Okay I looked at it a bit, and here are some things you should think about.
*Telar should have a better model that fits the other rouges, or even better the other way around. You are a special bandit group right? They should have a clan tag or something, as well as a colour. There is no need for TC in this, so you could have free-will over how they could look like. Telar's clothes are mostly black, so his team members should have black as well.
*12 members in your team, all with spells is difficult to manage. You have to remember the guy who can do so and so. I think you should bring it down to Telar, A healer/mage, A Cavlaryman, and a big Strong man who can tank, and the rest are just nameless Bandits. Or if you can, make the starter tent produce bandits/mercs, but trigger it so you get different names for your bandits. So what I mean is Make a Bandit, named Steve or something, and another called Bob with similar stats. Make a trigger when this unit is produced, it turns into Bob with 50% chance or Steve with 50% chance.
*Bigger Inventory. You start with 4~5 inventory spaces already filled with stuff. You should get someone to make an inventory system for you, So you can have more space. Also, since all your troops have names, which makes them feel a bit more "special" I think they should all have 1 or 2 inventory space as well. It wouldn't be that hard, just make an upgrade called "Issue Leather Backpacks" or something which gives the inventory space.
*Better story. I saw that Telar will tell me a story, and it shows his beginnings at the Bandit camp. Now I'm sorry if this is wrong, as I didnt put sound on to hear the voice acting, but Suddenly the mage makes a felbeast, then it dies. Later, when it says they need a hero or something, a villager comes up, dies by your bandits. I thought for a moment that I was that guy. I thought maybe thats you, as a young teen/adult, attacked by the Corrupt govent guard thingys, you fall into unconsiousness by the poison and the bandit group patches you up and adopts you. But then the body turned into a skeleton, which kinda left me puzzled, If youre going against the government, why did you let him just die?
Later when you do get to the town, there are Human guards, Felorcs, Undead and later a Deamon force. That made me really puzzled. After I kept going, I saw a mage, a boss, which was running for his life, then flame pillaring, which I could accept. But then he turns to attack my force. I thought maybe he will join the group as another hero or something, but there was no explanation that he is an enemy, so I attacked him unprepared. A lot of these thing should be explained to you, either by Telar, as the narrator, or him in that time.
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Anyway, I died after that, so I really didnt see anything after that. The terrain could do some work, the enemies are a bit random and the story needs to be more explained.
