The Politically Correct Game

[Rufus]

That's all good for a small introduction, but you'll have to elaborate your description a bit more than that.
Take a look at this. It may help you: Description Guide - Maps

 

[PrinceYaser]

Hi, PublicEnemy! I tested your map and my review:

Firstly about the terrain always:

Terrain looks well designed, it is good enough for an altered melee map. Just pay attention to these points:

• You should use of tile variations and design the tiles by mixing them one by one. In the map areas you've just used one or two tile variations. So, please make the tiles look much more mixed.
  
• Placement of trees is not true. You should place them circluar or a shape that would decorating the map as a pretty eye looking (Square or rectangular placement of trees doesn't look beautiful)!
  
• I liked that cave effects! You can do that with all caves.
• It was better that you use raise tool instead of cliffs in the map, but this is not necessary.
• Doodad variations are good, but you could add more of them that fits with the map to make the map look much better.
• I didn't like that flowers! You should really spread decorating doodads like flowers at entire map (Not just in one place).
• Please put grass tile under trees.

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Other points and likes:

• At the Start Locations and at the goldmine areas, I think you should add more space for the player.
• I liked what you did with the edges of the map. You've placed trees to force the players to cut that trees and reach the goldmines.
• I don't understand what are that mountain giants doing on that cliffs??
• The custom units that you made are good in my opinion.

• That's all good for a small introduction, but you'll have to elaborate your description a bit more than that.
  Take a look at this. It may help you: Description Guide - Maps

Agreed with Rufus!


Overall, I rate this map 3.5/5. As an altered melee map, this map is good!
Just believe yourself, mate to create great maps! ( Well, that's my slogan in each reviews of me, lol)

 

[Arthas212]

had to make an account just to say this map made me laugh so hard i almost choked to death

 

[Rufus]

Screenshots are still required.
Other than that, it is a good-looking description.

 

[HappyTauren]

@Ralle Harassment? hmm.

How is that harassment? He's stating he found the game really funny, if anything, it's a compliment.

 

[PrinceYaser]

@Ralle Harassment? hmm.

He has given 5 stars to this map. I don't think this is harassment imo.

 

[fladdermasken]

Oh well it sounded like a mean comment to me but hey i guess im wrong.

Seems to me like this map is a perfect fit for you, The Panda.

 

[PublicEnemy]

Am I missing something?

 

[Shar Dundred]

The Panda tends to bitch about stuff for no/a weird reason - and then he removes his posts as fast as possible to avoid being bashed for it.
Even bitched about people reviewing his resources (keep in mind: He is a reviewer, he of all people should know to appreciate that stuff, but he doesn't).

So, no, you are not missing anything of any particular importance.

 

[deepstrasz]

You need to cut down on the vulgarity of Muslim jokes: it's pretty excessive on Muslims and not terrorists and in comparison with the USA faction, the jokes on the Muslim side are far more vulgar.

Awaiting Update.

 

[Shar Dundred]

You need to cut down on the vulgarity of Muslim jokes

Or improve the USA jokes.

 

[PublicEnemy]

Wtf? After 1 year and almost 3k downloads? Looks like social justice mongoloid army is taking over the internet.

 

[PublicEnemy]

Map is now family friendly, with rainbows and unicorns.

 

[deepstrasz]

"All racial jokes have been removed to please the social justice mongoloid army. *insert standard boring tooltip here*."
on all descriptions.
This is a bad joke not a fix or improvement.

Awaiting Update.

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EDIT:
Alright, this isn't what it was and neither what it is supposed to. However, it was approved before by a mod (whoever that was) so, I'll respect that decision. But, when reports are received, they will be handled.

 

[EarthWormJimmy]

Don't edit your map just so some people who can't take a joke will approve it!

Keep it as is, a joke is a joke. PC will be the death of us.

 

[deepstrasz]

Don't edit your map just so some people who can't take a joke will approve it!

Keep it as is, a joke is a joke. PC will be the death of us.

We are following rules here. If you have something to complain about, use: https://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/staff-contact.692/

 

[The_Silent]

Was this map just created to raise discord like some sort of elaborate trolling?

 

[aeman]

i expect the joke to be poking fun at us political compass but its just one sided haha muslim fuck goat and terrorist joke
dont feed the troll did the joke better