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I'm interested about making up the story, people and places as I am a modeler myself and I can draw and brainstorm
Btw, where the heck is Nargos now? Zaarnoth?
Btw, where the heck is Nargos now? Zaarnoth?
Exactly. The King "teleported" (shattered) them somewhere else and they escaped to the rebel base with the prisoners.I'm a bit confused that why Leo is being treated instead of continuing the last post which clock said that Vayne, Leo and the others were shattered into pieces, and will rebuilt somewhere. Never mind, I'll go with it.
Wait, why did Kareena and Aina need saving? I thought Aina was with Vayne and Leo?Aaron and Rex is fighting off at the arena, when Rex was took over by Cadaos, and they saved Kareena and Aina.
I did mention Nagros, just not directly. Check my post, he's the guy who Galros summoned through. I mentioned "chin stained with wyvern blood" in one post and in another one, which I wrote long ago, he killed and ate his wyvern to feed himself. Zaarnoth, I'm trying to keep him a bit low-profile.I'm interested about making up the story, people and places as I am a modeler myself and I can draw and brainstorm
Btw, where the heck is Nargos now? Zaarnoth?
@Amargaard: Would you like to collaborate in creating one? It doesn't have to be very big. Some lore, storylines here and there. Maybe some RPing on it, a few maps. But not as bigass as, say, Azeroth. Just a side project which we could work on.
And I still have no idea where Aaron and Kareena are.
Darkness is not just a mere name, he is really the darkness :OWikipedia said:Darkness, in contrast with brightness, is a relative absence of visible light. It is the appearance of black in a color space.
Then I will kill all the rebel with RP-ish way, summoning a giant krakken that swallows the earth in one sentence Just kiddingPeper, if your gonna make that. Then I will kill Darkness in a very unrp way, in other words I'll kill him with just a slash.
Please tell me if you think the text above is hard to understand, and if you have any suggestions how to improve itAmargaard (In the main post) said:(This is the first post of the story, so of course it is also Chapter I. Every fifth post will start a new chapter - next chapter starts at post [5], chapter III starts at post [10], etc. If you make any of these posts, I will ask you to make a Chapter-title like this one, using the roman numerals. Normally you should simply ignore the chapters, normally they have no effect, until you reach chapter V aka chapter 5. At chapter V all roleplayers are allowed to create another secondary character, and again at chapter X aka chapter 10 etc)
I cursed the damn thing, not gave it to him!
Peper, if your gonna make that. Then I will kill Darkness in a very unrp way, in other words I'll kill him with just a slash.
No names please. As I explained before, new names = new characters. You can use ???: "Hi", if you want, though I would personally prefer the "Hi", said the rebel warrior next to me-method. Do whatever you want, but no new names ^^By the way, Amaargard, can make I a few names or should I just give them unknown? Like this ??? ?
Heh, I like the sound of that :bIt's Avataria.
I also personally think Arcisal is rather confusing, a backstory explaining how he ended up this way and how he can control people would be nice.
and how he can control people would be nice.
Aaron felt a odd breeze come around him, it was definitely magical, but was pleasant unlike the magic his foes used. Hrrrmm, he had to make use of his secret aid's gift, he began dive bombing Cadaos and dodging attacks with his newly gained speed.
...but Aaron could see SOMETHING he went up to greet the orc. "Name's Aaron, what's your name?" Aaron asked. "Amaar, keep fighting. No.Time.To.Talk" Amaar said, driving each word with a cleave into a opponent. "Oh really? So you wouldn't be, say a virus would ya?" Aaron said, grabbing a device and hiding it just in case. Something leaped out from Amaar, and Aaron blasted it with his device. "Your now in a containment zone, it's filled with electricity cones, so if you try ANYTHING. You are gonna be virus toast!"
[49]The darkness said, being interrupted by Aaron skewering it to the ground with a javelin of light.
Yes, could do that. I can control people. However, I am bound to Galros. In case you didn't know, my body is permanently within Galros unless something happens, which is unlikely. Besides, can my character sprout wings of light, find an ancient sword or revive from the dead? No. It can't. I only can control creatures, or I used to be able to. So essentially, my main character can't do anything right now.And I don't really know what's overpowered, I mean your primary character can control people!
Yes, I did not play as many games as you did. I did not have a computer until I was 18, which wasn't even my own. And I wasn't actually very attracted to games. I was more attracted to animation and writing and blogging. I spent my time on the computer looking for music, writing down my thoughts, updating my (now dead) blog and chatting with friends. In a nutshell, I had a life. I didn't mindlessly waste hours on my ass playing games. Besides, this is Avataria. You can have some inspiration off it, but what you're doing is copying. And you sound like you'd expect everyone else to know what you're talking about.And I like to get things inspired off of classic games, if it annoys you, then you clearly don't play or do not like them.
The only reason why I hadn't killed all of your characters, despite this being a freeform, meaning no rules, RP is because I would look like an absolute douchebag and ruin a potentially good story and fun.It is the way I create, as such, you will have to either kill my characters, or deal with the way I rp.
You fucking spelt mine and sanofa's wrong.Oh and Amar and Pepper, I love you both. As well as you sonofa and Ironside.
Oh and Amar and Pepper, I love you both. As well as you sonofa and Ironside.
Boo-yaa! If only everyone would cool down their character-creating a little ^^I still got permission to make a character but I won't make one before I killed mine
for the record, I do not think I am the hero. I'm sorry if the way I type makes it seem that way. Sorry if I ruin everyone else's story to make me look like a hero, I just prefer heroic characters over villains.
Care to explain where the hell a "strange magical breeze" came in and helped you "dive bomb" Cadaos with his newly gained speed? And how you could see "something" and managed to capture me whilst I was still in Am'ar? And "javelin of light"? That made me laugh. Sounds like something you took off a video game, like a pokemon move. An explanation on both of these things and the numerous other incidents would be nice as well.
But I wondered if anyone objected my post.
I am going to make a school life story(I think nobody thought of this..... Maybe it was too stupid of an idea?)
Please give me some ideas since I'm quite blank right now, so for now I'll temporarily stop posting(ONLY temporarily, until someone gives me an idea or I thought of one myself)
Lol Arcisal Rex wasn't there, he was with Aaron. And it's Rave not Raze.
I'm suprised how you managed to quickly know all the evil characters' traits and background (I mean, the post about Lilith's banishment was only two sentence and I forgot where I post it)
The strange magical breeze is actually explainable - Kareena, the little girl you know, is specialized in wind-magic, and she was the one enchanting Aaron's movement back then.
But that doesn't change the fact, that these are all overpowered acts.
Yeah, the Rex and Rave part was a little disturbing.
Rex can't possibly be there, so we're kinda unable to continue until Arcisal removes him from the post. And on top of that, Arcisal also forgot post counter and chapter, heh.. - Arcisal, please add "Chapter XXIX" and [140].
Other than that, awesome, is the only word that can describe it
I am going to make a school life story(I think nobody thought of this..... Maybe it was too stupid of an idea?)
Please give me some ideas since I'm quite blank right now, so for now I'll temporarily stop posting(ONLY temporarily, until someone gives me an idea or I thought of one myself)
NO.... wait what?! Are you going to kill all of your characters?!
Oh and next chapter, Chapter XXX (30) at [145], means permission to create new characters for all of us. Dunno, if it's good news though..
In Avataria#3 I might change character-creation-permission to every tenth chapter instead :b
And Amar, Avataria #3? Is the end of Avataria #2 already on the horizon?
Oh and once again, could anyone clarify where everyone is again? In particular Leo, Vayne, Alaina, Kareena, Talban, Am'ar, Aaron and Kargath. I only know Vayne (or Leo, either one) is in that school. And from what I know, Aaron has gone off once again but I can't remember if he took anyone. If anyone could clarify, I can make a temporary graph to show where we all are. Thanks in advance to whoever does it. And Peper and sanofa, sorry about that!
Screw superman, we got ultraman who always pulls off his killing one-hit laser when he's almost got killed. Gosh, where you got that laser ultraman? Weren't you injured? Why don't you pull that move in the beginning before even getting hit from the monster?
/endrant
Make it every 15th instead.
We have to end it with an ending before it dies, lol.Not necessarily, but one day it will of course have to end, one way or another. And yes, I will probably make a sequel, as this and the first version were quite successful
Clock's characters : On the campI would like to know as well, all the good guys are gone :O
Oh and what about Nargos? And that rebel dude you made (Forgot the name), is he in the rebel base at the Wall of Horror?
Google it, the show is fucking lame. It is always like this scheme :Ultraman? Never heard of him, but I think I should only be happy about that.
I got a killing one-hit laser too! >
Ultraman may need to recharge too? :b
We have to end it with an ending before it dies, lol.
Clock's characters : On the camp
Vayne's on the school, dunno about Leo and Aina
Talban 'n friends : Camp
Selia and Regex : Outskirts of the battlefield
Evil characters : Citadel
Google it, the show is fucking lame. It is always like this scheme :
*le wild monster appears*
*ultraman came and fight the monster*
*the monster's so powerful that he almost killed ultraman*
*le ultraman uses laser*
*the monster exploded*
Y U NO use it from the beginning?
Prepare for a wall of text!
Boo-yaa! If only everyone would cool down their character-creating a little ^^
... wait what?! Are you going to kill all of your characters?!
Seems you haven't noticed it yourself - in that case, I must tell you, yes you've acted a lot like a hero in this RP.
Mainly because you've exceeded most other characters' powers greatly. You shouldn't have given the seed of power & Gaia to Aaron, if you ask me.
Secondly, it seems like you are desperately trying to center the entire story around you all the time - I could mention several examples where you made the other characters act strangely in Aaron's presence, making him look like the rebel's boss and the evil forces' main rival.
And heroic characters are awzum, but OP heroic characters are the worst thing a story can have! A good example is the classic Superman - I've always hated this hero more than anything, he's simply too overpowered for my taste. I mean, Superman can do anything (Super strength, Super speed, able to fly, can shoot laser-beams, can blow freezing winds, etc. etc. etc.) he only have one weakness, and manages to always defeat the supervillains one way or another, so there is no excitement in his stories (This is just my opinion about Superman. If any of you guys happen to be huge Superman-fans, please don't be mad at me ^^).
Aaron is on the edge to be like Superman - in other words, you should not invent a single new ability in his magic arsenal. Stick to his current powers, believe me, he has more than enough.
But it seems you are not doing this intentionally, thus I'm simply trying to enlighten you. Don't get this wrong, I'm glad you are in my RP, but yes you should perhaps change your ways of roleplaying a little.
The strange magical breeze is actually explainable - Kareena, the little girl you know, is specialized in wind-magic, and she was the one enchanting Aaron's movement back then.
But that doesn't change the fact, that these are all overpowered acts.
I can continue Vayne's plot a little, if that helps you continue? :b
By the way, please add [137] to your latest post.
Yeah, the Rex and Rave part was a little disturbing.
Rex can't possibly be there, so we're kinda unable to continue until Arcisal removes him from the post. And on top of that, Arcisal also forgot post counter and chapter, heh.. - Arcisal, please add "Chapter XXIX" and [140].
Other than that, awesome, is the only word that can describe it
Oh and next chapter, Chapter XXX (30) at [145], means permission to create new characters for all of us. Dunno, if it's good news though..
In Avataria#3 I might change character-creation-permission to every tenth chapter instead :b
Also, I understand fully, and will try to avoid it. Also Gaia will be weaker when it is fully revived, not sure how, but I'll try and fix it all. Really srry people, In avataria #3 I won't do anything like that. My hero will just use a simple sword and some magical powers, He'll still be named Aaron(cus IMO it's a good hero name). If I annoy you guys too much, then you can kill all my characters. I hope you don't though. Also the sword may be ornate, and he may be particurly skilled. But from now on I won't be dabbling much in artifacts..