Wc2/SoC Zeppelin

[Moderator]

08:33, 14th Sep 2010
anarchianbedlam: Sharp looking spikes, looks much better than the ingame zeppelin. Useful and works ingame

Approved

 

[Titania]

Zeppelin!!Can it drop the boat?Kiddin' :> 4/5

 

[JokeMaster]

Loks quite good.The portrait is a goblin?! COOL

 

[PROXY]

Zeppelin!!Can it drop the boat?Kiddin' :> 4/5

Hehe, no Thx

Loks quite good.The portrait is a goblin?! COOL

Thx. Jeah, actually, a zeppelin should be on the actual model also, but I though, it wouldn't be necessery. And speaking about the portrait, I'm adding an "speaking" portrait next days, as I said, I don't have time right now.

 

[JokeMaster]

Yes a speaking goblin captain would be quite interesting.

 

[Zealon]

awesome!!! 4/5

 

[-Peper-]

Cool zeppelin!

 

[ikillforeyou]

lol, 5th zeppelin! let's make a zeppelin wars.

Anyways. nice!

 

[crimson fire]

its nice, nothing else to say

 

[Deolrin]

Okay, just downloaded\checked the model. I've got some critique:
First of all, the wrap. It's horrendous on all the scratch-made parts. The blades stretch out a lot and the motor's back and top parts are completely unwrapped. You should definitely fix that.

The particles look very strange and unrealistic. The purple fire makes no sense to me. The beginning of the particles overlaps the motor. The particles also shake irritatingly, which is immensely annoying to watch(although this might not happen in-game). I suggest you change them a lot more than what you did. For example, check out mine and l0w_kwaliti's Elite Siege Tank. The flamethrower particles are in fact edited from the chaos fel orc. All you gotta do is pick a better\different texture and play with scales\colors\gravity\speed\etc.

The portrait is also rather lacking. You based it on the tinker; why couldn't you keep the talking animation? A change in the angle of the camera could also help make the portrait better. In addition, either a sky or parts of the zeppelin as a background would be best, if you ask me; this teamglow just doesn't work well with the clouds, and a random goblin head in the middle of nowhere just makes ever less sense.

 

[jojoman55]

All I wanna say is that, it is AWESOME!!! Perfect for a cinematic I'm creating, as I can use it as a War Zeppelin and the standard WC3 as a Transport! Thanks so much!

 

[PROXY]

Okay, just downloaded\checked the model. I've got some critique:
First of all, the wrap. It's horrendous on all the scratch-made parts. The blades stretch out a lot and the motor's back and top parts are completely unwrapped. You should definitely fix that.

The particles look very strange and unrealistic. The purple fire makes no sense to me. The beginning of the particles overlaps the motor. The particles also shake irritatingly, which is immensely annoying to watch(although this might not happen in-game). I suggest you change them a lot more than what you did. For example, check out mine and l0w_kwaliti's Elite Siege Tank. The flamethrower particles are in fact edited from the chaos fel orc. All you gotta do is pick a better\different texture and play with scales\colors\gravity\speed\etc.

The portrait is also rather lacking. You based it on the tinker; why couldn't you keep the talking animation? A change in the angle of the camera could also help make the portrait better. In addition, either a sky or parts of the zeppelin as a background would be best, if you ask me; this teamglow just doesn't work well with the clouds, and a random goblin head in the middle of nowhere just makes ever less sense.

Ok, thanks for the review I'll try to fix all things you mentioned.

 

[Windu]

I'd like to see that with a gun or a cannon .... Can u make an armed version ? xD

 

[Kas]

5/5 it made to my game, its awesome, and i may find a use for it!