place with Bladestorm and Shockwave with Rage after the game is loaded.
22. -once you get the crown, creatures should be much more stronger. Also, it's bad that you can't drop the item. What if you want to give it to another hero? You have to load the game.
23. -they should have chopped Medivh right there Where's Alexstrasza?
    
24. -is Jaina in a bikini and bra!? Jaina's a sex queen, then.
25. -how could Grom smell Thrall's blood on Jaina!? that's silly.

Spoiler: chap6

1. -a bit too sudden and without thought how the militia wanted to attack Arthas with all the guards there.
2. -Cleaving Attack and Devotion Aura have active ability icons. You can use the program I linked earlier to make them look passive. Same with Alexstrasza's gift and Ashbringer spells.
   
3. -these spells, they've been used too many times even in this campaign, especially the orc ones...
4. -the crown item's icon is as if a disabled ability/icon. It does not look right.
5. -so why Royal and Plated Footman with the same stats? The royal should be stronger or something.
6. -so, Ashbringer being named after Alexander Morgraine. Well, what's the relation between the two names? They're totally different.
7. -I think there should be more talk between Arthas and the orcs since Arthas has a history with them. OK, something like that happens a bit on the road. One problem is that the message about the bandits/cultists come in between and it doesn't make sense.
   
8. -Scarlet Archers don't have a portrait. Request the model maker or someone to make one. Or maybe it wasn't properly imported?
9. -how, is it a secret (prophet) when you get the ping to the place on the minimap when you reach the magic barriers!?
10. -I think Arthas' reaction is unfitting: "Who the hell are you talking about prophet?" He was supposed to be calm but suddenly lost it, especially after thanking the wizard?
11. -the cultist quest is a joke. Aside from them being in the way, not somewhere you should find them (which makes it less optional), they are totally weak. As Broxigar, Arthas is too strong. Yes vs Thrall it was OK but against other enemies...
12. -because probably the units are all ordered together, during the capital scene, Arthas remains behind while Vaurok is way in front. That should not be.
13. -you have to look through all maps because quest requirements don't appear in the Quest Log, only on the screen.
14. -OK, this is a big issue. Player's units are being blocked by the fortress AI. Needs fix. You can use flying units yes but that kills strategical diversity. Bigger problem is that heroes can get stuck... View attachment 310408
15. -the sky is a green paste. You can see it if you go with the camera near the map edges.
16. -you should not use the same colour for different factions. Tichondrius should be orange, not red like the orcs. The Scarlets should be yellow or if you use a newer patch you could make them dark red.
    
17. -Pride of Lordaeron should have a passive icon.
18. -there are two different Knight units but exact copies since they appear as different units in the control selection: View attachment 310409
19. -bad pathing because of improper doodad/trees placement: View attachment 310410
20. -you even have to destroy that tower on the cliffs

Spoiler: chap7

1. -new leader of the Kirin Tor not Dalaran. The city fell, didn't it?
2. -Ansirem does not have hero glow. You can add that: How to add Hero Glow without Modeling
3. -Dalaran techtree=Arthas'/Lordaeron's/Stromgarde's which is basically Human anyway.
4. -Golems have the same icon.
5. -can't find any barrier in the Altar to research... Found it! It wasn't at the Dalaran altar. Didn't see the altar near the portal. It should cost or take some time to be researched. It feels like why not have it already researched in the current state.
   
6. -the Dalaran faction has its own AI too? It's annoying that the hero casts things on its own... It's not the only issue. The AI also puts more Peasants at the mine than 5 even if you send those to cut trees... or worse, they leave less than 5 workers for the mine...
   
7. -dogs in the undead base?
8. -Scarlet Highlords are much stronger than Knights but they cost the same and require the same number of food slots. The stock for these units refills too quickly.
   
9. -only the green demons attacked the gates; the rest don't even move from their bases, almost, especially the teal undead.
10. -the teal undead don't even use spells: no Sleep, nothing, not even Inferno Stones etc.
    
11. -the Scarlet Footman has no DISBTN. Its icon is green on F10/pause. You could make a disabled icon with the program I've linked earlier in case there is none available. Also:
    BLP Lab v0.5.0
    Complete Icon Tutorial - All About Icons
    How to Make an Icon
12. -why make cages invulnerable; there are two types of them, doodads and destructibles.
13. -well, now you don't have the mage hero anymore... and he wasn't standing still in the cinematic scene where you meet Sylvanas.
14. -Multi Arrow should look passive.
15. -revenants sleep during the night (Blizzard fault though).
16. -Animate Dead and Summon minions have the same icon. Try diversifying ability icons if they're not supposed to be the same abilities as the one they're based on.
17. -Sylvanas ran out of the frame when meeting Uther. I suggest just hiding heroes that aren't supposed to be in a cinematic scene and unhiding them after the scene ends.
    
18. -Kel'thuzad is too weak. He's an icon character.
19. -I don't think it was necessary to have Uther's forces since it doesn't come with any base. Uther could have just changed owner to Arthas' player and keep colour.
20. -you should find proper FX for abilities. Uther's aura makes you confuse Frost Armour and Arthas' confuse Healing.
21. -I suggest making all troops which are not controlled by an AI who sends them regularly at your base stronger because the Scarlet Monastery units are like killing workers. Think of it as a WoW raid.
    
22. -Uther's Death Pact is useless here. There are no friendly undead units.
23. -no words from Arthas and Renault to each other!?
24. -I suggest making the entrance to the rooms in the monastery way gates. It's annoying to have to click the circles almost with each unit each time.
    
25. -kind of useless to get the val'kyrs and other undead units now when basically only part of Kel'thuzad's base still stands. Also, I don't remember them knowing of the val'kyr, their introduction seems forced.
26. -Sludges sleep
27. -Varok's spells need proper positioning, they don't remain on the same spots after loading the game.
28. -check pathing pressing P in the editor to see gaps between trees: View attachment 310413 It's not the only place.
    
29. -Sylvanas can't get inside boats.
30. -man I thought there would be an Easter Egg with the boat on an island or something.
31. -well, 'thuzad didn't finish saying who did it before he disappeared so how did Varok find out?
32. -why weren't any of the other humans against Uther's stay in the capital?

Spoiler: chap8

1. -the descriptions of the faction choices need a tweak; they're not too nice to read and some words are not where they should be.
2. -meh, this level is pretty much the same as the original but it's a neat gameplay edit somewhat though the humans are the most disadvantaged.
3. -the idle worker icon is still the wisp Well you can't change that for every race sadly.
4. -no faction shops? Melee heroes can't attack air without an orb.
5. -you can resist without problems with the orcs, that was not quite possible in the original campaign from what I remember (or was it only on Hard?)
6. -are the undead flyers supposed to attack the elves and not the closest base? They stand no chance by the way
   
7. -almost permastunning Archimonde with Grom
8. -Arthas can use Retribution but Brox can't use the Avatar spell? All too easy, not even a scratch on my heroes
   
9. -I don't think it was smart to go through the portal because Sargeras could potentially do something against them plus Kil'jaeden and who knows who. But, I guess if the portal is not sealed they can run back.
10. -Broxigar still hasn't got Rage learned and you can't learn it. Gaemplay intention? If yes, you should disable the spell so it won't show up to create confusion.
11. -the spells in Arthas' "spell book" are changing their positions after a game load.
12. -but why does the Twisting Nether look like Draenor?
13. -you can reach the map edges and it doesn't look nice. Should put some pathing blockers in some places so you can't get there.
14. -the requirements for the first quest are not grayed after quest completion (Quest Log).
15. -you should make the Rain of Fire on these Doom Guards much more powerful. Add more armour to them too.
    
16. -we reach Archimonde too fast. There should more interesting stuff going on before that.
17. -why wouldn't the Emerald Dream know Cenarius that he'd have to present himself?
18. -the guardians don't do any damage against divine armour.
19. -I still can't beat him after reviving. There's just too much DPS to heal against and treants are useless. Entangling Roots are useless too, they don't stay more than 1 second on Doom Guards and the rest are magic immune. Broxigar can't use Rage...
    
20. -well, what about the dispute between Arthas and the orcs regarding Thrall?
21. -when did Darion Morgraine appear? He wasn't even in this game/campaign.
22. -many things that have no relation to what happened in the campaign or the previous ones suddenly appear on the screen.
23. -so why is Broxigar having the Ashbringer on the campaign screen?

There's still polishing to be done mostly in what the gameplay is concerned (proper bosses, elite units, diversified hero abilities and human techtrees etc.), difficulty needs to be balanced, story events have to be properly connected. It's more of a 3.25/5 now but I hope you'll enhance it to get to my current rating.

The credits list seems rather short compared to how many resources are shown here: Resources in Use by Arthas Campaign - Orc | HIVE

Approved.

Pictures of things I was referring to:

 

[JStryker47]

I've gotten to chapter 6 and I have to say, King Arthas rules! - Both literally and figuratively. I love how he took up the good sword instead of the evil one too.

The preceding chapter was pretty awesome too, though it seemed a little strange seeing Jaina dressed like that. I guess she must've had little time to get dressed in that situation?

If there's one actual complaint I have so far, it's that I'm not liking how the enemy sometimes has an unlimited number of troops that I can never manage to get past without cheating. Particularly when attacking the main enemy base at the end of chapter 4.

 

[LISBOAH]

The preceding chapter was pretty awesome too, though it seemed a little strange seeing Jaina dressed like that. I guess she must've had little time to get dressed in that situation?

True.

If there's one actual complaint I have so far, it's that I'm not liking how the enemy sometimes has an unlimited number of troops that I can never manage to get past without cheating. Particularly when attacking the main enemy base at the end of chapter 4.

Attack alongside your allies, use Brox as a bait to enemy units and use your other units to destroy the enemy buildings in order to diminish the number of foes you face.

 

[The Viper]

I redownloaded it but there still a problem I don't know why plzzz help me to fix it I was waiting it for a long time

 

[sagi5533]

Alr everyone, let's do this!!! LEEERRROYYYYYYYY JENNNNKIIINNSSSSSS

Yahhoooooooooooooo

Really cool campaing. Playing Broximar felt great (that solo battle againts demons <3 ), story of War of the Ancient was shown pretty good and is well combined with your own, hovewer someone unfamiliar with the story of War of the ancient may sometimes feel lost (ex. why Cenarius made that axe for Broximar. why tyrande die and is alive in next scene). Difficulty on medium seems okay, didn't play on other but what exactly is the diffrence betwen them?(like hp threshold or more units?). For now I am at beging of "By Demons be Driven" and Broximar keep his OP passiv (50 to all stats). Not sure if this is bug or not but now he is literally unkilable (I found mask of death ealier). I suggest to remove it (Sargeras hit him so this could be reason to loosing this), because why I should bother to build army when i have Broximar XD.

Well I couldn't include all the "war of the ancients" story in this campaign (like 3~ chapters of it not included cinematics were related to war of the ancients) but I understand you, it's something that has to be done if I wanted to include it in my campaign. People can still read the book or google about it if interested as I tried to cover most of the background.
the other difficulties levels change armor/dmg/unit spawn/etc on other levels. in chapter 8 you MUST do the chapter on Hard(just a fair warning in case you miss it) in order to obtain the bonus chapter(will make doomguards spawn in ur base and some other stuff I cant remmber).
Brox isn't unkillable, you should wait for the other chapters in chapter 4 it might be hard for him to go solo

Broxigar isn't unkillable, he can be killed if it requires a lot.

And his OP status is a two-edge sword in a way. In order to win the mission you will most certainly require his skills, since you will be facing fel orcs and demons, so if he is neutralized or killed, you will quickly lose the battle.

A good example is on the second chapter, when you have to steal the Dragon Soul. When facing a demon army standing next to a bridge, the Dreadlord will constantly use Sleep on Broxigar, leaving Furion all by himself and Furion is more of a support hero than one that can stand by himself against a dreadlord and several demons. After losing the first time, I simply sent Broxigar alone and left Furion behind.

good point, in chapter 4 or 8 it might be harder for brox to stay alive solo

Sure, but that's not an argument. You can still use that Avatar spell and quickly kill the Dreadlord with Critical Hits and Entangling Roots.

True but the avatar lasts for like 10 seconds ~ so depending on the situation there and amout of mana brox has.

The wretched demon units tend to surround me, while the dreadlord circles around launching spells. I try to kill him, but the other demons stand in the way and he always casts Sleep on Broxigar and never on Furion. Every time I manage to awake Broxigar, which is hard due to the demons constantly attacking me, the dreadlord once again casts Sleep.

So I decide to only send Broxigar and he kills them quite easily.

That's also true, I did it to since the dreadlords will indeed always aim brox with sleep so you should aim the dreadlord and later his demons.

Actually, it's Broxigar

We all had at least one argument to say regarding Jaina's new look. I can see it's justified since others noticed that as well

I will never regret her look in this campaign tbh blizz wouldve never done it in wc3 but in wow they already make sluty models.. plus why not to make a queen look desirable? worked out in game of thrones haha

Spoiler: prologue+chap1

1. -suddenly the rain stopped before they began talking?
2. -why does Broxxigar have red eyes? (it's the model, I know )
3. -music plays through the sound channel for some reason

1. -if possible items like Broxigar's axe should be highlighted somehow. People might confuse it with a doodad unless they hover the mouse over it. Maybe that's the puzzle?
   
2. -Rage doesn't have a proper hero ability description. It does not mention how many levels it has and the values for what it gives.
3. -Broxigar the bear killer!
4. -from a logical perspective it's weird to find a healing potion on a spider. From Warcraft III gameplay perspective it's not. Or a potion hidden in an egg sack
   
5. -maybe you could make spells have hotkeys like WERT for faster use/cast.
6. -it was night when Broxigar was in the cell and people were around then suddenly morning came Were they standing there all night to watch him? During the talk night came again
7. -why would Illidan tell Tyrande that the character needed rest?
8. -why would Furion have a Voodoo Doll ? Is he doing something dark Tyrande doesn't know about?
9. -you should not use models with hero glow (Lunar Mage) for units because they usually don't have a decay animation and the bodies remain on the ground for a very long time plus it's confusing because heroes are supposed to have hero glow.
10. -they rescued Brox in the middle of the day Also, shouldn't Tyrande get off the tiger once in a while ?
    
11. -well, you really need to not reuse the Warcraft III spells over and over. Why change Force of Nature with Forked Lightning!? Kind of out of character for a druid.
    
12. -so, when Broxigar doesn't have the axe, he has Frenzy but not other spells !?
13. -where are Furion's friends?
14. -summoned units (e.g. from Stone Token) should not appear in cinematic scenes unless they act appropriately and not become idle.
15. -why would Cenarius only bring the two heroes to fight and not other elves as well?
16. -I didn't see anything on the stone table But why did Brox call it a toy and suddenly steel?
17. -why do I have to choose Brox's spells again!?
18. -Cenarius should have something else than Entangling Roots for diversity's sake.
19. -Cenarius' aura has an active ability icon. You could make it look passive with this: Button Manager v1.8.2
20. -meh, Nature's Wrath is Impale. Why not be more creative or use custom made spells? (Spells | HIVE) Not only that but you can keep the boss in continuous E-roots with no problem making the enemy not even using mana for spells or anything just shooting once the roots go off if you don't cast the next one too soon. Not to mention there's also Impale. So, the fight with the hounds was more challenging. You'll have to rethink the boss fight I'm afraid.
    
21. -the camera should be on the heroes not in the dark where the demon was shown in the cinematic scene.
22. -I don't understand... where did Tyrande come out of nowhere without Illidan and where were Broxigar and Cenarius in that ending scene!? The three heroes were beating Hakkar eyes closed and hands tied but then two of them disappeared and somehow Hakkar suddenly became so strong to almost one-shot the heroes? I understand it's a cinematic scene but it doesn't fit with the gameplay if two heroes aren't in that scene without any explanation.
23. -how do they know to speak orcish or Broxigar elvish?

Spoiler: chap2+interlude

1. -that Fel Guard was facing the column when it stopped instead of turning to face like the others.
2. -the map in the cinematic map, did you make it or is it a template? It's lovely.

1. -for character development and getting to know how Broxigar feels, we should not get a black screen with some text on it; instead we should see the characters speak to each other with sentiments.
2. -I don't remember from the other campaigns but was Rhonin here with the night elves?
3. -we have two heroes with Shockwave now. Also, when you create new heroes you should not use the exact same spells as normal Warcraft III heroes have. Rhonin is basically an Archmage while Jarod is a Tuaren Chieftain. You should be creative. Read about these characters and get ideas what they might do.
4. -monster packs/groups should all attack; now you can make them come at you one by one or few by few.
5. -for three heroes, I think they're a bit too many runes.
6. -well made terrain/environmental immersion,
7. -wait, just realized that Brox had 2 levels for Shockwave learned. I did not choose those in the previous level... you have to sort out your game cache.
   
8. -Mask of Death+Very Fast Attack+Critical Strike=too powerful. Not to mention+Avatar.
   
9. -it's weird that the western gate opens up after killing a Doom Guard in the east. There should be more than this, either a key, a discussion about how it is important to eliminate the demons in the east first to proceed towards west. But, it says proceed north but the ping on the map is on the southwestern gate.
   
10. -again, black screens with text aren't too nice. Maybe you should just showed how the zombies attacked and what happened.
11. -Risen Elves have no portrait. Maybe you could ask someone to make one in Requests
12. -spiders (and big ones) coming out of a zombie ? Maybe, worms instead?
    
13. -even playing only with Broxigar on medium it's too easy. You should fix difficulty levels.
14. -items should be representative, not reused Warcraft III ones. Also, the drop rate is like playing melee (the number I mean, not the randomness).
15. -Zenedar should be a mini-boss fight. Make him stronger, cast spells, zombies, skeletons, necromancy stuff, flesh golem, whatever you can think of, curses etc.
16. -we should experience the story not read it on a blank screen. Transmissions generally run too fast.
17. -the transition between the demons and the city part to Krasus and Furion is a bit forced. The events should be properly connected.
18. -Furion and Krasus are sleeping during the first time they are shown in the scene.
19. -how do they know that was the place, it's not like they saw any black dragon at the rolling stone?
20. -why isn't Krasus also coming? Is he afraid ?
21. -now, Furion has Force of Nature and not Forked Lightning? Also, we have to make him learn the spells again.
22. -Krasus should be another colour. It's confusing that it's the same as Brox's.
23. -so, how did Rhonin teleport to Brox and from where?
24. -"Intruders, don't let them escape!" but they are not even coming toward the heroes unless provoked.
25. -I think goblins should use gunpowder or rockets or something like that (tower), not spears/arrows.
26. -who is Deathwing telling who he is?
27. -some towers don't even shoot because they're not actually towers but orc burrows and they're empty...
28. -enemy heroes and stronger units should have more life/hit points. Brox can deal 500+damage with Critical Strike.
29. -maybe you could find some proper goblin buildings instead of using the orc ones.
30. -who needs a fountain of health when you always have full HP? Let's say you don't, then you have Tranquility.
31. -Black Dragon or Dragon Aspect, not Black Dragon Aspect.
32. -by the way Deathwing's model already has plates on, does it not ?

Spoiler: chap3+interlude

1. -Arthas keeps remaining behind when walking with Renault and the wagons.
2. -you can't clearly see how/when Renault dies because there are too many troops around. I suggest the troops fighting the undead ones a bit to the north of the heroes.
3. -I did not understand. Suddenly the battle scene is cut and we get to see Arthas and in a castle with Scarlet and Lordaeron troops cheering(?) or preparing for battle. Were they victorious against Renault and Kel'thuzad? Shouldn't they have prepared a funeral for Renault? Or did he not die?

1. -during the intro, not all night elves fight, many stay behind and Broxigar runs like crazy up and down a cliff/ramp.
2. -dragon disk? (was it soul?)
3. -replacing the icon and name of an original Warcraft III spell isn't nice. You could have at least left it as Healing Wave.
4. -the siphon mana FX from Illidan to the fel hound should be positioned near their chests or heads not on the ground.
5. -cinematic scenes cannot be skipped.
6. -it's weird that you cannot see Brox and Rhonin on dragons but they are talking to each other as if they were there. Maybe request someone to fuse them to dragons.
   
7. -you could add Locust to the portal of nether to make it unselectable.
8. -Brox is invulnerable or at least immortal against the demon hordes with the Mask of Death on. Should the demons all attack at once?
9. -storywise I think he is too strong as if a demigod.
10. -shouldn't a portal close once the sustaining eredars around it are killed?
11. -another Mask of Death (Balnazzar)!? Is it in case you didn't take the one in the first level?
12. -so, Nozdormu saved him? Problem is, how are the events in the past related to the current situation? I mean Broxigar is talking to the chieftains as if those events are happening in the present or something. That danger moment has passed hasn't it? If not, how did they come to the present in this state? It's not clear to me what's actually going on and how the timelines are connected.

Spoiler: chap4

1. -why would murlocs have tiny building items? Or them lying on the ground somewhere?
   
2. -also hinting about going back for items isn't nice. The players should explore by themselves.
3. -you should also change the hue of Gar'thok's icon.
4. -as in the previous level, there are some quests without requirements.
5. -how did they find out about the other tribes? I mean, they just arrived there and there was such a distance between them. Plus there was an enemy base in the way.
6. -Tauren Kodobeasts are too big for how weak they are.
7. -LoL, the tauren workers use the lumber they gather to strike the tree.
8. -I guess one of the Satyrs talked where Xavius' location was, since it's on the opposite side of the map?
   
9. -the game text says Main Quest instead of Optional Quest for Xavius as in the Quest Log.
   
10. -after two group attacks, the purple orcs come unit by unit. Also, their hero is being resurrected too fast. Alone with Broxigar you have to eliminate their production facilities fast while you build and train some units.
    
11. -"These furbolgs stole our resources!" What!? I mean, come on... what resources? I just started building a base. Plus, no orc reported resources missing. More like: "We are stealing resources from these furbolgs!" Once again, these woods lack a ranger.
12. -Corrupted Ancient Protectors have an animation issue when rooted and attacking. Use a skin or a different model or request someone to fix the animation issue. They don't attack when you're near them. They should, I think. Now they act like Cannon Towers/artillery units. Actually all corrupted ancient buildings have the animation bug.
    
13. -haha, you could have made it so that if you clicked Thrall's necklace a splash image of Jaian and him would appear for a few seconds. Also, try using different icons for different items. This one looks like the Amulet of Magic Immunity.
14. -Xavius, is weak. So basically you only need Broxigar to finish this mission. The player's base is almost useless especially when their units are decimating yours like butter. They help you progress faster though.
    
15. -Another Mask of Death? Guess I'll put it on one of the chieftains if they become mine or I'll just drop the item on one of them anyway. Cairne already has one, lol.
16. -they're coming to the allies from caves ?
17. -maybe slow level up for Brox for Attribute Bonus?
18. -shouldn't force players to destroy all buildings even farms, just the production facilities and workers.
19. -Frenzy does not say how much it lasts.
20. -honestly, these orcs are more problematic than the demons in the previous level
21. -"Now we must go to kill Mannoroth!"!? But Mannoroth wasn't even mentioned until now... This line just makes everything feel so random or so that the player should know beforehand about some things to know what's going on which is bad.
22. -"In Mannorth's name!" Is Mannoroth fighting in his own name ?
23. -Grom is weak, you can potentially just run with Broxigar to him and kill him.

Spoiler: chap5

1. -were was Drek'thar in the previous level?
2. -since Grom has level 10 why do we have to choose the spells ourselves?
3. -Brilliance Aura? Well, Rhonin has that one... also where are those guys? I lost the Searing Blade on Jarod... Also, passive abilities are usually on the third place (where the Spirit Wolves are now).
   
4. -but Gar'thok died during battle in chapter 4
5. -there's a purple Grunt to the left of Gar'thok even though it becomes yours.
6. -you should give players a reason why they should kill 20 doom guards. Some transmission from Drek'thar for instance wouldn't hurt.
7. -two Critical Strike heroes
8. -funny how Grom talks about alliances with humans and not one of the other heroes.
9. -I'd make these Doom Guards special ones, more powerful and stuff.
10. -this is incorrect. Jaina and the others teleported right where Doom Guards were (that if you use the Way Gate and see for yourself).
11. -"Orcs, here? Interesting." and they become yours. At least there was talk with the other groups.
12. -I don't understand how can Granis reanimated ghost people?
13. -I get a message that the allied town is under attack but is it not invulnerable?
14. -why would a paladin have Jaina's crown? Shouldn't it be on her head?
15. -doesn't feel right for the undead buildings to be placed aimlessly. They should at least be better guarded.
16. -when Broxigar gets Jaina's crown (which requires a proper icon by the way) he's even more powerful...
17. -pit lords should be bigger and stronger.
18. -what's the point of Araj the Summoner if no demons come through the gate? Same with the other green lich.
    
19. -Cho'Nammoth is level 1, a lich near a Way Gate. Too weak.
20. -when you "revive" Lunara, the unit is not a ghost anymore.
21. -Rage changes place with Bladestorm and Shockwave with Rage after the game is loaded.
22. -once you get the crown, creatures should be much more stronger. Also, it's bad that you can't drop the item. What if you want to give it to another hero? You have to load the game.
23. -they should have chopped Medivh right there Where's Alexstrasza?
    
24. -is Jaina in a bikini and bra!? Jaina's a sex queen, then.
25. -how could Grom smell Thrall's blood on Jaina!? that's silly.

Spoiler: chap6

1. -a bit too sudden and without thought how the militia wanted to attack Arthas with all the guards there.
2. -Cleaving Attack and Devotion Aura have active ability icons. You can use the program I linked earlier to make them look passive. Same with Alexstrasza's gift and Ashbringer spells.
   
3. -these spells, they've been used too many times even in this campaign, especially the orc ones...
4. -the crown item's icon is as if a disabled ability/icon. It does not look right.
5. -so why Royal and Plated Footman with the same stats? The royal should be stronger or something.
6. -so, Ashbringer being named after Alexander Morgraine. Well, what's the relation between the two names? They're totally different.
7. -I think there should be more talk between Arthas and the orcs since Arthas has a history with them. OK, something like that happens a bit on the road. One problem is that the message about the bandits/cultists come in between and it doesn't make sense.
   
8. -Scarlet Archers don't have a portrait. Request the model maker or someone to make one. Or maybe it wasn't properly imported?
9. -how, is it a secret (prophet) when you get the ping to the place on the minimap when you reach the magic barriers!?
10. -I think Arthas' reaction is unfitting: "Who the hell are you talking about prophet?" He was supposed to be calm but suddenly lost it, especially after thanking the wizard?
11. -the cultist quest is a joke. Aside from them being in the way, not somewhere you should find them (which makes it less optional), they are totally weak. As Broxigar, Arthas is too strong. Yes vs Thrall it was OK but against other enemies...
12. -because probably the units are all ordered together, during the capital scene, Arthas remains behind while Vaurok is way in front. That should not be.
13. -you have to look through all maps because quest requirements don't appear in the Quest Log, only on the screen.
14. -OK, this is a big issue. Player's units are being blocked by the fortress AI. Needs fix. You can use flying units yes but that kills strategical diversity. Bigger problem is that heroes can get stuck... View attachment 310408
15. -the sky is a green paste. You can see it if you go with the camera near the map edges.
16. -you should not use the same colour for different factions. Tichondrius should be orange, not red like the orcs. The Scarlets should be yellow or if you use a newer patch you could make them dark red.
    
17. -Pride of Lordaeron should have a passive icon.
18. -there are two different Knight units but exact copies since they appear as different units in the control selection: View attachment 310409
19. -bad pathing because of improper doodad/trees placement: View attachment 310410
20. -you even have to destroy that tower on the cliffs

Spoiler: chap7

1. -new leader of the Kirin Tor not Dalaran. The city fell, didn't it?
2. -Ansirem does not have hero glow. You can add that: How to add Hero Glow without Modeling
3. -Dalaran techtree=Arthas'/Lordaeron's/Stromgarde's which is basically Human anyway.
4. -Golems have the same icon.
5. -can't find any barrier in the Altar to research... Found it! It wasn't at the Dalaran altar. Didn't see the altar near the portal. It should cost or take some time to be researched. It feels like why not have it already researched in the current state.
   
6. -the Dalaran faction has its own AI too? It's annoying that the hero casts things on its own... It's not the only issue. The AI also puts more Peasants at the mine than 5 even if you send those to cut trees... or worse, they leave less than 5 workers for the mine...
   
7. -dogs in the undead base?
8. -Scarlet Highlords are much stronger than Knights but they cost the same and require the same number of food slots. The stock for these units refills too quickly.
   
9. -only the green demons attacked the gates; the rest don't even move from their bases, almost, especially the teal undead.
10. -the teal undead don't even use spells: no Sleep, nothing, not even Inferno Stones etc.
    
11. -the Scarlet Footman has no DISBTN. Its icon is green on F10/pause. You could make a disabled icon with the program I've linked earlier in case there is none available. Also:
    BLP Lab v0.5.0
    Complete Icon Tutorial - All About Icons
    How to Make an Icon
12. -why make cages invulnerable; there are two types of them, doodads and destructibles.
13. -well, now you don't have the mage hero anymore... and he wasn't standing still in the cinematic scene where you meet Sylvanas.
14. -Multi Arrow should look passive.
15. -revenants sleep during the night (Blizzard fault though).
16. -Animate Dead and Summon minions have the same icon. Try diversifying ability icons if they're not supposed to be the same abilities as the one they're based on.
17. -Sylvanas ran out of the frame when meeting Uther. I suggest just hiding heroes that aren't supposed to be in a cinematic scene and unhiding them after the scene ends.
    
18. -Kel'thuzad is too weak. He's an icon character.
19. -I don't think it was necessary to have Uther's forces since it doesn't come with any base. Uther could have just changed owner to Arthas' player and keep colour.
20. -you should find proper FX for abilities. Uther's aura makes you confuse Frost Armour and Arthas' confuse Healing.
21. -I suggest making all troops which are not controlled by an AI who sends them regularly at your base stronger because the Scarlet Monastery units are like killing workers. Think of it as a WoW raid.
    
22. -Uther's Death Pact is useless here. There are no friendly undead units.
23. -no words from Arthas and Renault to each other!?
24. -I suggest making the entrance to the rooms in the monastery way gates. It's annoying to have to click the circles almost with each unit each time.
    
25. -kind of useless to get the val'kyrs and other undead units now when basically only part of Kel'thuzad's base still stands. Also, I don't remember them knowing of the val'kyr, their introduction seems forced.
26. -Sludges sleep
27. -Varok's spells need proper positioning, they don't remain on the same spots after loading the game.
28. -check pathing pressing P in the editor to see gaps between trees: View attachment 310413 It's not the only place.
    
29. -Sylvanas can't get inside boats.
30. -man I thought there would be an Easter Egg with the boat on an island or something.
31. -well, 'thuzad didn't finish saying who did it before he disappeared so how did Varok find out?
32. -why weren't any of the other humans against Uther's stay in the capital?

Spoiler: chap8

1. -the descriptions of the faction choices need a tweak; they're not too nice to read and some words are not where they should be.
2. -meh, this level is pretty much the same as the original but it's a neat gameplay edit somewhat though the humans are the most disadvantaged.
3. -the idle worker icon is still the wisp Well you can't change that for every race sadly.
4. -no faction shops? Melee heroes can't attack air without an orb.
5. -you can resist without problems with the orcs, that was not quite possible in the original campaign from what I remember (or was it only on Hard?)
6. -are the undead flyers supposed to attack the elves and not the closest base? They stand no chance by the way
   
7. -almost permastunning Archimonde with Grom
8. -Arthas can use Retribution but Brox can't use the Avatar spell? All too easy, not even a scratch on my heroes
   
9. -I don't think it was smart to go through the portal because Sargeras could potentially do something against them plus Kil'jaeden and who knows who. But, I guess if the portal is not sealed they can run back.
10. -Broxigar still hasn't got Rage learned and you can't learn it. Gaemplay intention? If yes, you should disable the spell so it won't show up to create confusion.
11. -the spells in Arthas' "spell book" are changing their positions after a game load.
12. -but why does the Twisting Nether look like Draenor?
13. -you can reach the map edges and it doesn't look nice. Should put some pathing blockers in some places so you can't get there.
14. -the requirements for the first quest are not grayed after quest completion (Quest Log).
15. -you should make the Rain of Fire on these Doom Guards much more powerful. Add more armour to them too.
    
16. -we reach Archimonde too fast. There should more interesting stuff going on before that.
17. -why wouldn't the Emerald Dream know Cenarius that he'd have to present himself?
18. -the guardians don't do any damage against divine armour.
19. -I still can't beat him after reviving. There's just too much DPS to heal against and treants are useless. Entangling Roots are useless too, they don't stay more than 1 second on Doom Guards and the rest are magic immune. Broxigar can't use Rage...
    
20. -well, what about the dispute between Arthas and the orcs regarding Thrall?
21. -when did Darion Morgraine appear? He wasn't even in this game/campaign.
22. -many things that have no relation to what happened in the campaign or the previous ones suddenly appear on the screen.
23. -so why is Broxigar having the Ashbringer on the campaign screen?

There's still polishing to be done mostly in what the gameplay is concerned (proper bosses, elite units, diversified hero abilities and human techtrees etc.), difficulty needs to be balanced, story events have to be properly connected. It's more of a 3.25/5 now but I hope you'll enhance it to get to my current rating.

The credits list seems rather short compared to how many resources are shown here: Resources in Use by Arthas Campaign - Orc | HIVE

Approved.

Pictures of things I was referring to:
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So many questions yet I'm a simple man O: haha hm do you preffer that I answer each of your questions and if needed explaine my intentions/agree that it should be fixed and not answer?(upload an updated version later) xD

I've gotten to chapter 6 and I have to say, King Arthas rules! - Both literally and figuratively. I love how he took up the good sword instead of the evil one too.

The preceding chapter was pretty awesome too, though it seemed a little strange seeing Jaina dressed like that. I guess she must've had little time to get dressed in that situation?

If there's one actual complaint I have so far, it's that I'm not liking how the enemy sometimes has an unlimited number of troops that I can never manage to get past without cheating. Particularly when attacking the main enemy base at the end of chapter 4.

I love the character of Arthas too mate, that's how we all got here
I've answered about jaina above, but I don't agree about chapter 4.. I did it easly (about 45 min) with mostly using brox/the aid of my allies and my units.
all you gotta do is aim their barracks once the way is cleared enough.
I've recorded myself playing all the chapters exsept chapter 8, and the video of chapter 4 is about 1 hour. so with some patience it's not hard at all mate

True.

Hey hey, I didn't hear Arthas complain about it at all!

Attack alongside your allies, use Brox as a bait to enemy units and use your other units to destroy the enemy buildings in order to diminish the number of foes you face.

exactly

 

[deepstrasz]

haha hm do you preffer that I answer each of your questions and if needed explaine my intentions/agree that it should be fixed and not answer?(upload an updated version later) xD

Don't waste time on it. Just update the campaign with what you can.