Storytelling RP: Avataria #2

[sanofa]

Lol.... Pretty strict to me, but oh whatever. I'll just delete the Icon since I'm too lazy to draw Vayne .

PS : My drawings suck very much

 

[Amargaard]

Masken from #1 was not very good at drawing, but that didn't stop him :b

Bad drawings are better than no drawings, in my opinion ^^
Well it's your choice. Vayne's icon is on my list for icons I will draw, but it may take a while before I reach it. Not even finished with Regex' yet ^^

 

[sanofa]

Kewl.

 

[-Peper-]

So here is Rex

Meh, turned fucking awful.
Yeah, yeah I know. Don't comment on those dipshit anime hair and face... Too attached to them. Not much to show on upper body (because the hair took so much space, yes) and FYI the black parts is dragon scales, okay. And don't forget Rex is 500 years after Aaron's time so there is headphones there. It's a hand-drawing, actually.

 

[sanofa]

That is like...awzum!

 

[Amargaard]

Agreed! That's just pure awzumness -Peper-
+rep

 

[Arcisal]

So...
How's everyone?

Oh, and I this is going to be updated soon, soon being at the most two days from now.

The RP forum is pretty dead isn't it?

 

[Amargaard]

Don't know 'bout the other RPs, but Avataria #2 is definitely on the edge of dying :l
There's plenty of activity on the wiki though ^^

I am in progress of making a short post, just to let anyone get an idea of the current situation.

 

[Arcisal]

The RP forum, aside from Avataria, has only one "active" RP right now. It seems like the folks over there and us here are the only ones using the RP forum.

Perhaps we could find a way to increase RP activity?

 

[sanofa]

lol.....
Checking everyday to see whether there are posts...

 

[Arcisal]

Perhaps you could post in KABOOM? Just a short one will do. It's in need of activity!

And I will (eventually) get to edit my page on the Wiki.

The problem is that this is taking up most of my time. I've already doubled the amount of posts in Word, but I plan to release it all in one-shot as to avoid to being released in chunks or sections, stagnating the whole idea of a continuous "choice-story".

Could you do me a favor? Can you just play through the Adventure and try to spot any grammar or spelling mistakes? Thanks in advance (If you do it of course)!

 

[Amargaard]

How can I help other RPs surviving when my own is dying?

Wow, that last post was just very confusing. Did Leo actually leave the camp, find the temple, get teleported to the other dimension and then find Vayne - or was he just an illusion or is Vayne going crazy or something?

 

[clockwork2]

Cool, trying it out arcisal.

 

[sanofa]

Uh, Vayne, got teleported back to Avataria, and landed in somewhere 50 miles to the north from the temple. Leo found him there, and locked him in cell. ( If that cleared your confusion )

EDIT
@ Arcisal : http://www.hiveworkshop.com/forums/2139538-post2.html this page, the third paragraph, As you force your limbs...... You forgot to add you

 

[Arcisal]

Thanks sanofa!

I'll be posting in Avataria as well. Please guys, remember to follow the plan. We need this ending desperately!

 

[sanofa]

I'm almost reaching Vayne's end, about 5 posts more.

EDIT
Can anyone please post on the RP-thread? It feels like being Zombie-fied.

 

[Amargaard]

I have the whole day free tomorrow, so I'll go as far as promising that I will finally write another post in the RP-thread tomorrow

By the way, you guys should really check Vayne's page on the Avataria Wiki. I guaranteee, that you can find all needed information there. My goal is to have many more pages, like this one, and you guys can help..!

 

[clockwork2]

we have a wiki?

 

[-Peper-]

Lol clock you're late.

 

[clockwork2]

Yeeaaa....I got banned from the computer, srry.

 

[Amargaard]

[158] made as promised. It's not a wall of text, with epic battlescenes, but I thought a small informative post could be useful - now all of you should know where all of the good guys are.
They are not actually called "Team Main Base", "Team Hillcrose" and "Team Arena" in the story - but I called them so for us to easier refer to the different parties.

I was trying to imply that the soldiers (And Leo) in the main base doesn't really respect Am'ar as a leader, same way as Talban does - simply because he's an Orc and they are known to be stupid and evil in Avataria.
Leo thus took some of the soldiers from the camp, as seen in sanofa's post and led them away without telling Am'ar.

 

[-Peper-]

By the way, where are we? We haven't even reached the Asorath-turned-bad yet

 

[sanofa]

Aha, nice post Amaar ;D.
Though I thought Leo was an respectful person, but oh well! I'll just have to follow then.
Can someone kindly advance their story? I am eager for the sequel.

 

[Arcisal]

sanofa. Good characters have flaws as well. A kind loving man may be a bitter racist if he wants. That's storytelling for you.

Well yes, I need to read up again.

EDIT: What the? More than one Aaron? Talban assaulting the arena? Who? What?

So guys, what's the plan now. It seems like it totally spiraled out of control.

Oh and Amar, love the artistic object.

 

[Amargaard]

By the way, where are we? We haven't even reached the Asorath-turned-bad yet

Nope, but that will probably happen at Hillcrose Top, so we're closing in

EDIT: What the? More than one Aaron? Talban assaulting the arena? Who? What?

So guys, what's the plan now. It seems like it totally spiraled out of control.

Clock made a post where Aaron got split into four, which resembles his different personalities and powers - I killed one of them, so now they are only three: Original Aaron (The heroic and courageous - earth powers), Blue Aaron (Calm and studious - ice and water powers) and yellow Aaron (panicky but smart - light powers).
Didn't you request yourself that he should attack the arena?

And the plan has changed slightly, though overall we can still keep the same plot that we planned (with some changes of course).

 

[Arcisal]

So right now the only changes are that Aaron is following Asorath to attack the citadel?

Alright. Coolio.

BTW, what of Rex?

 

[Amargaard]

Yup, except that they are heading for Hillcrose Top

Rex is with Talban's forces, along with Kargath and Kareena, which are heading for the Arena

EDIT: Oh come on.. I'm one day from getting the "Two weeks on the wiki" achievement, and I'll leave home (and computer) today -.-

 

[Arcisal]

Rex' good now? Interesting.

 

[clockwork2]

errrmmm.. I have no idea, he's sorta the wanderer of the RP now... IMO atleast.

 

[Amargaard]

I have returned!! .. but not much activity in my absence I see :b

Rex' good now? Interesting.

Perhaps - he is with the good guys, but who knows if he (And his dad who shares same body) have any secret intensions?

 

[Arcisal]

Not much activity in these parts of the forums anyways. RP section is slowly dying.

 

[Ironside]

Haven't posted in quite some time now. I've been doing certain private projects.
I'll make a new post now.

 

[Amargaard]

Great, I'm working on a drawing for my next post :b

 

[Arcisal]

I'm in the hospital.

 

[Kanadaj]

What happened with the OOC system? And tell me, if I have to make a character which represents my avatar, do I have to play a dragon? ^^

 

[sanofa]

yup
a draconian maybe.
the ooc system is preferably not used there as since this thread is what the ooc for. whatever u want to say that has nothing to do with the rp, do it here.

 

[Kanadaj]

Okay, then I'll join the fray, also found the best possible place for me ^^

EDIT: Post made, hope you won't be angry Ironside for joining you, but couldnt stand still and watch you playing by yourself

I am no beginner when it comes to roleplaying, being adventurer and DM in both DnD and the Hungarian-made MAGUS (well it certainly beats DnD in every aspect xD) so I hope I can bring some more excitement and "spice" to the game

EDIT2: Also, a few things about Dracor so you can post him as well:

He is a dragon from another world, where he got enough power to ascend to the realm of gods. He could achieve this by being a rare-brood from one of the most powerful fire dragon and a light-fire dragon hybrid. Because of the ratio and the attribute of his elements (fire emits light as a base attribute, and also if fire represents war, hope (light) is shining the most during wars) he became the guardian of hope and the patron of war at the same time. He also learned to take on a human form, which he prefers to be a young mage's (image in my first RP post)

 

[Amargaard]

Good to have you joining us Kanadaj. I am not gonna post your character in the first post, it's heavily outdated anyway, but you should check out the Avataria RP wiki, where you can start up a page for your character if you want

By the way, haven't red your post yet, will return with a few words when I have

EDIT: Your Avatar Character haven't got a name, thus he is technically not counted as a character yet. Joining Iron's plot was a great idea, and you handled it well - looking forward to seeing some future interaction between the two of you, and later the rest of us.

About your character, he is a draconian, which we have several of already. What they all have in common, is that they are from the same planet. Yours might just as well come from that place. Oh, and secondly, in this RP it is revealed that world-traveling through portals damages the users memory, which matches the text of your post quite nicely. By the way, you can still introduce a Secondary character whenever you want to

If my message above doesn't make sense at all, blame the weed I just smoked

 

[-Peper-]

How many weeds did you smoke in a week? :/

 

[Amargaard]

Smoked monday, friday and today :b

Oh and Kanadaj, will you make an icon for your character?

 

[-Peper-]

Ya smoker.
You know Amar, we can't let the rp dies without have a proper ending. But ending it will be difficult now with decreased activity, so I got an idea. Why don't we all construct a bigass post together (like using PiratePad)? Not necessarily ending it in the next post, but at least covers the most tedious part till the end.
EDIT : Oh btw

being a rare-brood from one of the most powerful fire dragon and a light-fire dragon hybrid

Since he's a draconian to then he's one of Cadaos' descendant right?

 

[Kanadaj]

Ugh, cant rly make an icon, I'm damn bad when it comes to art - I'm stuck at stickman Also, he HAS a name (Dracor), and he is not a draconian, but a fully fledged dragon who is already at the level to change between human and dragon form - you can't think a normal draconian can be powerful enough to handle divine beings like that

 

[Arcisal]

Why don't we all construct a bigass post together (like using PiratePad)? Not necessarily ending it in the next post, but at least covers the most tedious part till the end.

That's actually a pretty good idea. Problem is, we might clash together when making the draft (eg. we all have different ideas of how the ending should happen)

 

[sanofa]

Very nice posts, kanadaj.
Though now I'm managing three RPs(Yea, I know its hard, but I love them all!!!), I'll try to post more than I can, since right now, Eras Zombie Invasion is taking over my time, along with my friends who want play them, or just want to have fun with me I'll try to end Vayne in 4 more posts, and thats the end for Vayne and Leo

 

[Kanadaj]

Added myself and Dracor to the wiki, and extended it with some missing pages

 

[Ironside]

I just made finished Regex on wiki, hope it's how it's supposed to be.

 

[Amargaard]

Ya smoker.
You know Amar, we can't let the rp dies without have a proper ending. But ending it will be difficult now with decreased activity, so I got an idea. Why don't we all construct a bigass post together (like using PiratePad)? Not necessarily ending it in the next post, but at least covers the most tedious part till the end.
EDIT : Oh btw

Yeah, and I'm proud of it! :b
PiratePad? Never heard of it, might work

Ugh, cant rly make an icon, I'm damn bad when it comes to art - I'm stuck at stickman Also, he HAS a name (Dracor), and he is not a draconian, but a fully fledged dragon who is already at the level to change between human and dragon form - you can't think a normal draconian can be powerful enough to handle divine beings like that

Oh right, Dracor ^^
The only other known dragon is Cadaos, which has two draconian sons, Kargath and Rex. Rex, however, can change between draconian and human form as well, even though he's not considered a dragon. Just sayin'
And then there is Aris, who looks like a dragon as well, but I don't know much of his background.

Added myself and Dracor to the wiki, and extended it with some missing pages

Great work, but be sure not to add stuff that has not been revealed in the RP yet - like the picture of his true form. I'm gonna remove that

By the way, her name is Selia. you spelled it wrong

I just made finished Regex on wiki, hope it's how it's supposed to be.

Yeah, that's how it's supposed to be, though it's only a stub, but thanks for helping out

 

[Kanadaj]

Great work, but be sure not to add stuff that has not been revealed in the RP yet - like the picture of his true form. I'm gonna remove that

Sorry, but his true form is already revealed in my second post - you can't demand a dragon to fight in human form against a demi-god

 

[Amargaard]

I mean the artwork. It was never included in any posts ^^

 

[Ironside]

Just finished Auxion now, I'll do Aris next.
I'll leave Selia for some other time.