The screenshots are too small to be seen.
The loading screen says voidcarrier. At least there's a void word there.
I suggest a detailed guide in the Quest Log which would have a decent visual aspect.
Credit the sounds of the units. Where are they from. Credit everything that's not from the original game. I dare guess they're from the Stronghold game/series?
The terrain needs work as
@Paillan wrote. I understand space is needed for the armies to venture but the units are quite small so more doodads, terrain height and tile variation wouldn't hurt at all.
Running Boots' icon should look like a PASBTN. Use this program to turn it into one if you want:
Button Manager v1.8.2
Same for Auto-Train so you'd not have to write "(Passive)". Same: Camouflage Cloak, Flexible Armour, Heavy Projectile, Charge, Proper Training.
Should Workshops train so many/quickly Rookies?
Spearmen have the same icon as Tunnelers.
Overall an interesting map that lacks presentation.
Set to
Awaiting Update.
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