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This is not a cinematic map. That tag does not fit.
1. During cinematic mode/the intro, the camera shows some shots of the map border which looks bad. Avoid that.
2. Messages should pop after the intro ends.
3. Abilities and options are mixed in the spell book.
4. Shouldn't have made the movement icons black because Stop is selected by the game when the hero stands still.
5. You can get stuck between the margins of a broken bridge.
6. Turning around takes too much while something might be attacking you.
7. Some spells just take you far away without knowing where until you reach the place.
8. Controls are very unstable, so is vision/camera which makes orientation confusing. Not sure how are you supposed to fight flying creatures with the current camera.
At the current phase it's pretty much unplayable.
Awaiting Update.
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